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RAISING THE BARN Amber Cragg excerpt 2
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- 2. Scene 118 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Lapis floatsIN - N.E. Overlap on hair and clothes. Slugging 0.08
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- 4. Scene 118 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog LAPIS: GREAT!! Action Notes Lapislands. Lapis's wings go back in. Slugging 1.03
- 5. Scene 118 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog LAPIS: You foundher! Slugging 1.12
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- 7. Scene 120 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog LAPIS: Now letsgo. Slugging Panels 1 to 5 = 9.00
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- 9. Scene 120 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Lapis startsto raise the barn with water. FX - Water wall FX circles barn twisting CLOCKWISE. FX - water drains down from SMALLER THAN AVERAGE LAKE.
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- 11. Scene 120 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Lapis startsto raise the barn with water. The pipes stretch out. Overlap on Lapis hair and clothes.
- 12. Scene 121 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -water wall FX Overlap on Lapis hair and clothes. Slugging 0.10
- 13. Scene 121 Duration 00:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: <uhg> Action Notes Peridotlooks behind her. Slugging 0.06
- 14. Scene 121 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: <uhg> Action Notes Peridotlooks behind her. Slugging 2.00
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- 16. Scene 123 Duration 00:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Overlap onLapis hair and clothes. FX - water wall FX twisting CLOCKWISE. Slugging 1.12
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- 18. Scene 124 Duration 00:12 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot swallowsher fear. FX - sweat starts to flow down her face. Slugging 0.08
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- 21. Scene 124 Duration 00:12 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Pumpkin doesn'twant to go. Slugging 1.14
- 22. Scene 124 Duration 00:12 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Pumpkin doesn'twant to go. Slugging 1.06
- 23. Scene 125 Duration 00:08 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Overlap onLapis hair and clothes. FX - water wall FX twisting CLOCKWISE. Slugging 0.06
- 24. Scene 125 Duration 00:08 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Overlap onLapis hair and clothes. Slugging 0.12
- 25. Scene 125 Duration 00:08 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: Pumpkin doesn'tknow better. Slugging 2.08
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- 31. Scene 126 Duration 00:10 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: I don'twant to go, either. Slugging 3.04
- 32. Scene 127 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Overlap onLapis hair and clothes. FX - water wall FX twisting CLOCKWISE. Slugging 0.12
- 33. Scene 127 Duration 00:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: WHAT! Action Notes Lapisturns around quickly. Overlap on hair and clothes stop. Slugging Panels 2 + 3 = 1.08
- 34. Scene 127 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: WHAT! Action Notes Lapisturns around quickly. Overlap on hair and clothes stop.
- 35. Scene 128 Duration 02:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -water wall FX twisting CLOCKWISE. Slugging 0.04
- 36. Scene 128 Duration 02:04 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes DETAIL REFERENCE Slugging DETAILREFERENCE Notes DETAIL REFERENCE
- 37. Scene 128 Duration 02:04 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: AA! STEVEN: AA!! ActionNotes The barn DROPS. Camera shake. FX - water splash FX Overlap on Steven and Peridot from the impact. Slugging
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- 40. Scene 129 Duration 00:10 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Camera shakeends in this scene Slugging 0.04
- 41. Scene 129 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot quicklyturns. Pumpkin jumps out of her arms, overlap on tail. Slugging 0.04
- 42. Scene 129 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Camera ADJ- WEST Slugging ADJ: 0.08
- 43. Scene 129 Duration 00:10 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin jumpsOUT - S.W. Slugging 0.04
- 44. Scene 129 Duration 00:10 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin jumpsOUT - S.W. Slugging 0.12
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- 46. Scene 130 Duration 00:16 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin runsIN - EAST - and hides behind Steven. Overlap on tail. Slugging Panels 2 to 4 = 0.12
- 47. Scene 130 Duration 00:16 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin runsIN - EAST - and hides behind Steven. Overlap on tail. Slugging 0.06
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- 53. Scene 131 Duration 00:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: Peridot. Whatare you trying to say? Slugging 3.10
- 54. Scene 132 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: It's just-If something happens on Earth, Slugging 4.06
- 55. Scene 132 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: I wantto be here for it! Slugging 2.08
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- 58. Scene 133 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: Why areyou telling me this now?! Slugging 2.14
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- 60. Scene 134 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: we're aboutto leave! Slugging 2.14
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- 62. Scene 135 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: Isn't thatthe worst time? Slugging 2.06
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- 69. Scene 138 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: why didn'tyou tell me sooner? Slugging 3.04
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- 71. Scene 139 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Well, thereare many things I Slugging 2.08
- 72. Scene 139 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: I COULDsay, Action Notes FX - sweat up on Peridot. Slugging 1.08
- 73. Scene 139 Duration 00:10 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: but wouldupset you, so in general I Slugging 3.12
- 74. Scene 139 Duration 00:10 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: DONT saythose things. Slugging 3.01
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- 81. Scene 142 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: I thinkthat we should stay, Slugging Panels 3 to 5 = 10.03
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- 84. Scene 143 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: If theDiamonds do come to wipe this planet of the star maps Slugging Panels 1 to 3 = 6.07
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- 86. Scene 143 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: we shouldfight for this life we built instead of tearing it up out of the ground!
