Thinking Of You

                               by

                         Hannah Butters




Alpha Entertainment © 2011
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       FADE IN.                                            D1

       INT. BEDROOM - EARLY MORNING.
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       MARY (20) awakes from her slumber wearily. She sits down at a
       dressing table and places a crucifix necklace round her neck,
2/6    gazing at a photo of a young man attached to the wooden frame
       of the mirror. Noticing the time, she quickly begins to pre-
       pare herself for the day ahead, applying make up and brushing
       her hair.

       INT. KITCHEN - LATER THAT MORNING.
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       Mary, dressed in a dark floor-length domestic dress, walks in-
       to the kitchen to find her daughter RUTH (6), also in a little
       dark dress, standing on a chair throwing ingredients such as
       flour and butter into a mixing bowl. The kitchen is a mess.
       Utensils litter the surfaces and the counter and Ruth‟s face
       and apron are all coated in flour. Shocked, Mary, moves to-
       wards Ruth and takes her off the chair, wiping the flour off
       her eyes. She surveys the kitchen, then gives Ruth a hard look
       of disapproval. Grabbing her wrist Mary leads Ruth towards the
       door.

                              MARY
                       [pushing RUTH away]
 4/6                    Go to your room.

       Noticing the time on the clock, Mary rushes round the kitchen,
       putting appliances back into cupboards and shoving used pots,
       pans and utensils into the sink. She starts to wipe the sur-
       faces clean. The door opens slowly. Ruth creeps back into the
       room carrying a box of crayons and a stack of coloured card
       paper. Sitting down at the kitchen table, she begins to ar-
       range and organize the coloured pencils. She shakes the box
       and bits of crayon and rubber shavings fall out. Mary watches
       from the sink. Ruth sharpens pencils and brushes the mess
       across the table. Whilst drawing and colouring, she starts
       humming the tune of „Happy Birthday‟ under her breath. Notic-
       ing this, Mary strides over to her. Ruth is writing the text
       “Happy Birthday”.

                               MARY
                     [uncontrollably shouting]
                        Ruth, he‟s gone! I‟m sorry
                  but he‟s never coming back!

       Ruth stares up at her with eyes welling. She collects up her
       crayons and card and runs out the room. Mary returns to the
       sink, harshly scrubbing plates and pans in bubbly water.            6/6
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             EXT. FRONT DOOR - LUNCHTIME
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             A middle aged female SOCIAL WORKER, dressed in smart attire,
1/6          rings the doorbell. She walks through the door and it shuts
             behind her.

             INT. LIVING ROOM - LUNCHTIME
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             Fresh tea steams from the mugs on the small coffee table in
             the middle of the room. A tray of cakes and finger sandwiches
             lie next to the drinks. The Social Worker sits down on the so-
             fa opposite Mary and Ruth.

                                   SOCIAL WORKER
                            So, how are you managing?

                                        MARY
                              [fumbling with her hands]
                                        Okay.

                                   SOCIAL WORKER
                            Good. And how‟s little Ruth?
                      Is she coping okay?

          The Social Worker smiles at Ruth, who looks down at her hands
          shyly.

                                        RUTH
                                        Yes

          Mary grabs hold of Ruth‟s hand and squeezes it lightly.

                                  SOCIAL WORKER
                             And how much have you have
    5/6               you managed to save so far? [she
                      scribbles notes on a pad of lined
                      paper]

             Mary slowly shakes her head.

                                  SOCIAL WORKER
                            Right... well I need to take
                      down some notes...

                                      MARY
                          I‟m trying...But I can never
                      keep hold of the money.[pause] I can
                      only work a few hours [pause] at the
                      local shop whilst Ruth...whilst
                      Ruth...[pause]is at school...And
                      even then the pay isn‟t enough to
                      fund two people for a week.
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              [trying to find the words] Ruth
              seems to keep ruining her clothes...
              which I can no longer afford to re-
              place. Then there‟s food costs and
              the appliance bills [she breaks down
              into tears].

      The Social Worker hands Mary a hanker-chief as Ruth cuddles up
      to her mother and kissed her cheek.                              6/6
      EXT. WINCHELSEA BEACH. THE LIFEBOAT HOUSE - EARLY EVENING.
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      Mary walks hand in hand with Ruth across a rural landscape un-
      til they reach the wooden lifeboat house. Ruth breaks away
      from her hold and runs down to the sea as Mary places a bou-
      quet of flowers and a note “thinking of you” alongside the de-
      solate structure. At the beach the waves crash onto the shore.
6/6   Ruth clutches the now complete birthday card with a drawing of
      her and her Dad on the front. Mary walks down to join her and
      pulls a glass bottle from a bag. She hands it to Ruth who
      rolls up the card and places it inside the bottle. She then
      drops it into the waves, and they both watch it drift out to
      sea as it‟s becomes swallowed by the tide. Mary kisses the top
      of Ruth‟s head.

