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SPICE_____
SCENE 1: EXT. EMPTY CAR PARK. MIDDAY
Opening of the film is going to tart with a black screen
where the noise of skateboarding is hear in the background
and it slowly fades from black into the scene of skaters
riding about doing tricks. (Establishing Shot) Then cuts to a
shot that is a lot closer to the characters where you are
clearly able to see what they look like.
ELLIOT
Mate that tre was spot on like
COREY
Cheers mate been working on them for a
while
ELLIOT
Have you got half cab flips ?
COREY
Of course
Corey then throws his skateboard down on the floor where he
then proceeds to do the trick in front of Elliot who shouts
when he lands it. They then fist bump each other this is a
wide shot which then goes into a close up of the characters.
ELLIOT
Your getting good you be getting
sponsored soon i reckon
COREY
Don't know like mate i'm not that good
compared to others
ELLIOT
Yeah but your style stands out from
others
COREY
Hmm
ELLIOT
What time we leaving we been here
hours
COREY
We can leave now if you want
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ELLIOT
Let me just sort my bag out then
COREY
Alright
The camera then switches to a POV shot of the new character
that is about to be introduced (Joseph) he stands there
looking for a couple of seconds before he starts to approach
them. Elliot and Corey then notice him walking over and they
start talking about if they know who it is. Joseph then stops
a little bit away from them where he starts to skate and he
falls.
COREY
Who's that ?
ELLIOT
Don't know should we shout him over
COREY
YEAH
They then shout Joseph over to come see them. At this point
the camera is a behind them to so that its blurry but
(Joseph) isn't. He then skates over to them camera changes
angle to a close up of Josephs face.
ELLIOT
Whats your name then ?
JOSEPH:
Joseph
ELLIOT
Well i'm Elliot and this is Corey
Silence for couple of seconds
COREY
Don't talk much do ya
JOSEPH
Not really no
COREY
What your best trick then?
JOSEPH
Tre flip or something
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COREY
Don't know if i believe that show us
JOSEPH
Alright then
Joseph then throws his board down and tries a tre flip but
messes it up Corey+Elliot both go oooo when he falls
COREY
Go on one more try
Joseph then tries it again and lands it he gets two fist
bumps off them.
COREY
Your not that bad are you?
JOSEPH
I suppose not
ELLIOT
Well we have to leave so see you later
JOSEPH
Yeah see yous later
They then fist bump him and skate off closing that scene.
2. INT. ELLIOT'S HOUSE. MID DAY
This scene will be set inside a house where Corey and Elliot
are talking about what they are going to do today when they
skate
COREY
What did you think of Joseph?
ELLIOT
Little strange wasn't he
COREY
Yeah to quiet i reckon
ELLIOT
Couldn't spend more than a couple
hours with him like
COREY
Aye he's a weird one him like
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ELLIOT
He's not that bad at skating tho
COREY
Aye he's canny at that just seems like
somethings up with him
ELLIOT
A get what you mean anyways do you
wanna go skate now?
COREY
Yeah lets go
3.EXT.SITTING ON WALL NEAR BUILDING.MID DAY
The camera is in front of Corey and Elliot where they are
talking about the trick they are talking about doing.
COREY
You gonna give this 50 50 a go ?
ELLIOT
Nah don't be stupid man
Camera then looks at the rail from Josephs point of view then
back onto Corey's face.
COREY
I'm feeling it me like gonna give it a
little go
ELLIOT
lets see it
They get up and walk up the rail when the camera follows them
behind. Both looking down at it.
ELLIOT
Are you sure about this ?
COREY
Of course
They turn round to see Joseph standing there.
ELLIOT
Fuck me man how did he get there
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COREY
sighs. Hi Joseph
Joseph waves up at them
ELLIOT
Come here then
Joseph walks up to them they give him a fist bump
JOSEPH
What yous doing ?
ELLIOT
Just skating Corey's gonna try 50 50
this
JOSEPH
cool
ELLIOT
Go on than Corey
Corey rolls up to the trick a couple of times before he
realises that he isn't capable of doing it. This will be a
short montage until the camera ends up being back on the
three characters where they talk about it.
COREY
Don't think I've got that actually
ELLIOT
Knew you couldn't like
JOSEPH
Aye was gonna say the same like
COREY
Alright then one of your do it then
Elliot and Joseph then look at each other confused for a
couple of seconds
JOSEPH
Alright then
COREY
What?
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JOSEPH
Might as well try
Corey looks at Elliot then Elliot shrugs his shoulders then
he lands it straight away.
COREY
Bloody hell mate
Corey fist bumps Joseph
JOSEPH
Cheers mate
ELLIOT
Here's a beer man
Joseph looks at him weirdly
ELLIOT
What you've never had a beer?
