Narrative: Using the five
senses
What am I learning?
•I can write a short narrative paragraph
that includes descriptions of a character, a
setting, and an event using at least two of
the five senses.
Compare the two
Exemplary Response:
Once upon a time in a vibrant forest, a kind fairy named Lila fluttered her delicate wings, which sparkled
like the morning dew. The sun shone brightly, casting a warm golden glow over the lush green leaves.
Lila's favorite time of day was when the flowers bloomed, filling the air with a sweet, honey-like scent that
danced in the gentle breeze.
One day, Lila decided to help a lost rabbit named Benny. Benny's soft, fluffy fur felt like a warm hug, and
his big, round eyes glistened with worry. As Lila approached him, she could hear the rustling of leaves
and the cheerful chirping of birds, creating a symphony of sounds that made her heart smile.
Together, they ventured deeper into the woods, where they discovered a hidden clearing. The grass was
cool and inviting under their feet, and the colorful wildflowers swayed gently, whispering secrets of the
forest. With each step, Lila and Benny felt the magic of friendship growing, as bright as the sun above
them.
Non-Exemplary Response:
Once there was a fairy and a rabbit. The fairy was nice and the rabbit was lost. They went through the
forest. The forest was big and had trees. The fairy helped the rabbit. They found a place and were friends.
The sun was shining. The rabbit was soft. They walked a lot. It was good. Then they were happy. The end.
The five senses
What are the five senses, and how do
they help us experience the world?
• Riddle 3:
I crackle and pop, a delight to behold,
I’m often enjoyed when the weather is cold.
My scent is delicious, buttery and rich,
What am I, that makes movie nights a hit?
• Answer: Popcorn
• Riddle 1:
I’m soft and cozy, a favorite at night,
With a gentle embrace, I hold you tight.
I smell like fresh linen, inviting and warm,
What am I, that keeps you safe from harm?
• Answer: Blanket
• Riddle 2:
I’m bright and cheerful, filling the air,
My colors are vibrant, beyond compare.
You can taste my sweetness, a burst on your tongue,
What am I, that’s loved by the old and the young?
• Answer: Candy
• I’m round and smooth, with a hard, shiny skin,
My color varies, from green to deep crimson.
Bite into me, and you’ll taste a crisp cheer,
What am I, that’s often found in a sphere?
• Answer: Apple
• Riddle 5:
I’m hot and steaming, often served with a spoon,
My fragrance is savory, like a warm afternoon.
I can be hearty or light, depending on the blend,
What am I, that’s perfect for a friend?
• Answer: Soup
Explain each of the five senses and provide examples of
sensory details for each.
o Sight: "The tall, dark trees swayed in the wind."
o Sound: "The crackling of leaves underfoot echoed in the quiet."
o Smell: "The sweet aroma of cookies filled the air."
o Taste: "The sourness of the lemon made her pucker."
o Touch: "The rough bark of the tree scratched her palm."
Beach Scene
Beach Scene
It is a sunny day at the beach. The sky is blue, and there are a few fluffy
white clouds. The sun shines brightly and warms your skin.
You can hear the sound of waves crashing on the shore. The water is clear
and blue. Some people are swimming, while others are playing in the sand.
Children build sandcastles with buckets and shovels.
The sand is soft and warm under your feet. You can feel the cool breeze
from the ocean. It smells salty and fresh.
Nearby, there are colourful umbrellas, and families are having picnics.
Some people are playing beach volleyball, and others are relaxing with
books.
In the distance, you can see seagulls flying and calling out. The beach is a
happy place where everyone enjoys the sun, sand, and sea.

Using the 5 senses in narrative writing.

  • 1.
  • 2.
    What am Ilearning? •I can write a short narrative paragraph that includes descriptions of a character, a setting, and an event using at least two of the five senses.
  • 3.
    Compare the two ExemplaryResponse: Once upon a time in a vibrant forest, a kind fairy named Lila fluttered her delicate wings, which sparkled like the morning dew. The sun shone brightly, casting a warm golden glow over the lush green leaves. Lila's favorite time of day was when the flowers bloomed, filling the air with a sweet, honey-like scent that danced in the gentle breeze. One day, Lila decided to help a lost rabbit named Benny. Benny's soft, fluffy fur felt like a warm hug, and his big, round eyes glistened with worry. As Lila approached him, she could hear the rustling of leaves and the cheerful chirping of birds, creating a symphony of sounds that made her heart smile. Together, they ventured deeper into the woods, where they discovered a hidden clearing. The grass was cool and inviting under their feet, and the colorful wildflowers swayed gently, whispering secrets of the forest. With each step, Lila and Benny felt the magic of friendship growing, as bright as the sun above them. Non-Exemplary Response: Once there was a fairy and a rabbit. The fairy was nice and the rabbit was lost. They went through the forest. The forest was big and had trees. The fairy helped the rabbit. They found a place and were friends. The sun was shining. The rabbit was soft. They walked a lot. It was good. Then they were happy. The end.
  • 4.
    The five senses Whatare the five senses, and how do they help us experience the world?
  • 5.
    • Riddle 3: Icrackle and pop, a delight to behold, I’m often enjoyed when the weather is cold. My scent is delicious, buttery and rich, What am I, that makes movie nights a hit? • Answer: Popcorn
  • 6.
    • Riddle 1: I’msoft and cozy, a favorite at night, With a gentle embrace, I hold you tight. I smell like fresh linen, inviting and warm, What am I, that keeps you safe from harm? • Answer: Blanket
  • 7.
    • Riddle 2: I’mbright and cheerful, filling the air, My colors are vibrant, beyond compare. You can taste my sweetness, a burst on your tongue, What am I, that’s loved by the old and the young? • Answer: Candy
  • 8.
    • I’m roundand smooth, with a hard, shiny skin, My color varies, from green to deep crimson. Bite into me, and you’ll taste a crisp cheer, What am I, that’s often found in a sphere? • Answer: Apple
  • 9.
    • Riddle 5: I’mhot and steaming, often served with a spoon, My fragrance is savory, like a warm afternoon. I can be hearty or light, depending on the blend, What am I, that’s perfect for a friend? • Answer: Soup
  • 10.
    Explain each ofthe five senses and provide examples of sensory details for each. o Sight: "The tall, dark trees swayed in the wind." o Sound: "The crackling of leaves underfoot echoed in the quiet." o Smell: "The sweet aroma of cookies filled the air." o Taste: "The sourness of the lemon made her pucker." o Touch: "The rough bark of the tree scratched her palm."
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  • 12.
    Beach Scene It isa sunny day at the beach. The sky is blue, and there are a few fluffy white clouds. The sun shines brightly and warms your skin. You can hear the sound of waves crashing on the shore. The water is clear and blue. Some people are swimming, while others are playing in the sand. Children build sandcastles with buckets and shovels. The sand is soft and warm under your feet. You can feel the cool breeze from the ocean. It smells salty and fresh. Nearby, there are colourful umbrellas, and families are having picnics. Some people are playing beach volleyball, and others are relaxing with books. In the distance, you can see seagulls flying and calling out. The beach is a happy place where everyone enjoys the sun, sand, and sea.