Master Of Arts In Administration & Supervision
Educational Evaluation
Mr. James Paglinawan, Ph.D.
Prepared By:
Arnel Jimenez
An attention-grabbing "hook”
A preview of the three subtopics you will discuss in the
body paragraphs.
A thesis statement
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"No man is an island" and, as such, he is
constantly shaped and influenced by his
experiences. People learn by doing and,
accordingly, learn considerably more from their
mistakes than their success. For proof of this,
consider examples from both science and
everyday experience.
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• Topic sentence which states the first,
second and third subtopic and opens
with a transition
• Supporting details or examples
• An explanation of how this example
proves your thesis
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Take, by way of example, Thomas Edison. The
famed American inventor rose to prominence in the
late 19th century because of his successes, yes, but
even he felt that these successes were the result of
his many failures. He did not succeed in his work on
one of his most famous inventions, the lightbulb, on
his first try nor even on his hundred and first try. In
fact, it took him more than 1,000 attempts to make
the first incandescent bulb but, along the way, he
learned quite a deal. As he himself said, "I did not
fail a thousand times but instead succeeded in
finding a thousand ways it would not work." Thus
Edison demonstrated both in thought and action
how instructive mistakes can be.
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In a similar way, we are all like Edison in our own
way. Whenever we learn a new skill - be it riding a
bike, driving a car, or cooking a cake - we learn
from our mistakes. Few, if any, are ready to go
from training wheels to a marathon in a single
day but these early experiences (these so-called
mistakes) can help us improve our performance
over time. You cannot make a cake without
breaking a few eggs and, likewise, we learn by
doing and doing inevitably means making
mistakes.
BACK
• Concluding Transition, Reverse
"hook," and restatement of
thesis.
• Rephrasing main topic and
subtopics.
• Global statement or call to
action.
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In the end, then, one thing is clear:
mistakes do far more to help us
learn and improve than successes.
As examples from both science and
everyday experience can attest, if
we treat each mistake not as a
misstep but as a learning
experience the possibilities for self-
improvement are limitless.
BACK
1.Narrative Essays: Telling a Story
-the writer tells a story about a real-life
experience
2. Descriptive Essays: Painting a Picture
- A writer might describe a person, place,
object, or even memory of special significance.
3. Expository Essays: Just the Facts
- the writer explains or defines a topic, using
facts, statistics, and examples.
4. Persuasive Essays: Convince Me
- The writer must build a case using facts and
logic, as well as examples, expert opinion, and
sound reasoning
1.Most Effective in Assessing
Complex Learning Outcomes
2. Relatively Easy to Conduct
3. Emphasize Essential
Communication Skills in Complex
Academic Disciplines
4. Guessing is Eliminated
1. Difficult to Score
2. Scores are Unreliable
3. Limited Sample of Total
Instructional Content
4. Bluffing
Scoring an
Essay Test
(Tuckman)
Rating Method
- the teacher generally
is more interested in the
overall quality of the
answer than in specific
points.
1. Content
2. Organization
3. Process
4. Accuracy and
Reasonable
5. Completeness and
Internal Consistency
6. Originality and Creativity
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  • 1.
    Master Of ArtsIn Administration & Supervision Educational Evaluation Mr. James Paglinawan, Ph.D. Prepared By: Arnel Jimenez
  • 3.
    An attention-grabbing "hook” Apreview of the three subtopics you will discuss in the body paragraphs. A thesis statement NEXT
  • 4.
    "No man isan island" and, as such, he is constantly shaped and influenced by his experiences. People learn by doing and, accordingly, learn considerably more from their mistakes than their success. For proof of this, consider examples from both science and everyday experience. BACK
  • 5.
    • Topic sentencewhich states the first, second and third subtopic and opens with a transition • Supporting details or examples • An explanation of how this example proves your thesis NEXT
  • 6.
    Take, by wayof example, Thomas Edison. The famed American inventor rose to prominence in the late 19th century because of his successes, yes, but even he felt that these successes were the result of his many failures. He did not succeed in his work on one of his most famous inventions, the lightbulb, on his first try nor even on his hundred and first try. In fact, it took him more than 1,000 attempts to make the first incandescent bulb but, along the way, he learned quite a deal. As he himself said, "I did not fail a thousand times but instead succeeded in finding a thousand ways it would not work." Thus Edison demonstrated both in thought and action how instructive mistakes can be. NEXT
  • 7.
    In a similarway, we are all like Edison in our own way. Whenever we learn a new skill - be it riding a bike, driving a car, or cooking a cake - we learn from our mistakes. Few, if any, are ready to go from training wheels to a marathon in a single day but these early experiences (these so-called mistakes) can help us improve our performance over time. You cannot make a cake without breaking a few eggs and, likewise, we learn by doing and doing inevitably means making mistakes. BACK
  • 8.
    • Concluding Transition,Reverse "hook," and restatement of thesis. • Rephrasing main topic and subtopics. • Global statement or call to action. NEXT
  • 9.
    In the end,then, one thing is clear: mistakes do far more to help us learn and improve than successes. As examples from both science and everyday experience can attest, if we treat each mistake not as a misstep but as a learning experience the possibilities for self- improvement are limitless. BACK
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    1.Narrative Essays: Tellinga Story -the writer tells a story about a real-life experience 2. Descriptive Essays: Painting a Picture - A writer might describe a person, place, object, or even memory of special significance.
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    3. Expository Essays:Just the Facts - the writer explains or defines a topic, using facts, statistics, and examples. 4. Persuasive Essays: Convince Me - The writer must build a case using facts and logic, as well as examples, expert opinion, and sound reasoning
  • 17.
    1.Most Effective inAssessing Complex Learning Outcomes 2. Relatively Easy to Conduct 3. Emphasize Essential Communication Skills in Complex Academic Disciplines 4. Guessing is Eliminated
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    1. Difficult toScore 2. Scores are Unreliable 3. Limited Sample of Total Instructional Content 4. Bluffing
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    Rating Method - theteacher generally is more interested in the overall quality of the answer than in specific points.
  • 21.
    1. Content 2. Organization 3.Process 4. Accuracy and Reasonable 5. Completeness and Internal Consistency 6. Originality and Creativity
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