Annotated script

  • 1.
    Thinking Of You by Hannah Butters Alpha Entertainment © 2011
  • 3.
    1 FADE IN. D1 INT. BEDROOM - EARLY MORNING. 1 1 MARY (20) awakes from her slumber wearily. She sits down at a dressing table and places a crucifix necklace round her neck, 2/6 gazing at a photo of a young man attached to the wooden frame of the mirror. Noticing the time, she quickly begins to pre- pare herself for the day ahead, applying make up and brushing her hair. INT. KITCHEN - LATER THAT MORNING. 2 2 Mary, dressed in a dark floor-length domestic dress, walks in- to the kitchen to find her daughter RUTH (6), also in a little dark dress, standing on a chair throwing ingredients such as flour and butter into a mixing bowl. The kitchen is a mess. Utensils litter the surfaces and the counter and Ruth‟s face and apron are all coated in flour. Shocked, Mary, moves to- wards Ruth and takes her off the chair, wiping the flour off her eyes. She surveys the kitchen, then gives Ruth a hard look of disapproval. Grabbing her wrist Mary leads Ruth towards the door. MARY [pushing RUTH away] 4/6 Go to your room. Noticing the time on the clock, Mary rushes round the kitchen, putting appliances back into cupboards and shoving used pots, pans and utensils into the sink. She starts to wipe the sur- faces clean. The door opens slowly. Ruth creeps back into the room carrying a box of crayons and a stack of coloured card paper. Sitting down at the kitchen table, she begins to ar- range and organize the coloured pencils. She shakes the box and bits of crayon and rubber shavings fall out. Mary watches from the sink. Ruth sharpens pencils and brushes the mess across the table. Whilst drawing and colouring, she starts humming the tune of „Happy Birthday‟ under her breath. Notic- ing this, Mary strides over to her. Ruth is writing the text “Happy Birthday”. MARY [uncontrollably shouting] Ruth, he‟s gone! I‟m sorry but he‟s never coming back! Ruth stares up at her with eyes welling. She collects up her crayons and card and runs out the room. Mary returns to the sink, harshly scrubbing plates and pans in bubbly water. 6/6
  • 4.
    2 EXT. FRONT DOOR - LUNCHTIME 3 3 A middle aged female SOCIAL WORKER, dressed in smart attire, 1/6 rings the doorbell. She walks through the door and it shuts behind her. INT. LIVING ROOM - LUNCHTIME 4 4 Fresh tea steams from the mugs on the small coffee table in the middle of the room. A tray of cakes and finger sandwiches lie next to the drinks. The Social Worker sits down on the so- fa opposite Mary and Ruth. SOCIAL WORKER So, how are you managing? MARY [fumbling with her hands] Okay. SOCIAL WORKER Good. And how‟s little Ruth? Is she coping okay? The Social Worker smiles at Ruth, who looks down at her hands shyly. RUTH Yes Mary grabs hold of Ruth‟s hand and squeezes it lightly. SOCIAL WORKER And how much have you have 5/6 you managed to save so far? [she scribbles notes on a pad of lined paper] Mary slowly shakes her head. SOCIAL WORKER Right... well I need to take down some notes... MARY I‟m trying...But I can never keep hold of the money.[pause] I can only work a few hours [pause] at the local shop whilst Ruth...whilst Ruth...[pause]is at school...And even then the pay isn‟t enough to fund two people for a week.
  • 5.
    3 [trying to find the words] Ruth seems to keep ruining her clothes... which I can no longer afford to re- place. Then there‟s food costs and the appliance bills [she breaks down into tears]. The Social Worker hands Mary a hanker-chief as Ruth cuddles up to her mother and kissed her cheek. 6/6 EXT. WINCHELSEA BEACH. THE LIFEBOAT HOUSE - EARLY EVENING. 5 5 Mary walks hand in hand with Ruth across a rural landscape un- til they reach the wooden lifeboat house. Ruth breaks away from her hold and runs down to the sea as Mary places a bou- quet of flowers and a note “thinking of you” alongside the de- solate structure. At the beach the waves crash onto the shore. 6/6 Ruth clutches the now complete birthday card with a drawing of her and her Dad on the front. Mary walks down to join her and pulls a glass bottle from a bag. She hands it to Ruth who rolls up the card and places it inside the bottle. She then drops it into the waves, and they both watch it drift out to sea as it‟s becomes swallowed by the tide. Mary kisses the top of Ruth‟s head.