IELTS WIRTING
TASK 1
LINE CHART
Thế nào là Line chart?
Biểu đồ chứa một hoặc 1 số đường,
mỗi đường biểu diễn cho sự thay đổi một
yếu tố nào đó qua nhiều môc trong một
khoảng thời gian
1. Structures of Ielts Writing task
1
- Try to write………..paragraphs
They are:
1. Introduction
2. Overview
3. Details
4. Details
1. LINE CHART
How to get high score?
- Use a wide range of uncommon words
- Diversify structures
- Diversify time expression
- Give appropriate comparison with
complex structures
- Avoid mistakes
Xu hướng tăng
Xu hướng giảm
Tăng mạnh và giảm mạnh
Dao động
A experience(d) an erratic behaviour.
A witness(ed) a fluctuation period / an erratic behaviour between a high of A% in
2000 and a low of B % in 2010.
Không đổi
At the bottom end is/
was….
S peaked at 80 % .
S reached a peak of 80%.
Ngôn ngữ chỉ sự tương đối
Verb + adv
Be + adj
….. Adj +N
tăng rất nhanh ( V)
Một sự tăng rất nhanh
Examples
CÁC CẤU TRÚC XU HƯỚNG
Từ vựng miêu tả thời gian
Over the next (6 months), from…to, between…
and, during…
10%
(2010)
A
50%
(2015)
B
Increased to 50% - To: B%
Increased by 40% - BY B-A %
Cách sử dụng to/by
The rate of unemployment rose to nearly 10% in 2010
( Tỷ lệ thất nghiệp tăng đến 10% vào năm 2010)
The rate of unemployment rose by approximately 10%
in 2010
( Tỷ lệ thất nghiệp tăng lên 10% vào năm 2010)
4 Cấu trúc trong writing task 1
1.The number of cars sold rose sharply from 40% in
2000 to 80% in 2014
 2.There was/ is + (a/an + Adj + N) + in the…
3. The number of cars sold…. ( experienced/
witnessed/ saw)
 4. The number of cars sold….
4 Cấu trúc trong writing task 1
1.The number of cars (which were sold) sold rose sharply
from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014
S + V + adv
Cấu trúc trong writing task 1
1.The number of cars sold rose sharply from 40% in
2000 to 80% in 2014
2. There was a sharp rise ( a/an + adj + N) in the
number of cars sold from 40% to 80% in a period of 14
years.
There was/ is + (a/an + Adj + N) + in the…
Cấu trúc trong writing task 1
-The number of cars sold rose sharply from 40% in
2000 to 80% in 2014
The number of cars sold experienced a sharp rise
from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014
S+ experienced/ witnessed/ saw + (a/an + adj + N)
Cấu trúc trong writing task 1
-The number of cars sold rose sharply from 40% in
2000 to 80% in 2014
The number of cars sold soared/ rocketed from 40%
in 2000 to 80% in 2014
A + soared/rocketed +…..
S + strong V
Cấu trúc trong writing task 1
-The number of cars sold rose sharply from 40% in 2000 to
80% in 2014
There was a sharp increase (a/an + adj +
increase/decrease) in the number of cars sold from 40% in
2000 to 80% in 2014
The number of car sold experienced/witnessed/ saw a
sharp increase, rising from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014
 The number of cars sold rocketed from 40% in 2000 to
80% in 2014
1. The price of oil decreased
substantially from 70% to 22% over a
7-year period.
2. The figure climbed significantly by
35% from 2010 to 2017.
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Số tiền chi tiêu cho Thực phầm và nước uống ở
Việt Nam giảm dần từ 60% vào năm 1998 xuống
còn 40% vào năm 2010 trước khi giảm mạnh 30%
trong 10 năm tiêp theo
Số tiền chi cho A…: The spending on A, The
expenditure on A, The disbursement of A ./ The
expense of A.
Số tiền chi tiêu cho Thực phầm và nước uống ở Việt Nam giảm dần từ
60% vào năm 1998 xuống còn 40% vào năm 2010 trước khi giảm mạnh 30%
trong 10 năm tiêp theo
Số tiền chi cho…: The spending on A, The expenditure on A, The
disbursement of/ on A./ The expense on A.
