Desperate
By
Aileen Garcia
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FADE IN: INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Two men, Paul (32) and Eli (23) are arguing in their living
room.
ELI
I don’t know.
PAUL
What do you mean you don’t know?
Don’t be such a coward.
ELI
A coward, really?
PAUL
Yeah. A coward. Why don’t you grow
up and be a man.
Eli laughs.
ELI
You think men do this?
PAUL
Men who have nothing do this?
ELI
Why don’t you try getting a job
Paul.
PAUL
Why can’t you understand that this
is the only option.
ELI
It’s not. That’s my problem.
PAUL
If we do this right, nothing bad
will happen.
ELI
I don’t trust you. Not after what
happened at the bar last week.
Paul smirks.
PAUL
That was an accident.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 2.
ELI
An accident? That was no fucking
accident!
PAUL
She asked for it!
ELI
She asked for it?....Are you crazy?
I was there. She was scared out of
her mind. If I hadn’t....
Paul interrupts him.
PAUL
If you hadn’t what?
ELI
If I hadn’t intervened, who knows
where she or you would be right
now.
PAUL
You think you saved me? A scared
prick like you, saving me?
ELI
I don’t care what you think. I’m
not doing this. I have Emily to
worry about.
PAUL
That’s right. Your girlfriend. How
is she anyways?
ELI
Leave her out of this.
PAUL
I can’t believe you care about her
more than me. Your own brother.
ELI
I do care about you. I wouldn’t be
here listening to your insane
ideas, if I didn’t.
Look, I know you’re mad at the
world. It’s fucked you over. But
this is not the answer. Get your
shit together Paul.
Eli exits the house.

Desperate

  • 1.
  • 2.
    FADE IN: INT.LIVING ROOM - NIGHT Two men, Paul (32) and Eli (23) are arguing in their living room. ELI I don’t know. PAUL What do you mean you don’t know? Don’t be such a coward. ELI A coward, really? PAUL Yeah. A coward. Why don’t you grow up and be a man. Eli laughs. ELI You think men do this? PAUL Men who have nothing do this? ELI Why don’t you try getting a job Paul. PAUL Why can’t you understand that this is the only option. ELI It’s not. That’s my problem. PAUL If we do this right, nothing bad will happen. ELI I don’t trust you. Not after what happened at the bar last week. Paul smirks. PAUL That was an accident. (CONTINUED)
  • 3.
    CONTINUED: 2. ELI An accident?That was no fucking accident! PAUL She asked for it! ELI She asked for it?....Are you crazy? I was there. She was scared out of her mind. If I hadn’t.... Paul interrupts him. PAUL If you hadn’t what? ELI If I hadn’t intervened, who knows where she or you would be right now. PAUL You think you saved me? A scared prick like you, saving me? ELI I don’t care what you think. I’m not doing this. I have Emily to worry about. PAUL That’s right. Your girlfriend. How is she anyways? ELI Leave her out of this. PAUL I can’t believe you care about her more than me. Your own brother. ELI I do care about you. I wouldn’t be here listening to your insane ideas, if I didn’t. Look, I know you’re mad at the world. It’s fucked you over. But this is not the answer. Get your shit together Paul. Eli exits the house.