The classmates provided feedback on the rough cut, with 7 out of 10 suggesting adding sound effects and 6 out of 10 praising some shots like the first long take. Some shots were too dark since filming was at night to fit the story and atmosphere, so the graveyard scene will be refilmed. Suggestions were also made to add jump cuts when following a character and use narration to help understand the story.

1. The comment of our rough cut
After watched our rough cut , there is 7 out of 10 of our classmates said we
should add sound in our clip . We going to add sound effect as soon as possible.
Some said the shots is too dark . It’s because most of the shot we filming at night,
the reason we filming at night is that our story happened at this time and lower
light could add atmosphere. But we going to film the part in the graveyard again.
6of 10 said we got some good shots in our rough cut such as the first long shot .
We haven’t do the effect so they suggest that we could do something like jump
cut when Lucy follow Lena.
We are going to add narrator, to the sequence which will make it easier for the
audience to understand our video clip.