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2nd DRAFT                 “THE UNKNOWN”

                        By Hannah Butters



Time    Location           Video                    Audio

       N/A         Opening titles,          Non-diegetic eerie
 3                 including production     string music.
secs               and actors credits (on
                   a black background).
     The North     A view of a classroom    Same music continues.
 2   Block         through the window in
secs corridor,     the North Block
     The Beacon    corridor. Credits
     School        continue to show; they
                   are layered on top of
                   the visual.
     A desolate    A dusty desk and         Same music continues.
 2   classroom,    tucked in chair. A
secs The Beacon    solitary pen sits
     School        still on top the
                   wooden desk. The room
                   is in darkness apart
                   from the natural
                   lighting that streaks
                   in through the window,
                   illuminating the desk
                   and chair.
     A desolate    An old pile of books.    Same music continues.
 2   classroom,    Credits continue to be
secs The Beacon    displayed
     School
 3   A desolate    A door slams.            Creaking and banging
secs classroom,                             of the slamming door.
     The Beacon                             Eerie music abruptly
     School                                 stops.
 3   N/A           The Main Title – THE     Ghost radar SFX
secs               UNKNOWN
 2   Outside       GRACE’S eyes.            GRACE: Is it on? Are
secs the                                    you recording?
     entrance
     to The                                 SOPHIE: Oops! Hang
     Beacon                                 on! It’s zoomed right
 2   School        SOPHIE zooms out on      into your face. Let
secs               the camera so GRACE      me just zoom out…
                   and ERIN are fully in
 10                shot.                    GRACE: Oh cheers
secs                                        Sophie!

                                            SOPHIE: Well, we can
                                            edit that bit out,
2nd DRAFT          “THE UNKNOWN”

                 By Hannah Butters

                                     don’t worry!

                                     GRACE: Ready?

                                     SOPHIE: Yep, ok when
                                     you’re ready…

 8          GRACE looks directly     GRACE: Ok, so the
secs        into the camera. ERIN    time is 10.18 pm and
            stands beside her.       we are just about to
                                     break into the school
                                     to spend a night in
                                     the supposedly
                                     haunted east wing!

            ERIN shows the camera    ERIN: So yeah, we got
            her rucksack.            the stuff; Torch,
                                     sleeping bag, that
                                     sort of thing!

                                     SOPHIE: So should we
                                     head in?

            ERIN and GRACE start     GRACE: The gates
 6          walking towards the      should be just round
secs        building, SOPHIE         the back here…
            follows with the
            camera.

            The girls reach the      ERIN: Ok, so you
            back gates.              expect us to climb
                                     that?

 5          GRACE attempts to lift   GRACE: Yeah, come
secs        ERIN onto the gate,      here and I’ll give
            but is clearly           you a boost.
            struggling.
                                     SOPHIE can you help
                                     please?

                                     SOPHIE: I have a
                                     camera in my hand!

                                     GRACE: Yeah well,
                                     switch it off for the
                                     minute and give me a
                                     hand.
            The camera switches
            off.
2nd DRAFT     “THE UNKNOWN”

            By Hannah Butters

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THE UNKNOWN script - 2nd draft

  • 1. 2nd DRAFT “THE UNKNOWN” By Hannah Butters Time Location Video Audio N/A Opening titles, Non-diegetic eerie 3 including production string music. secs and actors credits (on a black background). The North A view of a classroom Same music continues. 2 Block through the window in secs corridor, the North Block The Beacon corridor. Credits School continue to show; they are layered on top of the visual. A desolate A dusty desk and Same music continues. 2 classroom, tucked in chair. A secs The Beacon solitary pen sits School still on top the wooden desk. The room is in darkness apart from the natural lighting that streaks in through the window, illuminating the desk and chair. A desolate An old pile of books. Same music continues. 2 classroom, Credits continue to be secs The Beacon displayed School 3 A desolate A door slams. Creaking and banging secs classroom, of the slamming door. The Beacon Eerie music abruptly School stops. 3 N/A The Main Title – THE Ghost radar SFX secs UNKNOWN 2 Outside GRACE’S eyes. GRACE: Is it on? Are secs the you recording? entrance to The SOPHIE: Oops! Hang Beacon on! It’s zoomed right 2 School SOPHIE zooms out on into your face. Let secs the camera so GRACE me just zoom out… and ERIN are fully in 10 shot. GRACE: Oh cheers secs Sophie! SOPHIE: Well, we can edit that bit out,
  • 2. 2nd DRAFT “THE UNKNOWN” By Hannah Butters don’t worry! GRACE: Ready? SOPHIE: Yep, ok when you’re ready… 8 GRACE looks directly GRACE: Ok, so the secs into the camera. ERIN time is 10.18 pm and stands beside her. we are just about to break into the school to spend a night in the supposedly haunted east wing! ERIN shows the camera ERIN: So yeah, we got her rucksack. the stuff; Torch, sleeping bag, that sort of thing! SOPHIE: So should we head in? ERIN and GRACE start GRACE: The gates 6 walking towards the should be just round secs building, SOPHIE the back here… follows with the camera. The girls reach the ERIN: Ok, so you back gates. expect us to climb that? 5 GRACE attempts to lift GRACE: Yeah, come secs ERIN onto the gate, here and I’ll give but is clearly you a boost. struggling. SOPHIE can you help please? SOPHIE: I have a camera in my hand! GRACE: Yeah well, switch it off for the minute and give me a hand. The camera switches off.
  • 3. 2nd DRAFT “THE UNKNOWN” By Hannah Butters