Exam
 Why are some directors driven to write their 
own scripts? 
 Frustration at the time taken having to wait 
for other opportunities.
 You shouldn’t make an intense character 
study if you are scared of what? 
 Actors.
 What should you be careful of if you only 
have 5k to make your film? 
 High action/drama (e.g. car chases).
 If a feature film might be described as a 
novella, how might a short be described? 
 A Hiatus.
 What are the length boundaries different film 
festivals stipulate in their short sections? 
 They stipulate between 10-20 minutes.
 If the function of your short is to make your 
audience laugh, how long should it be? 
 Between 2-3 minutes.
 What are the three basic elements any kind of 
dramatic story requires? 
 A World 
 A Character 
 A Problem
 Why can it be useful to set your film around a 
familiar event/ritual? 
 The audience may already have basic 
knowledge involving the event. 
 The issues/themes felt by the audience can 
be put forward towards the short. 
 Dramatic tension and story events are 
created.
 Why can a literal journey be a good setting 
for a short film? 
 The story takes the character on an emotional 
journey. 
 The setting works well.
 What are the 5 most important questions to 
ask when you begin to develop your story? 
 Who is your main character? 
 What is their problem? 
 How will the audience recognise the problem? 
 Are the stakes high enough? 
 Am I telling the story from the best point of 
view?
 One of three things must drive your character 
through the story. What are they? 
 A want 
 A need 
 An obligation
 What crucially must accompany this element? 
 Barriers towards the character reaching it. 
 External obstacles are in the way. 
 If there is no problem, there is no film.
 Why are a lot of short films about children 
and teenagers? 
 The lack of experience associated with 
children and teenagers is recognised to all 
audiences.
 What is one of the most important ways that 
you can demonstrate your skill as a 
filmmaker and not just a storyteller? 
 The direction of what the characters are 
doing. 
 Characters into problem.
 What does ensuring that something is at 
stake in the story mean the audience can do? 
 Make them think “what can we loose”. 
 Understanding why the journey really 
matters.
 How can a different POV change a story? 
 The audience sees the story from a different 
perspective. 
 How the problem is displayed is different. 
 This can either strengthen or weaken the 
story.
 Why do many short film scripts fall down? 
 Establishing a character is a difficult task. 
 Script writers often move on to another 
character without establishing another.
 Why does an awareness of the meaning 
inherent in your story matter? 
 There is only time for one clear message to 
be made. 
 It helps the script writer make the choices he 
wants to make.
 What is tone intimately connected to and 
what are the implications of this? 
 Tone is intimately connected to the genre. 
 It is important to think about what kind of 
film you are writing in broad terms. 
 Genre is less of an issue in shorts than in 
features.
 How does tone emerge in a film? 
 Through the underlying elements, which work 
together. 
 Examples of elements include lighting,
 What is a common flaw of most short scripts 
submitted for funding? 
 They have not had enough drafting, so it is 
not yet worthy of funding.
 What is the ten point plan to test the spine of your 
story? 
 Title 
 Genre/tone 
 Setting 
 Main Character 
 A want, a need and an obligation 
 Opposition 
 Catalyst for change 
 Climax 
 Resolution 
 Theme
 What point does Marilyn Milgrom make about 
unity? 
 Each scene should help develop the story.
 How can we make sure that what happens in 
the end could not have happened earlier? 
 Each scene must move the story on.
 What is the step outline and what does it 
ensure? 
 One sentence summarising what happens. 
 What is revealed that is significant to the plot. 
 What is revealed that is significant to the 
audience’s understanding. 
 Check you have no slack in your film.
 Every scene of significant action should 
deliver something on at least two out of three 
possible fronts. What are these fronts? 
 A plot 
 A character 
 A theme
 What is signified by the “order” in which to 
tell the story? 
 A beginning 
 A middle 
 An end
 What do audiences instinctively know? 
 Whether something is pretentious or 
dishonest.
 As a writer what is the crucial thing you are 
looking to ensure? 
 Keeping the audience engaged with a story 
that has meaning.
 How do we establish the world and the 
character? 
 Through maximum speed, and minimal 
dialogue.
 What advice is given for making the film cinematic once you have 
a good story? 
 Establish a world and character. 
 Use visuals and sound; sound is able to suggest a world outside 
the frame you can’t afford to shoot and enhance the impact of 
your story. 
 Establish a consistent tone. 
 Keep an active main character (make choices, do things that 
allows us to understand them). 
 Show character changes, via relationships, props, etc., instead of 
through dialogue. 
