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- 2. Scene 118 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Lapis floats IN - N.E. Overlap on hair and clothes. Slugging 0.08
- 4. Scene 118 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog LAPIS: GREAT!! Action Notes Lapis lands. Lapis's wings go back in. Slugging 1.03
- 5. Scene 118 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog LAPIS: You found her! Slugging 1.12
- 7. Scene 120 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog LAPIS: Now lets go. Slugging Panels 1 to 5 = 9.00
- 9. Scene 120 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Lapis starts to raise the barn with water. FX - Water wall FX circles barn twisting CLOCKWISE. FX - water drains down from SMALLER THAN AVERAGE LAKE.
- 11. Scene 120 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Lapis starts to raise the barn with water. The pipes stretch out. Overlap on Lapis hair and clothes.
- 12. Scene 121 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - water wall FX Overlap on Lapis hair and clothes. Slugging 0.10
- 13. Scene 121 Duration 00:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: <uhg> Action Notes Peridot looks behind her. Slugging 0.06
- 14. Scene 121 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: <uhg> Action Notes Peridot looks behind her. Slugging 2.00
- 16. Scene 123 Duration 00:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Overlap on Lapis hair and clothes. FX - water wall FX twisting CLOCKWISE. Slugging 1.12
- 18. Scene 124 Duration 00:12 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot swallows her fear. FX - sweat starts to flow down her face. Slugging 0.08
- 21. Scene 124 Duration 00:12 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Pumpkin doesn't want to go. Slugging 1.14
- 22. Scene 124 Duration 00:12 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Pumpkin doesn't want to go. Slugging 1.06
- 23. Scene 125 Duration 00:08 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Overlap on Lapis hair and clothes. FX - water wall FX twisting CLOCKWISE. Slugging 0.06
- 24. Scene 125 Duration 00:08 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Overlap on Lapis hair and clothes. Slugging 0.12
- 25. Scene 125 Duration 00:08 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: Pumpkin doesn't know better. Slugging 2.08
- 31. Scene 126 Duration 00:10 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: I don't want to go, either. Slugging 3.04
- 32. Scene 127 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Overlap on Lapis hair and clothes. FX - water wall FX twisting CLOCKWISE. Slugging 0.12
- 33. Scene 127 Duration 00:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: WHAT! Action Notes Lapis turns around quickly. Overlap on hair and clothes stop. Slugging Panels 2 + 3 = 1.08
- 34. Scene 127 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: WHAT! Action Notes Lapis turns around quickly. Overlap on hair and clothes stop.
- 35. Scene 128 Duration 02:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - water wall FX twisting CLOCKWISE. Slugging 0.04
- 36. Scene 128 Duration 02:04 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes DETAIL REFERENCE Slugging DETAIL REFERENCE Notes DETAIL REFERENCE
- 37. Scene 128 Duration 02:04 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: AA! STEVEN: AA!! Action Notes The barn DROPS. Camera shake. FX - water splash FX Overlap on Steven and Peridot from the impact. Slugging
- 38. 1.08
- 39. Scene 128 Duration 02:04 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes DETAIL REFERENCE Slugging DETAIL REFERENCE Notes DETAIL REFERENCE
- 40. Scene 129 Duration 00:10 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Camera shake ends in this scene Slugging 0.04
- 41. Scene 129 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot quickly turns. Pumpkin jumps out of her arms, overlap on tail. Slugging 0.04
- 42. Scene 129 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Camera ADJ - WEST Slugging ADJ: 0.08
- 43. Scene 129 Duration 00:10 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin jumps OUT - S.W. Slugging 0.04
- 44. Scene 129 Duration 00:10 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin jumps OUT - S.W. Slugging 0.12
- 46. Scene 130 Duration 00:16 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin runs IN - EAST - and hides behind Steven. Overlap on tail. Slugging Panels 2 to 4 = 0.12
- 47. Scene 130 Duration 00:16 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin runs IN - EAST - and hides behind Steven. Overlap on tail. Slugging 0.06
- 53. Scene 131 Duration 00:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: Peridot. What are you trying to say? Slugging 3.10
