Assignment Objectives :  Enhance and/or improve critical thinking and media literacy skills by:                                  1. Developing a clear and concise thesis statement (an argument) in response to the                                      following question:  Does the film have the power to transform political sensibilities?                                 2. Writing an outline for a five paragraph analytical essay building on a clear and                                      concise thesis statement, including topic sentences and secondary supports.                                 3. Identifying and explaining three scenes from the film text in support of the thesis                                      statement/argument.                                 4.  Writing an introductory paragraph for the outlined analytical essay Be sure to read thoroughly the writing conventions below before beginning this assignment .   Note: You are NOT writing a full essay; rather, you are outlining an analytical essay by completing the dialogue boxes below. Writing a Critical Review (analytical) Essay Every essay that you write for this course must have a clear thesis, placed (perhaps) somewhere near the end of the introductory paragraph. Simply stated, a THESIS (or ARGUMENT) expresses, preferably in a single sentence, the point you want to make about the text that is the subject of your essay.  A  THESIS should be an opinion or interpretation of the text, not merely a fact or observation.  The best possible THESIS will answer some specific questions about the text. Very often the THESIS contains an outline of the major points to be covered in the essay. A possible thesis for an essay on character in Perry Henzell’s  The Harder They Come might read somewhat as follows: The protagonist of THTC is not a hero in the epic sense of the word, but a self-centered young man bred of economic oppression and cultural dependency. The characters in this film have no real psychological depth, but are markers for a society of consumption and momentary glory.  (You might then go on to exemplify from the text and argue in favor or against this interpretation: your essay need not hold to only one perspective.) What single, clear QUESTION does the above THESIS attempt to answer? Each essay should be organized into five (5) paragraphs, each based on one of two to four major ideas, which will comprise the BODY of the essay. Each paragraph must have a topic sentence, often (but not always) towards the beginning of the paragraph, which clearly states the ARGUMENT or point to be made in the paragraph. Following the thesis set forth above, the first paragraph might begin with a sentence like “Ivan’s desires and his destiny are signaled in the opening shots of the film, where the friendly, jumbled interior of the bus is contrasted with Ivan’s first view of the outer world: a world of shiny white cars and beautiful women.” Avoid topic sentences that fail to make an in ...

1. Assignment Objectives
: Enhance and/or improve critical thinking and media literacy
skills by:
1. Developing a clear and concise thesis
statement (an argument) in response to the
following question:
Does the film have the power to transform political
sensibilities?
2. Writing an outline for a five paragraph
analytical essay building on a clear and
concise thesis statement, including
topic sentences and secondary supports.
3. Identifying and explaining three scenes
from the film text in support of the thesis
statement/argument.
4. Writing an introductory paragraph for
the outlined analytical essay
Be sure to read thoroughly the writing conventions below before
beginning this assignment
.
Note: You are NOT writing a full essay; rather, you are
outlining an analytical essay by completing the dialogue boxes
below.
Writing a Critical Review (analytical) Essay
Every essay that you write for this course must have a clear

2. thesis, placed (perhaps) somewhere near the end of the
introductory paragraph. Simply stated, a THESIS (or
ARGUMENT) expresses, preferably in a single sentence, the
point you want to make about the text that is the subject of your
essay.
A
THESIS should be an opinion or interpretation of the text, not
merely a fact or observation. The best possible THESIS will
answer some specific questions about the text. Very often the
THESIS contains an outline of the major points to be covered in
the essay. A possible thesis for an essay on character in Perry
Henzell’s
The Harder They Come might read somewhat as follows:
The protagonist of THTC is not a hero in the epic sense of the
word, but a self-centered young man bred of economic
oppression and cultural dependency. The characters in this film
have no real psychological depth, but are markers for a society
of consumption and momentary glory.
(You might then go on to exemplify from the text and argue in
favor or against this interpretation: your essay need not hold to
only one perspective.)
What single, clear QUESTION does the above THESIS attempt
to answer?
Each essay should be organized into five (5) paragraphs, each
based on one of two to four major ideas, which will comprise
the BODY of the essay. Each paragraph must have a topic
sentence, often (but not always) towards the beginning of the
paragraph, which clearly states the ARGUMENT or point to be
made in the paragraph. Following the thesis set forth above, the
first paragraph might begin with a sentence like “Ivan’s desires
and his destiny are signaled in the opening shots of the film,
where the friendly, jumbled interior of the bus is contrasted
with Ivan’s first view of the outer world: a world of shiny white
cars and beautiful women.” Avoid topic sentences that fail to
make an interpretative statement about the work or that merely