 Use cinematic devices, which can build tension and moves the 
story forward with maximum economy) 
 Revise your step outline to check that all significant things 
created manifest to your audience in the most visual way 
possible.
 What final advice is given for ensuring that a 
short is more cinematic, less televisual in 
feel? 
 Leave writing the dialogue until last, and keep 
it minimal.
 Who is the first audience of your film? 
 A reader of the script.
 How can you help the reader see the film you are 
intending and not get irritated? 
 Follow screenwriting conventions 
(http://www.scriptfactory.co.uk/ ) 
 Familiarise yourself with scripts 
(www.scriptpimp.com, www.script-o-rama.com ) 
 Avoid writing camera directions 
 Avoid writing things the audience cannot see 
◦ (What you see is what you get) 
◦ (What you hear is what you get)
 Why is simple a useful descriptor for your 
short? 
 It can make a big impression if told with 
cinematic flair.
 Name some of Daniel Mulloy’s shorts and the 
awards they have won? 
 He has won a BAFTA Cymru Award for his first 
film, Dance Floor, for best newcomer. 
 His second film, Sister (2005), was awarded the 
ARTE Grand Prix in Hamburg and another BAFTA. 
 Antonio’s Breakfast won the Short Film BAFTA in 
2006. 
 Dad (2006), premiered in the Edinburgh Film 
Festival.
 Compare/contrast Antonio’s Breakfast with 
Dad. 
 Antonio’s Breakfast is shot in one location, as 
Mulloy knew money was non-existent. 
 Dad was also shot in one location, but as the 
antidote to Antonio’s Breakfast; the 
characters were almost in reverse. 
 The main protagonist was a middle aged man 
in Dad, which contrasts with the young man 
focused on in Antonio’s Breakfast.
 Explain what Mulloy is “aware” of and has a 
“strong sense” of when developing his 
scripts. 
 He is aware that only minimal funds are 
available. 
 He does not depend on the producer to pick 
up scripts. 
 He has a strong sense of what needs to be 
communicated.
 What does Neil Hunter suggest is the best 
way to tackle a short which covers a lot of 
ground? 
 Covering ground has to be part of the point 
and part of its style.
 What idea did the short film The Sickie 
develop from? 
 A character overhears the voiceover of the 
film he’s in. 
 The script keeps things simple, direct, funny, 
short and with a point.

The Script Exam

  • 1.
  • 2.
     Why aresome directors driven to write their own scripts?  Frustration at the time taken having to wait for other opportunities.
  • 3.
     You shouldn’tmake an intense character study if you are scared of what?  Actors.
  • 4.
     What shouldyou be careful of if you only have 5k to make your film?  High action/drama (e.g. car chases).
  • 5.
     If afeature film might be described as a novella, how might a short be described?  A Hiatus.
  • 6.
     What arethe length boundaries different film festivals stipulate in their short sections?  They stipulate between 10-20 minutes.
  • 7.
     If thefunction of your short is to make your audience laugh, how long should it be?  Between 2-3 minutes.
  • 8.
     What arethe three basic elements any kind of dramatic story requires?  A World  A Character  A Problem
  • 9.
     Why canit be useful to set your film around a familiar event/ritual?  The audience may already have basic knowledge involving the event.  The issues/themes felt by the audience can be put forward towards the short.  Dramatic tension and story events are created.
  • 10.
     Why cana literal journey be a good setting for a short film?  The story takes the character on an emotional journey.  The setting works well.
  • 11.
     What arethe 5 most important questions to ask when you begin to develop your story?  Who is your main character?  What is their problem?  How will the audience recognise the problem?  Are the stakes high enough?  Am I telling the story from the best point of view?
  • 12.
     One ofthree things must drive your character through the story. What are they?  A want  A need  An obligation
  • 13.
     What cruciallymust accompany this element?  Barriers towards the character reaching it.  External obstacles are in the way.  If there is no problem, there is no film.
  • 14.
     Why area lot of short films about children and teenagers?  The lack of experience associated with children and teenagers is recognised to all audiences.
  • 15.
     What isone of the most important ways that you can demonstrate your skill as a filmmaker and not just a storyteller?  The direction of what the characters are doing.  Characters into problem.
  • 16.
     What doesensuring that something is at stake in the story mean the audience can do?  Make them think “what can we loose”.  Understanding why the journey really matters.
  • 17.
     How cana different POV change a story?  The audience sees the story from a different perspective.  How the problem is displayed is different.  This can either strengthen or weaken the story.