C1: The expenditure on food and drink in Vietnam decreased gradually from
60% in 1998 to 40% in 2010 before plummeting by 30% in the next 10 years.
C2: After gradually decreasing from 60% in 1998 to 40% in 2010, the
expenditure on food and drink in Vietnam plummeted by 30% in the next
10 years
C3:The expenditure on food and drink in Vietnam decreased gradually from
60% in 1998 to 40% in 2010, followed by a sharp fall of 30% in the next 10
years.
Cách nói về tương lai
1 Có thể dự đoán rằng, giá dầu sẽ giảm mạnh
từ năm 2022 đến năm 2025
Cách nói về tương lai
1. Expectations indicate that the oil price will drop dramatically from 2022
to 2050.
2. It is predicted that the oil price will drop dramatically
3. The oil price is predicted to drop dramatically.
Structures for Comparisons
Superlatives
 A ranks first when it comes to S
 The S is the highest in A
 The highest S is recorded in A
 A captured/ took/reigned the first post with …%, followed by
B and C with X%, and Y%, respectively.
Eg: The group who held a professional degree ranked first when
it comes to medium weekly earnings.
Eg: The number of male research students was the highest in
biology.
Eg: The highest figure of female research students was recorded
in biology
A ranks first when it comes to S
Số lượng học sinh TP dẫn đầu khi nói đến/ về lĩnh vực giải
thưởng quốc gia.
The number of Tp gifted students ranks first when it comes
to Academic national prizes.
Số lượng học sinh Thái Phiên dẫn đầu khi nói về tỉ lệ đỗ cấp
3.
The number of Tphien students ranks first when it comes to
the ratio of students who passed the high school entrance
exam/ passing the high school entrance exam.
The S is the highest in A
The highest S is recorded in A
Số lượng học sinh nữ tham gia các clb nghệ thuật/ là/
cao nhất ở trường Cấp 2 Chu Văn An.
The number of female students (who take part in /
participate in art club) participating in art club is the
highest in Chu Van An Secondary school.
The highest number of female students participating
in art club was recorded in ChuVan An Secondary
school.
Lead/ top the table/ list
Số lượng hoa khôi của Trần Nguyên Hãn
đứng đầu các trường cấp 3 trên địa bàn TP
Hải Phòng.
The number of TNH hot girls tops the list
among high schools in Hai Phong city.
A captured/ took/reigned the first post with …%,
followed by B and C with…%, and….%, respectively.
Số ca nhiễm covid 19 là cao nhất ở Tp Hồ Chí Minh ,
với 16K ca, theo sau bởi Hà Nội và Hải phòng, lần lượt
là 10k và 8K ca.
 The number of Covid 19 cases in Ho Chi Minh city
captured/ took/ reigned the first post with 16 thousand
cases, followed by the figure for Ha Noi and Hai Phong,
with 10 thousand and 8 thousand cases, respectively.
Comparatives
The S in A is higher than B
(The number of male students doing research) in biology
is higher than that of female students/their counterparts.
There is a substantial/ considerable/ remarkable gap/
difference/ discrepancy/ disproportion between the S in A
and B
The difference/ discrepancy/ disproportion between the S
in A and B is insignificant/ minimal/ slight.
`
Comparatives
The difference/ discrepancy/ disproportion
between the S in A and B is insignificant/ minimal/
slight.
 The discrepancy between the number of female
and male students doing research in Biology is
insignificant/ minimal/ slight.
Example
There was a remarkable gap between male
and female students in physics.
The statistic of male students in Vet
surpassed that of females by a narrow
margin.
Equal degree
The S in A is as high as B
The S in A is (almost) equal to B
The S in A and B is almost equal.
Practice 1:
The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four
different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting
the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Practice 1:
Overview:
- Xu hướng: Trong khi số người đến Pa vs Pier tăng , số người đến 2 địa điểm còn lại
giảm ( có sự thay đổi theo năm)
- So sánh: Cao nhất/ thấp nhất
Plan
- Paraphrase task heading, using some different words.
