The document describes changes made to a poster. The first change was brightening the color of the word "HOME" in "HOMESICK" as it was too faint. Next, the logos at the bottom were moved further down so the title and text took up less space and the image could be the main focus. Finally, the release date was added back in to follow magazine conventions and include all needed information for the audience.

1. The firstchange was
made to our posterwas
to slightlybrightenthe
colourof HOME in
HOMESICK. We got
some feedbackthat
helpedussee thatit
wasn’tbrightenough
and blendedinwiththe
hair a little.
We then moved
the logosat the
bottomof the
posterfurther
downas we and
our peersthought
that the title and
small print could
be lowersoit did
not take up so
much of the poster
and the image was
more the main
focus.
Lastly,we added
the release date as
it appearsto have
gone,sowe re- did
thisto make it fit
withthe
conventionsof a
magazine and
include everything
that the audience
neededtoknow.