- 54. Scene 132 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: It's just- If something happens on Earth, Slugging 4.06
- 55. Scene 132 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: I want to be here for it! Slugging 2.08
- 58. Scene 133 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: Why are you telling me this now?! Slugging 2.14
- 60. Scene 134 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: we're about to leave! Slugging 2.14
- 62. Scene 135 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: Isn't that the worst time? Slugging 2.06
- 66. Scene 137 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog DETAIL FOR REFERENCE ONLY Action Notes DETAIL FOR REFERENCE ONLY Slugging DETAIL FOR REFERENCE ONLY Notes
- 67. DETAIL FOR REFERENCE ONLY
- 69. Scene 138 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: why didn't you tell me sooner? Slugging 3.04
- 71. Scene 139 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Well, there are many things I Slugging 2.08
- 72. Scene 139 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: I COULD say, Action Notes FX - sweat up on Peridot. Slugging 1.08
- 73. Scene 139 Duration 00:10 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: but would upset you, so in general I Slugging 3.12
- 74. Scene 139 Duration 00:10 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: DONT say those things. Slugging 3.01
- 75. Scene 140 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes sttart pose Slugging Panels 1 + 2 = 2.12
- 80. Scene 142 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: The truth is, Slugging 2.07
- 81. Scene 142 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: I think that we should stay, Slugging Panels 3 to 5 = 10.03
- 84. Scene 143 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: If the Diamonds do come to wipe this planet of the star maps Slugging Panels 1 to 3 = 6.07
- 86. Scene 143 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: we should fight for this life we built instead of tearing it up out of the ground!
- 87. Scene 144 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: I think we can WIN! Slugging Panels 1 + 2 = 3.00
- 89. Scene 145 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT (os): I think you can win! Slugging 2.10
- 91. Scene 146 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes start pose Slugging Panels 1 + 2 = 4.02
- 92. Scene 146 Duration 00:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Earth is our home now.
- 93. Scene 146 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: Isn't it worth fighting for? Action Notes Camera ADJ - S.E. Slugging ADJ: 0.14
- 94. Then HOLD: 1.12
- 96. Scene 148 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Start pose Slugging Panels 1 + 2 = 1.06
- 97. Scene 148 Duration 00:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: What do you say, Action Notes Steven looks up at Lapis
- 99. Scene 149 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes DX - Shadow eyes on lapis. Lapis tilts her head down slightly. Slugging 0.10
- 100. Scene 149 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis nods down. Slugging 1.08
- 102. Scene 150 Duration 01:02 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes DETAIL REFERENCE Slugging DETAIL REFERENCE Notes DETAIL REFERENCE
- 103. Scene 151 Duration 00:08 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: I'm sorry. Action Notes Sun setting in bg. Slugging 3.05
- 104. Scene 151 Duration 00:08 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog LAPIS: (darkly) I am not. Getting caught in the middle of another war. Action Notes Lapis quickly turns counter clockwise away, hurt. Slugging 6.03
- 105. Scene 151 Duration 00:08 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis walks OUT - EAST Slugging 0.12
- 107. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis summons her wings. Slugging 0.04
- 108. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - Lapis's gem glows up. Slugging 0.08
- 109. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - Lapis summons her wings. Slugging 0.02
- 110. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis summons her wings. overlap on lapis's hair and skirt. Camera ADJ - quick pull OUT Slugging ADJ: 0.08 Then HOLD: 0.10
- 111. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes overlap on lapis's hair and skirt. Slugging 1.00
- 112. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - water wall FX raises around the barn. Lapis holds her hands out and water starts to raise the barn. overlap on lapis's hair and skirt. The water is more turbulent than before. GENTLE CAM SHAKE. Slugging 1.00
