The summarizes notes that the student's shooting of material was mostly controlled but some shots were shaky. It provides tips to improve framing and variety of shot sizes. Close attention was paid to background details but some shots were not relevant. The editing used some appropriate transitions but others like rectangles were not needed. Captions were only used once and not for all interviews. Simple animations aided understanding. On sound, an edit caused a jump and the presenter was hard to hear outside with voiceover picking up breathing.