JOSEPH
Na
COREY
Well one wont hurt man
JOSEPH
Alright then
Takes a drink and thinks it tastes weird
ELLIOT
First drinks always the worst
(laughing)
Cuts to a couple hours ahead where Joseph is sitting against
the wall surrounded by cans
Cinematic music starts to play quietly
Focused on the beer can then changes focus onto him sitting
on the floor
Fades again as Corey falls over to his side music intensifies
4.INT.LYING INSIDE HOUSE.MORNING
Camera is above Josephs head as he wakes up from being drunk
the night before. Eyes are squinting as he feels ill then
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abruptly jumps up out of bed and runs to bathroom where he is
sick into the toilet. Camera follows as he is running towards
the bathroom and then door shuts on the camera and you hear
him being sick in the bathroom. Door opens as toilet flushes
and he walks back into his room where his phone is ringing.
JOSEPH
Hello mate
As they speak on the phone the camera is constantly switching
between between the two characters who are both on the phone.
ELLIOT
you doing anything today?
JOSEPH
Might like
ELLIOT
You feel alright
JOSEPH
Aye mate feel fine me
ELLIOT
Well see you round the usual later on
JOSEPH
Aye see you later
Joseph then falls onto his bed backwards as he feels sick
because he is hungover from the other night.
5.EXT.OUTSIDE SKATING.MID DAY
Elliot and Corey are both out skating again as usual they
have some beer and Corey already seems to be a little drunk
from the beer again and getting angry as he smashes his board
a lot when trying tricks.
ELLIOT
Calm down mate
COREY
Just pass me drink over
Elliot then passes over Corey's beer to him he takes a drink
then skates back off to try a trick which he fails again and
slams the board of the floor again. Then a close up shot of
Elliot shaking his head. Then you see Corey through his board
against the wall and sit down against it. Then Joseph skates
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down towards them.
JOSEPH
Alright mate
ELLIOT
Nice to see ya man
JOSEPH
Alright (looking down at Corey)
Corey just sits and nods his head
COREY
Do you wanna beer ?
JOSEPH
Nah mate
COREY
Just have one for fuck sake
JOSEPH
No
COREY
Freak
Joseph then goes off to skate and music starts to play as he
does that. It gets louder through out this scene until Corey
rides into him knocking him off his board which starts them
to push each other a lot of quick camera angles and cuts at
this point as the music is at its loudest(they are shouting
swearing at each other as well) Corey hits Joseph on the head
with his skateboard which knocks Joseph to the floor music
stops instantly as he hits his head with board and cuts to
black once he hit the floor.Credits start to role music
starts to play.

Script year 2 film

  • 1.
    Created using Celtx SPICE_____ SCENE1: EXT. EMPTY CAR PARK. MIDDAY Opening of the film is going to tart with a black screen where the noise of skateboarding is hear in the background and it slowly fades from black into the scene of skaters riding about doing tricks. (Establishing Shot) Then cuts to a shot that is a lot closer to the characters where you are clearly able to see what they look like. ELLIOT Mate that tre was spot on like COREY Cheers mate been working on them for a while ELLIOT Have you got half cab flips ? COREY Of course Corey then throws his skateboard down on the floor where he then proceeds to do the trick in front of Elliot who shouts when he lands it. They then fist bump each other this is a wide shot which then goes into a close up of the characters. ELLIOT Your getting good you be getting sponsored soon i reckon COREY Don't know like mate i'm not that good compared to others ELLIOT Yeah but your style stands out from others COREY Hmm ELLIOT What time we leaving we been here hours COREY We can leave now if you want
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    2. Created using Celtx ELLIOT Letme just sort my bag out then COREY Alright The camera then switches to a POV shot of the new character that is about to be introduced (Joseph) he stands there looking for a couple of seconds before he starts to approach them. Elliot and Corey then notice him walking over and they start talking about if they know who it is. Joseph then stops a little bit away from them where he starts to skate and he falls. COREY Who's that ? ELLIOT Don't know should we shout him over COREY YEAH They then shout Joseph over to come see them. At this point the camera is a behind them to so that its blurry but (Joseph) isn't. He then skates over to them camera changes angle to a close up of Josephs face. ELLIOT Whats your name then ? JOSEPH: Joseph ELLIOT Well i'm Elliot and this is Corey Silence for couple of seconds COREY Don't talk much do ya JOSEPH Not really no COREY What your best trick then? JOSEPH Tre flip or something