- Summary paragraph
[1] the % visiting the Pier and the Pavilion increased
[2] the % visiting the other attractions fell.
- Paragraph 3: report some figures and report trends for
the Pier and the Pavilion. Include comparisons.
- Paragraph 4: report some figures and report trends for
the Festival and the Art Gallery. Include comparisons.
Introduction
The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to
England who visited four different attractions in
Brighton.
The graph illustrates the proportion of visitors to
England who went to four different tourist attractions in
Brighton between 1980 and 2010.
Practice 1:
Overall, it is clear that the percentage visiting the Pier and the Pavilion increased over
the period while the proportion of visitors to the other attractions fell. The number of
visitors to Pavillion was the highest in most years.
Overview
Overall, it is clear that the percentage visiting the Pier
and the Pavilion increased over the period while the
proportion of visitors to the other attractions fell. The
number of visitors to Pavillion was the highest in most
years.
Detail 1
In 1980, only 10% of tourists to
England went to Brighton Pier.
Despite some minor fluctuations, this
figure rose significantly from about
12% in 2000 to 22% in 2010. The
percentage visiting the Pavilion also
increased, starting at 23% in 1980 it
then reached the peak of 50% in
1995 before declining to 35% in
2000 and then to about 30% in 2010,
slightly higher than the Festival.
Detail 2
The most popular Brighton attraction
in 1980 for visitors to England was
the Festival. Although 30% of these (
people to E) attended the Festival in
1980, by 2010 this percentage had
fallen slightly to 28%.In 1980, the
figure for visitors to the Art Gallery
was 21% before reaching a peak of
38%; however, this then decreased
dramatically to less than 10% in
2010. It was, therefore, the least
popular of the attractions at the end of
the period.
Step to study writing task 1
While u write:
- Analyze the question (3’)
- Write the first time (15’)
- Check your answer (2’)- grammar ( S_V
agreement, preposition, punctuation,
spelling), repetition-paraphrase.
Step to study writing task 1
After you write:
Rewrite task 1 after you get the score and
feedback from the teacher.
You MUST:
- Don’t repeat your mistakes in other tests
- Don’t lose your point due to wrong
spelling.
Ielts Writing Task 1 Line chart - new.pptx

Ielts Writing Task 1 Line chart - new.pptx

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    Thế nào làLine chart? Biểu đồ chứa một hoặc 1 số đường, mỗi đường biểu diễn cho sự thay đổi một yếu tố nào đó qua nhiều môc trong một khoảng thời gian
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    1. Structures ofIelts Writing task 1 - Try to write………..paragraphs They are: 1. Introduction 2. Overview 3. Details 4. Details
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    1. LINE CHART Howto get high score? - Use a wide range of uncommon words - Diversify structures - Diversify time expression - Give appropriate comparison with complex structures - Avoid mistakes
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    Tăng mạnh vàgiảm mạnh
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    Dao động A experience(d)an erratic behaviour. A witness(ed) a fluctuation period / an erratic behaviour between a high of A% in 2000 and a low of B % in 2010.
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    At the bottomend is/ was…. S peaked at 80 % . S reached a peak of 80%.
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    Ngôn ngữ chỉsự tương đối
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    Verb + adv Be+ adj ….. Adj +N tăng rất nhanh ( V) Một sự tăng rất nhanh
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    CÁC CẤU TRÚCXU HƯỚNG
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    Từ vựng miêutả thời gian Over the next (6 months), from…to, between… and, during…
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    10% (2010) A 50% (2015) B Increased to 50%- To: B% Increased by 40% - BY B-A %
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    Cách sử dụngto/by The rate of unemployment rose to nearly 10% in 2010 ( Tỷ lệ thất nghiệp tăng đến 10% vào năm 2010) The rate of unemployment rose by approximately 10% in 2010 ( Tỷ lệ thất nghiệp tăng lên 10% vào năm 2010)
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    4 Cấu trúctrong writing task 1 1.The number of cars sold rose sharply from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014  2.There was/ is + (a/an + Adj + N) + in the… 3. The number of cars sold…. ( experienced/ witnessed/ saw)  4. The number of cars sold….