- 113. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 7 Duration 00:02 Action Notes The water is more turbulent than before. GENTLE CAM SHAKE. Slugging 0.11
- 114. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 8 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Water wall pushes the barn UP. Slugging 1.00
- 115. Scene 152 Duration 00:18 Panel 9 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Water wall surrounds the barn. Slugging 1.00
- 116. Scene 153 Duration 01:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - water wall FX - WATER THRASHING AROUND BARN clockwise. Slugging 2.08
- 117. Scene 153 Duration 01:02 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes DETAIL REFERENCE Slugging DETAIL REFERENCE Notes DETAIL REFERENCE
- 118. Scene 154 Duration 00:12 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - water wall FX turning clockwise. Turbulent water waves. Right Wheel on barn is rattling. CAM SHAKE THROUGHOUT SCENE Slugging 0.04
- 119. Scene 154 Duration 00:12 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Turbulent water waves. Right Wheel on barn is rattling. Slugging 0.04
- 120. Scene 154 Duration 00:12 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Turbulent water waves. Right Wheel breaks off of barn. Left wheel falls OUT - S.E. Slugging 0.04
- 121. Scene 154 Duration 00:12 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Turbulent water waves. Slugging Panels 4 + 5 x 2.5 = 0.08 Total cycle frames: 1.08
- 123. Scene 154 Duration 00:12 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Turbulent water rises. Slugging 1.06
- 124. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - water wall FX turning clockwise. Water is shaking the barn. Slugging Panels 1 to 6 = 5.00
- 125. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Right wing on barn roof statue snaps loose.
- 126. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Statue wing is limp. Water wall FX is closing in around the barn, encircling it.
- 127. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Water wall fx snaps together around statue. Statue wing breaks off and falls S.W.
- 128. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Water wall fx snaps together around statue. Statue wing breaks off and falls S.W.
- 129. Scene 155 Duration 00:12 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Water wall fx snaps together around statue. Statue wing breaks off and falls S.W.
- 130. Scene 156 Duration 00:06 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Dialog PUMPKIN: BARK! BARK! PERIDOT: WAIT!! Action Notes ADLIB - Pumpkin is barking. Steven runs closer. Slugging 1.08
- 131. Scene 156 Duration 00:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog PUMPKIN: BARK! BARK! PERIDOT: NO! Slugging 1.06
- 132. Scene 156 Duration 00:06 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO REWARD ME FOR MY EMOTIONAL HONESTY! Slugging 5.02
- 133. Scene 157 Duration 00:10 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - water wall FX. ADLIB - Pipes are straining badly. Barn and water wall is rising NORTH. Slugging 0.08
- 134. Scene 157 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pipes are straining badly. Slugging 1.02
- 135. Scene 157 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pipes break off at joints. ADLIB - debris falling. Slugging 0.04
- 136. Scene 157 Duration 00:10 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Barn floats OUT - NORTH - with pipes. Pipes on the ground buckle. Slugging 0.04
- 137. Scene 157 Duration 00:10 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pipes on the ground buckle. Slugging 1.10
- 139. Scene 158 Duration 00:12 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis flies IN - SOUTH. overlap on hair and skirt. Water wings beating/flapping. Slugging 0.10
- 140. Scene 158 Duration 00:12 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - water Bubble FX Barn floats IN - SOUTH - behind Lapis. overlap on hair and skirt. Water wings beating. Slugging 0.12
- 142. Scene 158 Duration 00:12 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis raises her arms. Bubbled Barn floats up above lapis. Slugging 1.06
- 144. Scene 159 Duration 00:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis looks behind her. overlap on hair and skirt. Water wings beating/flapping. Slugging 0.08
- 145. Scene 159 Duration 00:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis looks behind her. Slugging 1.02
- 147. Scene 161 Duration 00:10 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis looks behind her. Slugging Panels 1 + 2 = 1.04
- 148. Scene 161 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis's head goes down slightly as her shoulders come up slightly
- 149. Scene 161 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis shoots up, N.E. Slugging 0.08
