You're off to a great start! A couple of comments: -- Capitalize your film's title in the first paragraph. Be aware of grammar generally. -- You could consider expanding/adding to your paper director/actor bios, cinematography, editing, music, sound, the film's influence on other films and what was the social context of the film, meaning how did it reflect its time period. -- You may want to add a few more references. Otherwise, it's developing wonderfully. .