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    4 Cấu trúctrong writing task 1 1.The number of cars (which were sold) sold rose sharply from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014 S + V + adv
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    Cấu trúc trongwriting task 1 1.The number of cars sold rose sharply from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014 2. There was a sharp rise ( a/an + adj + N) in the number of cars sold from 40% to 80% in a period of 14 years. There was/ is + (a/an + Adj + N) + in the…
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    Cấu trúc trongwriting task 1 -The number of cars sold rose sharply from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014 The number of cars sold experienced a sharp rise from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014 S+ experienced/ witnessed/ saw + (a/an + adj + N)
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    Cấu trúc trongwriting task 1 -The number of cars sold rose sharply from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014 The number of cars sold soared/ rocketed from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014 A + soared/rocketed +….. S + strong V
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    Cấu trúc trongwriting task 1 -The number of cars sold rose sharply from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014 There was a sharp increase (a/an + adj + increase/decrease) in the number of cars sold from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014 The number of car sold experienced/witnessed/ saw a sharp increase, rising from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014  The number of cars sold rocketed from 40% in 2000 to 80% in 2014
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    1. The priceof oil decreased substantially from 70% to 22% over a 7-year period. 2. The figure climbed significantly by 35% from 2010 to 2017.
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    Số tiền chitiêu cho Thực phầm và nước uống ở Việt Nam giảm dần từ 60% vào năm 1998 xuống còn 40% vào năm 2010 trước khi giảm mạnh 30% trong 10 năm tiêp theo Số tiền chi cho A…: The spending on A, The expenditure on A, The disbursement of A ./ The expense of A.
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    Số tiền chitiêu cho Thực phầm và nước uống ở Việt Nam giảm dần từ 60% vào năm 1998 xuống còn 40% vào năm 2010 trước khi giảm mạnh 30% trong 10 năm tiêp theo Số tiền chi cho…: The spending on A, The expenditure on A, The disbursement of/ on A./ The expense on A. C1: The expenditure on food and drink in Vietnam decreased gradually from 60% in 1998 to 40% in 2010 before plummeting by 30% in the next 10 years. C2: After gradually decreasing from 60% in 1998 to 40% in 2010, the expenditure on food and drink in Vietnam plummeted by 30% in the next 10 years C3:The expenditure on food and drink in Vietnam decreased gradually from 60% in 1998 to 40% in 2010, followed by a sharp fall of 30% in the next 10 years.
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    Cách nói vềtương lai 1 Có thể dự đoán rằng, giá dầu sẽ giảm mạnh từ năm 2022 đến năm 2025
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    Cách nói vềtương lai 1. Expectations indicate that the oil price will drop dramatically from 2022 to 2050. 2. It is predicted that the oil price will drop dramatically 3. The oil price is predicted to drop dramatically.
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    Superlatives  A ranksfirst when it comes to S  The S is the highest in A  The highest S is recorded in A  A captured/ took/reigned the first post with …%, followed by B and C with X%, and Y%, respectively. Eg: The group who held a professional degree ranked first when it comes to medium weekly earnings. Eg: The number of male research students was the highest in biology. Eg: The highest figure of female research students was recorded in biology
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    A ranks firstwhen it comes to S Số lượng học sinh TP dẫn đầu khi nói đến/ về lĩnh vực giải thưởng quốc gia. The number of Tp gifted students ranks first when it comes to Academic national prizes. Số lượng học sinh Thái Phiên dẫn đầu khi nói về tỉ lệ đỗ cấp 3. The number of Tphien students ranks first when it comes to the ratio of students who passed the high school entrance exam/ passing the high school entrance exam.
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    The S isthe highest in A The highest S is recorded in A Số lượng học sinh nữ tham gia các clb nghệ thuật/ là/ cao nhất ở trường Cấp 2 Chu Văn An. The number of female students (who take part in / participate in art club) participating in art club is the highest in Chu Van An Secondary school. The highest number of female students participating in art club was recorded in ChuVan An Secondary school.