- 152. Scene 162 Duration 00:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Camera ADJ - Pull OUT Slugging ADJ: 3.06
- 153. Scene 163 Duration 03:12 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Lapis and bubbled barn Fly back in perspective and disappear into sky. Clouds very slowly drift S.E. Slugging 0.12
- 154. Scene 163 Duration 03:12 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes DETAIL REFERENCE Slugging DETAIL REFERENCE Notes DETAIL REFERENCE
- 156. Scene 163 Duration 03:12 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes DETAIL REFERENCE Slugging DETAIL REFERENCE Notes DETAIL REFERENCE
- 158. Scene 163 Duration 03:12 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes DETAIL REFERENCE Slugging DETAIL REFERENCE Notes DETAIL REFERENCE
- 159. Scene 163 Duration 03:12 Panel 7 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - sparkle FX replaces Lapis silhouette and shrinks. Slugging 0.08
- 160. Scene 163 Duration 03:12 Panel 8 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - sparkle FX replaces Lapis silhouette and shrinks. Slugging 0.12
- 161. Scene 163 Duration 03:12 Panel 9 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - sparkle FX dissappears Slugging 2.10
- 162. Scene 164 Duration 00:08 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - twinkling stars FX Slugging 0.12
- 163. Scene 164 Duration 00:08 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven walks IN - FG WEST Slugging 0.12
- 166. Scene 165 Duration 00:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes FX - twinkling stars FX FX - Water sparkle FX FX - sea foam FX Slugging 1.08 Notes TIME - NIGHT
- 167. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven dumps his comforter into the bath tub. Slugging 0.06
- 168. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Steven smooths out comforter. ADLIB - pumpkin moving its paw slightly up/down. Slugging 1.00
- 169. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: Okay, Action Notes Steven steps back and turns. Slugging 1.10
- 170. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: you're all set up. Action Notes Pumpking turns counter clockwise. Peridot looks up. Slugging 1.12
- 171. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: You can stay here as long as you need. Slugging 2.10
- 172. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot kicks her legs out. Slugging 0.06
- 173. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 7 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot gets off toilet and crawls into tub. Slugging 0.06
- 174. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 8 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot gets off toilet and crawls into tub. Slugging 1.00
- 175. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 9 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: (miserable) wow... Slugging 2.08
- 178. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 12 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot climbs into her new bed. Slugging 0.08
- 179. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 13 Duration 00:02 Action Notes and lays down on her left side. Slugging 0.06
- 180. Scene 166 Duration 01:04 Panel 14 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: (miserable+muffled) thanks... Action Notes peridot climbs into her depression nest Slugging 2.10
- 184. Scene 168 Duration 00:22 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes steven sits on the ground.
- 185. Scene 168 Duration 00:22 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Action Notes steven sits on the ground.
- 186. Scene 168 Duration 00:22 Panel 5 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin runs IN - S.E. Steven reaches into his pocket. Slugging 0.12
- 187. Scene 168 Duration 00:22 Panel 6 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pulls out his phone. Slugging 0.06
- 189. Scene 168 Duration 00:22 Panel 8 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin walks in a circle counter clockwise at stevens side. Steven pushes buttons on his phone. Slugging 0.06
- 191. Scene 168 Duration 00:22 Panel 10 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Pumpkin settles down. Slugging 0.06
- 193. Scene 169 Duration 00:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes No missed calls. Slugging 2.06
- 195. Scene 170 Duration 00:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Dialog STEVEN: <sigh> Action Notes Steven slumps a little. Slugging 2.00
- 196. Scene 170 Duration 00:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:02 Action Notes Peridot looks at Steven. Slugging 0.14
- 197. Scene 170 Duration 00:10 Panel 4 Duration 00:02 Dialog PERIDOT: What do we do now? Slugging 3.08