RAISING THE BARN Amber Cragg excerpt
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- 2. Scene 002 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Camera ADJ- Pull OUT S.E. - Steven looking at the Connie photo. Slugging ADJ: 0.12 Then HOLD: 1.06
- 3. Scene 003 Duration 00:08 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven lookingat the Connie photo. Slugging 0.08
- 4. Scene 003 Duration 00:08 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: <sigh> Action Notes Stevenleans back against the wall and slides down. Slugging 0.14
- 5. Scene 003 Duration 00:08 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven slumpsdown on his bed. Slugging 1.07
- 6. Scene 003 Duration 00:08 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Slides toa stop. Slugging 1.08
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- 8. Scene 004 Duration 00:08 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: She'll callwhen she's ready. Slugging 2.06
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- 10. Scene 004 Duration 00:08 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: For nowyou just have to let go. Action Notes Steven rolls on his side. Slugging 3.12
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- 15. Scene 005 Duration 00:22 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven grabshis phone. Slugging 0.06
- 16. Scene 005 Duration 00:22 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven putshis phone in his pocket. Slugging 0.08
- 17. Scene 005 Duration 00:22 Panel 7 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven putshis phone in his pocket. Slugging 1.04
- 18. Scene 005 Duration 00:22 Panel 8 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven jumpsoff the bed. Slugging 0.04
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- 22. Scene 006 Duration 00:12 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog SFX: <SFX ofSterven dragging the ukelele through the sand OS> Action Notes Shot of the beach. Shore is going in and out. FX - sea foam FX FX - Water sparkle FX Slugging 0.06
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- 24. Scene 006 Duration 00:12 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -wet sand FX Slugging 0.12
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- 28. Scene 007 Duration 00:18 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -sea foam FX FX - Water sparkle FX Slugging 0.08
- 29. Scene 007 Duration 00:18 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven walksIN - S.E. - dragging ukelele behind him. Ukelele makes track in the sand. FX - sand trail FX Slugging 1.02
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- 32. Scene 007 Duration 00:18 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven stopsand turns counter clockwise. Slugging 1.08
- 33. Scene 007 Duration 00:18 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Picks upthe guitar and falls back. Slugging 0.06
- 34. Scene 007 Duration 00:18 Panel 7 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -Dust poof FX spread and dissipate. Slugging 0.04
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- 37. Scene 008 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes steven strumsthe ukulele. Slugging 0.04
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- 39. Scene 008 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -string vibration. Slugging 2.04
- 40. Scene 009 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -sea foam FX FX - Water sparkle FX FX - string vibration FX Slugging 0.04
- 41. Scene 009 Duration 00:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes String vibrationstops. Slugging 1.02
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- 43. Scene 010 Duration 00:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Clouds veryslowly drift S.W. Slugging 2.14 Notes Upshot on clouds.
- 44. Scene 011 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -sea foam FX FX - Water sparkle FX Slugging 0.12
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- 46. Scene 012 Duration 01:16 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -sea foam FX FX - Water sparkle FX Slugging 0.04
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- 48. Scene 012 Duration 01:16 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Strums theukelele. FX - string vibration FX Slugging 0.10
- 49. Scene 012 Duration 01:16 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN (singing): Iwish i could tell you that I - Action Notes Steven Sings. Slugging 3.10
- 50. Scene 012 Duration 01:16 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog SFX: <phone ring> ActionNotes Steven is startled, throws the ukelele. Slugging 0.04
- 51. Scene 012 Duration 01:16 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Ukelele fallson the ground. Steven digs in his pocket. Slugging 0.06
- 52. Scene 012 Duration 01:16 Panel 7 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pulls phoneout fast. Slugging 0.04
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- 55. Scene 012 Duration 01:16 Panel 10 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: AAH! Action Notes Stevenloses his grip on the phone, fumbles with the phone, keeps trying to grab it and it keeps slipping up and out. Slugging 0.04
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- 64. Scene 012 Duration 01:16 Panel 19 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven catchesthe phone. Slugging 0.13
- 65. Scene 012 Duration 01:16 Panel 20 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven sitsup, holding the phone. Slugging 1.02
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- 67. Scene 013 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: Ok Universe.This is it. Slugging 2.13