- 87. Scene 144 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: I thinkwe can WIN! Slugging Panels 1 + 2 = 3.00
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- 89. Scene 145 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT (os): Ithink you can win! Slugging 2.10
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- 93. Scene 146 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Isn't itworth fighting for? Action Notes Camera ADJ - S.E. Slugging ADJ: 0.14
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- 97. Scene 148 Duration 00:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: What doyou say, Action Notes Steven looks up at Lapis
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- 99. Scene 149 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes DX -Shadow eyes on lapis. Lapis tilts her head down slightly. Slugging 0.10
- 100. Scene 149 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis nodsdown. Slugging 1.08
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- 103. Scene 151 Duration 00:08 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: I'm sorry. ActionNotes Sun setting in bg. Slugging 3.05
- 104. Scene 151 Duration 00:08 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: (darkly) Iam not. Getting caught in the middle of another war. Action Notes Lapis quickly turns counter clockwise away, hurt. Slugging 6.03
- 105. Scene 151 Duration 00:08 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis walksOUT - EAST Slugging 0.12
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- 107. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis summonsher wings. Slugging 0.04
- 108. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -Lapis's gem glows up. Slugging 0.08
- 109. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -Lapis summons her wings. Slugging 0.02
- 110. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis summonsher wings. overlap on lapis's hair and skirt. Camera ADJ - quick pull OUT Slugging ADJ: 0.08 Then HOLD: 0.10
- 111. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes overlap onlapis's hair and skirt. Slugging 1.00
- 112. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -water wall FX raises around the barn. Lapis holds her hands out and water starts to raise the barn. overlap on lapis's hair and skirt. The water is more turbulent than before. GENTLE CAM SHAKE. Slugging 1.00
- 113. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 7 Duration 00:02 Action Notes The wateris more turbulent than before. GENTLE CAM SHAKE. Slugging 0.11
- 114. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 8 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Water wallpushes the barn UP. Slugging 1.00
- 115. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 9 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Water wallsurrounds the barn. Slugging 1.00
- 116. Scene 153 Duration 01:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -water wall FX - WATER THRASHING AROUND BARN clockwise. Slugging 2.08
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- 118. Scene 154 Duration 00:12 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -water wall FX turning clockwise. Turbulent water waves. Right Wheel on barn is rattling. CAM SHAKE THROUGHOUT SCENE Slugging 0.04
- 119. Scene 154 Duration 00:12 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Turbulent waterwaves. Right Wheel on barn is rattling. Slugging 0.04
- 120. Scene 154 Duration 00:12 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Turbulent waterwaves. Right Wheel breaks off of barn. Left wheel falls OUT - S.E. Slugging 0.04
- 121. Scene 154 Duration 00:12 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Turbulent waterwaves. Slugging Panels 4 + 5 x 2.5 = 0.08 Total cycle frames: 1.08
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- 123. Scene 154 Duration 00:12 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Turbulent waterrises. Slugging 1.06
- 124. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -water wall FX turning clockwise. Water is shaking the barn. Slugging Panels 1 to 6 = 5.00
- 125. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Right wingon barn roof statue snaps loose.
- 126. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Statue wingis limp. Water wall FX is closing in around the barn, encircling it.