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    Lead/ top thetable/ list Số lượng hoa khôi của Trần Nguyên Hãn đứng đầu các trường cấp 3 trên địa bàn TP Hải Phòng. The number of TNH hot girls tops the list among high schools in Hai Phong city.
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    A captured/ took/reignedthe first post with …%, followed by B and C with…%, and….%, respectively. Số ca nhiễm covid 19 là cao nhất ở Tp Hồ Chí Minh , với 16K ca, theo sau bởi Hà Nội và Hải phòng, lần lượt là 10k và 8K ca.  The number of Covid 19 cases in Ho Chi Minh city captured/ took/ reigned the first post with 16 thousand cases, followed by the figure for Ha Noi and Hai Phong, with 10 thousand and 8 thousand cases, respectively.
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    Comparatives The S inA is higher than B (The number of male students doing research) in biology is higher than that of female students/their counterparts. There is a substantial/ considerable/ remarkable gap/ difference/ discrepancy/ disproportion between the S in A and B The difference/ discrepancy/ disproportion between the S in A and B is insignificant/ minimal/ slight. `
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    Comparatives The difference/ discrepancy/disproportion between the S in A and B is insignificant/ minimal/ slight.  The discrepancy between the number of female and male students doing research in Biology is insignificant/ minimal/ slight.
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    Example There was aremarkable gap between male and female students in physics. The statistic of male students in Vet surpassed that of females by a narrow margin.
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    Equal degree The Sin A is as high as B The S in A is (almost) equal to B The S in A and B is almost equal.
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    Practice 1: The linegraph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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    Practice 1: Overview: - Xuhướng: Trong khi số người đến Pa vs Pier tăng , số người đến 2 địa điểm còn lại giảm ( có sự thay đổi theo năm) - So sánh: Cao nhất/ thấp nhất
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    Plan - Paraphrase taskheading, using some different words. - Summary paragraph [1] the % visiting the Pier and the Pavilion increased [2] the % visiting the other attractions fell. - Paragraph 3: report some figures and report trends for the Pier and the Pavilion. Include comparisons. - Paragraph 4: report some figures and report trends for the Festival and the Art Gallery. Include comparisons.
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    Introduction The line graphbelow shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. The graph illustrates the proportion of visitors to England who went to four different tourist attractions in Brighton between 1980 and 2010.
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    Practice 1: Overall, itis clear that the percentage visiting the Pier and the Pavilion increased over the period while the proportion of visitors to the other attractions fell. The number of visitors to Pavillion was the highest in most years.
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    Overview Overall, it isclear that the percentage visiting the Pier and the Pavilion increased over the period while the proportion of visitors to the other attractions fell. The number of visitors to Pavillion was the highest in most years.
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    Detail 1 In 1980,only 10% of tourists to England went to Brighton Pier. Despite some minor fluctuations, this figure rose significantly from about 12% in 2000 to 22% in 2010. The percentage visiting the Pavilion also increased, starting at 23% in 1980 it then reached the peak of 50% in 1995 before declining to 35% in 2000 and then to about 30% in 2010, slightly higher than the Festival.
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    Detail 2 The mostpopular Brighton attraction in 1980 for visitors to England was the Festival. Although 30% of these ( people to E) attended the Festival in 1980, by 2010 this percentage had fallen slightly to 28%.In 1980, the figure for visitors to the Art Gallery was 21% before reaching a peak of 38%; however, this then decreased dramatically to less than 10% in 2010. It was, therefore, the least popular of the attractions at the end of the period.
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    Step to studywriting task 1 While u write: - Analyze the question (3’) - Write the first time (15’) - Check your answer (2’)- grammar ( S_V agreement, preposition, punctuation, spelling), repetition-paraphrase.
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    Step to studywriting task 1 After you write: Rewrite task 1 after you get the score and feedback from the teacher. You MUST: - Don’t repeat your mistakes in other tests - Don’t lose your point due to wrong spelling.