- 68. Scene 013 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: Connie's finallyready to talk. Slugging 4.01
- 69. Scene 013 Duration 00:10 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: NO expectations!Just, let her say what she needs to say. Slugging 6.00
- 70. Scene 013 Duration 00:10 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven holdsphone out. Slugging 1.02
- 71. Scene 014 Duration 00:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Phone isringing - Peridot is calling. Slugging 1.14
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- 75. Scene 015 Duration 00:12 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven hitsa button on the phone. Slugging 0.08
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- 78. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: IT'S Action Notes Peridot'sface close to camera. A live video of Steven in the bottom left of the screen. Slugging 0.12
- 79. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: US!! Action Notes Peridotleans back, and Lapis leans IN - EAST Slugging 1.04
- 80. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: Oh, hiperidot, hi lapis. Slugging 4.08
- 81. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Don't forget ActionNotes Peridot lifts pumpkin north OS. A live video of Steven in the bottom left of the screen. Slugging 1.00
- 82. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: pumpkin!! Action Notes Peridotlifts pumpkin IN - SOUTH Slugging 1.00
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- 86. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 9 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: Hi pumpkin. ActionNotes Pumpkin sticks her tongue out. Slugging Panels 9 + 10 = 1.12
- 87. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 10 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: Hi pumpkin. ActionNotes Pumpkin sticks her tongue out.
- 88. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 11 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: (to lapis)i TOLD you he'd answer! Slugging 3.00
- 89. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 12 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: It's sogood to see you! I'm glad you're okay. Slugging 4.14
- 90. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 13 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Lapis wasworried you lost your phone on homeworld, Slugging 3.13
- 91. Scene 016 Duration 01:06 Panel 14 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: but Isaid no way! Slugging Panels 14 + 15 = 5.14
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- 94. Scene 017 Duration 00:14 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -Blush lines up on Steven Slugging 1.00
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- 97. Scene 017 Duration 00:14 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT (os): likewhat! Tell us!! Slugging 2.14
- 98. Scene 017 Duration 00:14 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: Well, Connie'sreally mad at me... Slugging 4.10
- 99. Scene 017 Duration 00:14 Panel 7 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT (os): Nono no! Tell us about SPACE! Action Notes Blush fade off. Slugging 4.00
- 100. Scene 018 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: and startfrom the beginning! Action Notes A live video of Steven in the bottom left of the screen. Slugging 2.04
- 101. Scene 018 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN (os): Uh,Okay... Slugging 2.04
- 102. Scene 019 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: So Iwas trying to protect Beach City so I surrendered myself to homeworld, Slugging 6.06
- 103. Scene 019 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: and iwas put in a big empty room and i ended up on trial in front of the diamonds! Slugging 5.14
- 104. Scene 020 Duration 00:14 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: ON TRIAL?! PERIDOT:WHAT!? Action Notes A live video of Steven in the bottom left of the screen. Slugging 2.07
- 105. Scene 020 Duration 00:14 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis quicklysteps forward. Slugging 0.06
- 106. Scene 020 Duration 00:14 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: IN FRONTOF THE DIAMONDS?! Slugging 1.14
- 107. Scene 020 Duration 00:14 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: Yeah! andI had this lawyer gem- Slugging 3.00
- 108. Scene 020 Duration 00:14 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: NO. Action Notes Lapisantics down, sared. Slugging 1.01
- 109. Scene 020 Duration 00:14 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: You werein front of Blue diamond? Slugging 3.02
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- 111. Scene 021 Duration 00:08 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: But it'sokay! Slugging 1.07
- 112. Scene 021 Duration 00:08 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: I escapedin a palanquin Slugging Panels 2 + 3 = 4.05
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- 115. Scene 022 Duration 00:10 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: FROM BLUEAND YELLOW DIAMOND. Action Notes A live video of Steven in the bottom left of the screen. Slugging 3.02
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- 117. Scene 022 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: PERIDOT! Wehave to leave Earth, NOW. Slugging 4.02
- 118. Scene 022 Duration 00:10 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes LAPIS pokesthe screen, hanging up. Slugging 0.04
- 119. Scene 022 Duration 00:10 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN (os): Ohow. Action Notes End call screen pops on. Slugging 3.02