  • 18.
     Why domany short film scripts fall down?  Establishing a character is a difficult task.  Script writers often move on to another character without establishing another.
  • 19.
     Why doesan awareness of the meaning inherent in your story matter?  There is only time for one clear message to be made.  It helps the script writer make the choices he wants to make.
  • 20.
     What istone intimately connected to and what are the implications of this?  Tone is intimately connected to the genre.  It is important to think about what kind of film you are writing in broad terms.  Genre is less of an issue in shorts than in features.
  • 21.
     How doestone emerge in a film?  Through the underlying elements, which work together.  Examples of elements include lighting,
  • 22.
     What isa common flaw of most short scripts submitted for funding?  They have not had enough drafting, so it is not yet worthy of funding.
  • 23.
     What isthe ten point plan to test the spine of your story?  Title  Genre/tone  Setting  Main Character  A want, a need and an obligation  Opposition  Catalyst for change  Climax  Resolution  Theme
  • 24.
     What pointdoes Marilyn Milgrom make about unity?  Each scene should help develop the story.
  • 25.
     How canwe make sure that what happens in the end could not have happened earlier?  Each scene must move the story on.
  • 26.
     What isthe step outline and what does it ensure?  One sentence summarising what happens.  What is revealed that is significant to the plot.  What is revealed that is significant to the audience’s understanding.  Check you have no slack in your film.
  • 27.
     Every sceneof significant action should deliver something on at least two out of three possible fronts. What are these fronts?  A plot  A character  A theme
  • 28.
     What issignified by the “order” in which to tell the story?  A beginning  A middle  An end
  • 29.
     What doaudiences instinctively know?  Whether something is pretentious or dishonest.
  • 30.
     As awriter what is the crucial thing you are looking to ensure?  Keeping the audience engaged with a story that has meaning.
  • 31.
     How dowe establish the world and the character?  Through maximum speed, and minimal dialogue.
  • 32.
     What adviceis given for making the film cinematic once you have a good story?  Establish a world and character.  Use visuals and sound; sound is able to suggest a world outside the frame you can’t afford to shoot and enhance the impact of your story.  Establish a consistent tone.  Keep an active main character (make choices, do things that allows us to understand them).  Show character changes, via relationships, props, etc., instead of through dialogue.  Use cinematic devices, which can build tension and moves the story forward with maximum economy)  Revise your step outline to check that all significant things created manifest to your audience in the most visual way possible.
  • 33.
     What finaladvice is given for ensuring that a short is more cinematic, less televisual in feel?  Leave writing the dialogue until last, and keep it minimal.
  • 34.
     Who isthe first audience of your film?  A reader of the script.
  • 35.
     How canyou help the reader see the film you are intending and not get irritated?  Follow screenwriting conventions (http://www.scriptfactory.co.uk/ )  Familiarise yourself with scripts (www.scriptpimp.com, www.script-o-rama.com )  Avoid writing camera directions  Avoid writing things the audience cannot see ◦ (What you see is what you get) ◦ (What you hear is what you get)
  • 36.
     Why issimple a useful descriptor for your short?  It can make a big impression if told with cinematic flair.
  • 37.
     Name someof Daniel Mulloy’s shorts and the awards they have won?  He has won a BAFTA Cymru Award for his first film, Dance Floor, for best newcomer.  His second film, Sister (2005), was awarded the ARTE Grand Prix in Hamburg and another BAFTA.  Antonio’s Breakfast won the Short Film BAFTA in 2006.  Dad (2006), premiered in the Edinburgh Film Festival.
  • 38.
     Compare/contrast Antonio’sBreakfast with Dad.  Antonio’s Breakfast is shot in one location, as Mulloy knew money was non-existent.  Dad was also shot in one location, but as the antidote to Antonio’s Breakfast; the characters were almost in reverse.  The main protagonist was a middle aged man in Dad, which contrasts with the young man focused on in Antonio’s Breakfast.
  • 39.
     Explain whatMulloy is “aware” of and has a “strong sense” of when developing his scripts.  He is aware that only minimal funds are available.  He does not depend on the producer to pick up scripts.  He has a strong sense of what needs to be communicated.
  • 40.
     What doesNeil Hunter suggest is the best way to tackle a short which covers a lot of ground?  Covering ground has to be part of the point and part of its style.
  • 41.
     What ideadid the short film The Sickie develop from?  A character overhears the voiceover of the film he’s in.  The script keeps things simple, direct, funny, short and with a point.