2. LUARA’S PIRES BLOG:
• What I thought went well, was Luara documented each and every draft well. Luara
then added a little description, explaining what it is, this would of made it easier for
the examiner. Luara also started her blog from September, so she has more
presentations and work that is done and completed
• However I don’t think she used enough imagery, just video files the blog does not
seem fluent its mainly videos, schedules timing and small descriptions after another .
3. MARIA YOUNES BLOG:
• Maria had great use of presentation explaining when it came to the desired topic.
She also had images of proof of her work and filming which is essential. Maria also
managed to include graphs and storyboards and each one of her video drafts were
done well, Maria used a great deal of information to support her coursework.
• Although Maria has not completed all her work which would cause her to loose
marks.
• Further more both blogs have good use of presentations, they just need to have
completed all the work.
