1. Rising of the darkness
By Jake
Dom and Zoe , who were brother and sister , were playing football by a river.
Dom was just about to score when Zoe stole the ball of him and scored in his
net. He ran over to the ball and wacked it as hard as he could with all his anger.
It went right of the grass and onto the river path. “Go and get it then.” Said
Zoe.
“ All right then.” Groaned Dom. As he was walking down to the river path he
noticed a sign saying WARNING SLIPPERY EDGE.
Zoe started to walk to walk to Dom to see why he’d stopped. As she got closer
she saw the sign and said “ I would not get the ball if I were you it’s pretty
close to the edge.”
“But that’s my new ball.” Said Dom.
“Come on I’ll be fine.”
“ But Dom you can’t swim and how will I save you?”
Dom started to walk towards the ball getting closer and closer to the ball. But
as he reached out he slipped on some wet moss and SPLASH!!! He fell in.
Luckily there was some rope on the side of the wall so he grabbed it but it was
very slippery. He could just about hang on. Zoe started to shout for help but
nobody was there. All she could see was an old crooked house she started
running towards it. She knocked on the door but there was no answer. She sat
on the door step crying. Meanwhile, Dom could feel the currents on his legs
and his hands start to slip.
The door started to creak open and Zoe stopped crying. She ran into the old
house hoping someone would be there. But there was nothing. She started to
feel a tingling sensation down her spine. She was seeing things too. All of a
sudden she started to feel hands clutching her red cheeks tighter and tighter.
The last thing Dom heard was a scream and it was such a frightening scream
that his body went limp and he let go of the rope.