Chris Flood, content and search lead, Cancer Research UK
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9. Bad storytelling isâŚ
⢠Just stating your company mission
statement
⢠Spewing jargon that describes what
you do â rather than why it matters
to someone else
⢠Boring
⢠About organisations, not people
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A good story is one I care aboutâŚ
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A good story is one I care aboutâŚ
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13. âŚand is told like a human
⢠Keep your sentences short (20
words max)
⢠Prefer short words, and donât
overdo punctuation
⢠Be concise and use everyday
English
⢠Be authentic
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20. How are all of these iconic movie plots
being ruined?
⢠Following a series of shark attacks at a beach
resort, the local sheriff finds and kills the shark.
⢠After many adventures, Frodo takes the Ring to
Mount Doom and destroys it.
⢠Luke Skywalker takes aim and makes the crucial
shot, destroying the Death Star.
21. How are all of these iconic movie plots
being ruined?
⢠Following a series of shark attacks at a beach
resort, the local sheriff finds and kills the shark.
⢠After many adventures, Frodo takes the Ring to
Mount Doom and destroys it.
⢠Luke Skywalker takes aim and makes the crucial
shot, destroying the Death Star.
All leaving out one of the key story elements:
the crisis
22. Whatâs the CAT?
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Story CAT
Cinderella C â Wants to find Prince Charming but
her evil stepmother/sisters want to keep
her as a maid and wonât let her out of the
house.
A â Fairy Godmother grants her wish and
she is able to go to the ball. Meets Prince
Charming, loses a shoe.
T â Prince falls in love, searches for the
owner of the lost shoe and Cinderella
finally gets to be with her Prince
Charming.
23. Whatâs the CAT?
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Story CAT
Cinderella C â Wants to find Prince Charming but
her evil stepmother/sisters want to keep
her as a maid and wonât let her out of the
house.
A â Fairy Godmother grants her wish and
she is able to go to the ball. Meets Prince
Charming, loses a shoe.
T â Prince falls in love, searches for the
owner of the lost shoe and Cinderella
finally gets to be with her Prince
Charming.
27. People who are smarter than meâŚ
⢠Simon Sinek â Start with Why
⢠Andy Maslen â Persuasive copywriting
⢠Dan Portnoy â The Non-Profit Narrative
⢠Annette Simmons â Story Factor
⢠Jonah Sachs â Winning the Story Wars
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29. The power of human stories:
how to be an authentic storyteller
28 February 2019
London
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