- 127. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Water wallfx snaps together around statue. Statue wing breaks off and falls S.W.
- 128. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Water wallfx snaps together around statue. Statue wing breaks off and falls S.W.
- 129. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Water wallfx snaps together around statue. Statue wing breaks off and falls S.W.
- 130. Scene 156 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PUMPKIN: BARK! BARK! PERIDOT:WAIT!! Action Notes ADLIB - Pumpkin is barking. Steven runs closer. Slugging 1.08
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- 132. Scene 156 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: YOU'RE SUPPOSEDTO REWARD ME FOR MY EMOTIONAL HONESTY! Slugging 5.02
- 133. Scene 157 Duration 00:10 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -water wall FX. ADLIB - Pipes are straining badly. Barn and water wall is rising NORTH. Slugging 0.08
- 134. Scene 157 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pipes arestraining badly. Slugging 1.02
- 135. Scene 157 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pipes breakoff at joints. ADLIB - debris falling. Slugging 0.04
- 136. Scene 157 Duration 00:10 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Barn floatsOUT - NORTH - with pipes. Pipes on the ground buckle. Slugging 0.04
- 137. Scene 157 Duration 00:10 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pipes onthe ground buckle. Slugging 1.10
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- 139. Scene 158 Duration 00:12 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis fliesIN - SOUTH. overlap on hair and skirt. Water wings beating/flapping. Slugging 0.10
- 140. Scene 158 Duration 00:12 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -water Bubble FX Barn floats IN - SOUTH - behind Lapis. overlap on hair and skirt. Water wings beating. Slugging 0.12
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- 142. Scene 158 Duration 00:12 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis raisesher arms. Bubbled Barn floats up above lapis. Slugging 1.06
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- 144. Scene 159 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis looksbehind her. overlap on hair and skirt. Water wings beating/flapping. Slugging 0.08
- 145. Scene 159 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis looksbehind her. Slugging 1.02
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- 147. Scene 161 Duration 00:10 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis looksbehind her. Slugging Panels 1 + 2 = 1.04
- 148. Scene 161 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis's headgoes down slightly as her shoulders come up slightly
- 149. Scene 161 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis shootsup, N.E. Slugging 0.08
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- 152. Scene 162 Duration 00:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Camera ADJ- Pull OUT Slugging ADJ: 3.06
- 153. Scene 163 Duration 03:12 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis andbubbled barn Fly back in perspective and disappear into sky. Clouds very slowly drift S.E. Slugging 0.12
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- 159. Scene 163 Duration 03:12 Panel 7 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -sparkle FX replaces Lapis silhouette and shrinks. Slugging 0.08
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- 161. Scene 163 Duration 03:12 Panel 9 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX -sparkle FX dissappears Slugging 2.10
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- 163. Scene 164 Duration 00:08 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven walksIN - FG WEST Slugging 0.12
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- 167. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven dumpshis comforter into the bath tub. Slugging 0.06
- 168. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven smoothsout comforter. ADLIB - pumpkin moving its paw slightly up/down. Slugging 1.00
- 169. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: Okay, Action Notes Stevensteps back and turns. Slugging 1.10
- 170. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: you're allset up. Action Notes Pumpking turns counter clockwise. Peridot looks up. Slugging 1.12
- 171. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: You canstay here as long as you need. Slugging 2.10
- 172. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot kicksher legs out. Slugging 0.06
- 173. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 7 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot getsoff toilet and crawls into tub. Slugging 0.06
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- 179. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 13 Duration 00:02 Action Notes and laysdown on her left side. Slugging 0.06
- 180. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 14 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: (miserable+muffled) thanks... ActionNotes peridot climbs into her depression nest Slugging 2.10
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- 186. Scene 168 Duration 00:22 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin runsIN - S.E. Steven reaches into his pocket. Slugging 0.12
- 187. Scene 168 Duration 00:22 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pulls outhis phone. Slugging 0.06
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- 189. Scene 168 Duration 00:22 Panel 8 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin walksin a circle counter clockwise at stevens side. Steven pushes buttons on his phone. Slugging 0.06
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- 196. Scene 170 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot looksat Steven. Slugging 0.14
- 197. Scene 170 Duration 00:10 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: What dowe do now? Slugging 3.08
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