Here are potential responses to the questions: Would you watch this film and why/why not? - The opening sequence captured my interest with the suspenseful chase scene and unanswered questions. It left me wanting to find out more about who the killers are and why they killed Lucy. However, I'd want to make sure the rest of the film delivers on the intrigue set up in the opening. What could be improved? - More characterization of Lucy could help the audience connect with her character beyond just being the target. Showing her personality in her normal life before she's stalked may generate more empathy. What aspects of the film did you think were good? - The pacing of the opening

2. SYNOPSIS Lucy Brown is your average girl
but she hold a dark secret and
keeps Important information away
from society. But its not to long
before someone wants this
information and goes after it. Lucy
notices this, she's being stalked
and attempts to get help from the
police but the detective is no use
and ignores her this
unfortunately results in her death
as she's caught and killed. Its up
to the detective to find her killers
and why they killed her.

3. KEY THEMES
 Crime
 Power
 Death
 Revenge and guilt
Crime Features heavily as
'Purgatory' the powerful enemy
that the detective will face.
Will do anything to get hold of the
information Lucy holds.
Purgatory will have unlimited
power with the information .
The plot revolves around Lucy's
death and why she was killed.
Our detective feels
personally responsible
for Lucy's death this
leads him to become
obsessed with finding
her killer/s

4. CHARACTER
DEVELOPMENTDetective –
The detective is personally responsible for the death of the women he ignored. He is a blunt
and rude character, very moody, he is a commanding character and is reminiscent of
Inspector Goole from 'An Inspector Calls', in the way that he speaks to a room of people
and has a heavy presence.
Three murderers –
The three murderers wanted information from the women and are part of a larger
organization. You don’t find out many character traits as they are anonymous characters
and you don’t really see their personality's, but the way the act towards the murdered
women is very heartless and emotionless, as it is a job for them.
Murdered women –
Looks after very important info which is why she is a target for murder. She has two sides to
her character, a secretive side and a normal everyday side, and her mood changes
depending on the scene.

5. OPENING
SEQUENCE PLANNING
SEQUENCE :
- women sitting at desk while the murderers are close by, and she pulls a memory card from
a computer.
- She notices murderers and threatens them, and they chase her from the room, whilst she's
recording herself as evidence on a handheld camera, which is a very paced scene, and is
aiming to make the audience feel more immersed in the action.
- Running scene and then the camera falls to the floor, before she's dragged out of shot.
SOUND :
Throughout this sequence you can hear a voice over of a detective briefing police officers.
It will also feature occasional shots of over the shoulder of the detective, or the detectives
back.
SETTING AND THEMES :
The setting will be in an office and outside.The camera will pan around the office at parts of
the opening sequence as to inform the viewer on the setting of the titles. The key themes of
crime will be shown through the policemen and detective, and him speaking of murder
throughout, and also power through the 3 stalkers and the memory
card.

6. STORYBOARD

7. TARGET AUDIENCE
PROFILE
Our target audience is a female
preferably aged 14-24 she's
you're stereotypical teenage
girl, likes boys, hangs out with
friends, goes to
Starbucks. She'd probably wear
the newest trends and is
always on her phone, either
texting or on social media.
Going to cinema is a 'must'
according to her, as she needs
to see the latest movies no
matter the cost.
Our target audience is a male
preferably aged 14-24 he's you're
stereotypical teenage boy, he
likes skateboarding, and is a bit
of a nerd and likes Star wars.
However, he is social and hangs
around with 'mates'. He doesn't
visit the cinema often but when
he does it's probably a horror
film or a thriller. Like our female
target he uses his phone to visit
social media sites, however he
doesn't use it as frequently as
the female.
We've come to a conclusion of both of our male and female target audiences equal each
other out making them both important to us as creators.

8. HOW WILL OUR OPENING SEQUENCE APPEAL TO
OUR TARGET AUDIENCE?
Our target audience is mainly
targeting 14-24 year old's, however
the film is more set for a female
audience as our research shows us
that females watch more of this
style of film. But this doesn't mean
the film is only for females, about
48% of our target audience will be
male. Our title sequence will engage our audience by
using mystery to draw them in as our title
sequence leaves a lot of questions e.g.who are the
killers, what's so important about this
information? As well as this they will want to see
how our detective deals with Lucy's death so we
are using drama as well to appeal to the younger
audience, and we are using relatable characters
so the females may be more interested

9. QUESTIONS.
 Would you watch this film and why/why not?
 What could be improved?
 What aspects of the film did you think were good?