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    3. Created using Celtx COREY Don'tknow if i believe that show us JOSEPH Alright then Joseph then throws his board down and tries a tre flip but messes it up Corey+Elliot both go oooo when he falls COREY Go on one more try Joseph then tries it again and lands it he gets two fist bumps off them. COREY Your not that bad are you? JOSEPH I suppose not ELLIOT Well we have to leave so see you later JOSEPH Yeah see yous later They then fist bump him and skate off closing that scene. 2. INT. ELLIOT'S HOUSE. MID DAY This scene will be set inside a house where Corey and Elliot are talking about what they are going to do today when they skate COREY What did you think of Joseph? ELLIOT Little strange wasn't he COREY Yeah to quiet i reckon ELLIOT Couldn't spend more than a couple hours with him like COREY Aye he's a weird one him like
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    4. Created using Celtx ELLIOT He'snot that bad at skating tho COREY Aye he's canny at that just seems like somethings up with him ELLIOT A get what you mean anyways do you wanna go skate now? COREY Yeah lets go 3.EXT.SITTING ON WALL NEAR BUILDING.MID DAY The camera is in front of Corey and Elliot where they are talking about the trick they are talking about doing. COREY You gonna give this 50 50 a go ? ELLIOT Nah don't be stupid man Camera then looks at the rail from Josephs point of view then back onto Corey's face. COREY I'm feeling it me like gonna give it a little go ELLIOT lets see it They get up and walk up the rail when the camera follows them behind. Both looking down at it. ELLIOT Are you sure about this ? COREY Of course They turn round to see Joseph standing there. ELLIOT Fuck me man how did he get there
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    5. Created using Celtx COREY sighs.Hi Joseph Joseph waves up at them ELLIOT Come here then Joseph walks up to them they give him a fist bump JOSEPH What yous doing ? ELLIOT Just skating Corey's gonna try 50 50 this JOSEPH cool ELLIOT Go on than Corey Corey rolls up to the trick a couple of times before he realises that he isn't capable of doing it. This will be a short montage until the camera ends up being back on the three characters where they talk about it. COREY Don't think I've got that actually ELLIOT Knew you couldn't like JOSEPH Aye was gonna say the same like COREY Alright then one of your do it then Elliot and Joseph then look at each other confused for a couple of seconds JOSEPH Alright then COREY What?
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    6. Created using Celtx JOSEPH Mightas well try Corey looks at Elliot then Elliot shrugs his shoulders then he lands it straight away. COREY Bloody hell mate Corey fist bumps Joseph JOSEPH Cheers mate ELLIOT Here's a beer man Joseph looks at him weirdly ELLIOT What you've never had a beer? JOSEPH Na COREY Well one wont hurt man JOSEPH Alright then Takes a drink and thinks it tastes weird ELLIOT First drinks always the worst (laughing) Cuts to a couple hours ahead where Joseph is sitting against the wall surrounded by cans Cinematic music starts to play quietly Focused on the beer can then changes focus onto him sitting on the floor Fades again as Corey falls over to his side music intensifies 4.INT.LYING INSIDE HOUSE.MORNING Camera is above Josephs head as he wakes up from being drunk the night before. Eyes are squinting as he feels ill then
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    7. Created using Celtx abruptlyjumps up out of bed and runs to bathroom where he is sick into the toilet. Camera follows as he is running towards the bathroom and then door shuts on the camera and you hear him being sick in the bathroom. Door opens as toilet flushes and he walks back into his room where his phone is ringing. JOSEPH Hello mate As they speak on the phone the camera is constantly switching between between the two characters who are both on the phone. ELLIOT you doing anything today? JOSEPH Might like ELLIOT You feel alright JOSEPH Aye mate feel fine me ELLIOT Well see you round the usual later on JOSEPH Aye see you later Joseph then falls onto his bed backwards as he feels sick because he is hungover from the other night. 5.EXT.OUTSIDE SKATING.MID DAY Elliot and Corey are both out skating again as usual they have some beer and Corey already seems to be a little drunk from the beer again and getting angry as he smashes his board a lot when trying tricks. ELLIOT Calm down mate COREY Just pass me drink over Elliot then passes over Corey's beer to him he takes a drink then skates back off to try a trick which he fails again and slams the board of the floor again. Then a close up shot of Elliot shaking his head. Then you see Corey through his board against the wall and sit down against it. Then Joseph skates
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    8. Created using Celtx downtowards them. JOSEPH Alright mate ELLIOT Nice to see ya man JOSEPH Alright (looking down at Corey) Corey just sits and nods his head COREY Do you wanna beer ? JOSEPH Nah mate COREY Just have one for fuck sake JOSEPH No COREY Freak Joseph then goes off to skate and music starts to play as he does that. It gets louder through out this scene until Corey rides into him knocking him off his board which starts them to push each other a lot of quick camera angles and cuts at this point as the music is at its loudest(they are shouting swearing at each other as well) Corey hits Joseph on the head with his skateboard which knocks Joseph to the floor music stops instantly as he hits his head with board and cuts to black once he hit the floor.Credits start to role music starts to play.