3. state something any reader might observe; for example, “The
first characters we see are country people on a bus to town.”
Underline the THESIS and each TOPIC SENTENCE in every
critical review essay you submit. This exercise will force you to
make certain that you have expressed and developed the ideas in
your essay clearly and logically. (In other words, do not do this
exercise five minutes before you submit the essay but, rather, as
you are working on the very first draft.)
Always use present tense verbs in your critical review essays
about film texts. Present tense is the verb tense of analysis
.
Past tense, on the other hand, is the tense of narration. In each
essay, you will be analyzing a particular text, not retelling or
summarizing the story. If you find yourself slipping into past
tense as you compose, you are probably narrating rather than
analyzing.
Use specific passages from the text to support each point that
you make in your essay. You may simply refer to an event in the
text, or you may paraphrase what a character or the narrator
says. But the best EVIDENCE will most often be direct quotes
from the text.
The Introductory Paragraph – Some Approaches
In your essay, an opening or introductory paragraph may not
always be the first one you write. But it
will
be the first one your readers read and you need to engage your
readers’ attention and interest and present all you need to make
your thesis clear and convincing.
Some Pitfalls to Avoid

4. Dictionary definitions: Define key terms and concepts in your
opening paragraph, but don’t quote directly from the dictionary
to do so. Use a dictionary – more than one dictionary – to
formulate the definition in your own words.
Generalizations about “life,” “society,” “people today,” etc.:
You don’t want to begin your essay with the kind of statement
that teeters on that fine line between opinion (those ideas you
will go on to prove) and belief (those ideas unprovable with the
evidence offered by the text). Rather than a statement like,
“Almost every man has a sense of pride and will go to war to
prove it,” try something more specific to the text you are
analyzing. “The character of Roland exemplifies how personal
pride and personal valor do not always lead to the most
fortunate conclusion.”
The painfully obvious: Avoid opening statements like “Dante’s
Inferno is about a journey to hell,” or "Roland is the hero of
The Song of Roland,” unless such statements are in some way
controversial and challenging to traditional interpretations of
the text. Try to avoid any kind of tautological formula –
“something is something else” – in the opening sentence,
especially, but also elsewhere as an “argument.”
Try to distinguish between historical or biographical fact
:
“Dante’s
Inferno was written in fourteenth-century Italy,” and
interpretation, especially when you are considering the intention
of an author: “Dante wrote his Inferno to expose the problem of
Florentine political corruption to the world.” The latter may be
a part of your theory or thesis (or conclusion) but if you use it
as a statement of fact (an “intentional fallacy”) you will have to
prove it rather than merely argue it – a slippery and difficult
and perhaps not particularly useful task. Beware also of using

5. vague or imprecise generalizations of terms such as “dramatic,”
“realistic,” or “critical,” which differ in their literary and
historical significance.
Challenges to Meet
Try for a (syntactically) shapely and relevant opening sentence:
be thoughtful and original and persuasive. Always look for
interesting ways into your essay: an epigraph, perhaps, or an
important episode that seems to set the stage for what you want
to say, or a succinct comparison with another well-known work,
which will help your reader understand the point you want to
make.
Always (particularly in a comparative essay) identify your texts
early on. (Usually with full title, full authors’ names, and
date/period of publication.)
Think of your thesis statement as the logical goal of the first
paragraph. Everything you say here should lead towards (or
from) that thesis. Anything that doesn’t lead in that direction –
unless you are presenting a view different from yours, which
you want to argue against—doesn’t belong in your paragraph.
Think of the paragraph as a funnel, where the contents are being
concentrated and filtered to one end.
Critical Review 4
Using proper MLA bibliographic formatting, cite the film text
in the box to the right:
http://www.bibme.org/citation-guide/MLA/film
1.Develop a thesis pertaining to the assigned film text and
whether or not it, the film, in your view has the power to
transform one’s political sensibilities. Your argument should

6. express your point of view regarding the politics of difference,
political sensibilities, and political transformation(s) as related
to the film. Remember, you’re writing (developing) an
analytical essay. Submit your thesis statement in the box to the
right:
2. Develop three (3) topic sentences that articulate the major
ideas that will comprise the body of your essay. Remember that
your topic sentences should clearly state the argument or point
to be made in the respective paragraphs. Submit your topic
sentences in the box to the right:
3. Identify three (3) scenes from the film that support your
thesis statement. Briefly explain
in the box to the right:
4. Lastly, fully develop your introductory paragraph. Remember
that the best possible thesis will answer some specific question
about the text. In this case a question related to the film’s
power to transform political sensibilities regarding difference.
Enter text in the box to the right: