Language Content Style Proof read:
Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation
Headlines
Use of
alliteration
rocky road
There is
also a
used a
rhetorical
question
as well as
a
methapor
with “Will
the South
rise
again?”
Other
than that
there is
not much
The story
is about
the
London
Broncos in
rugby its
use is to
inform the
public
about
what is
going on
this
article Is
more
formal
with its
question
and
awnser
but it is
also
done in
a chatty
way
rugby - no full stop at the end
A. I feel after coaching in super
league and coaching the national
team I can bring experience to a
club who has been almost
revolutionised in the way of results, I
think I can help cement the winning
mentality that surrounds this place
at the moment.- needed a quotation
mark
“the club has finally settled in one
place it is and we can start
spreading the message about rugby
league in a city that is largely
dominated by other sports football
and our cross code rivals.- no end
quotation
The Broncos have taken a leaf out
of their close neighbours book the
London Skolars and settled down in
one location and then really start to
branch out into the community and
start to recruit closer to home and
more importantly have been doing
and not sell them on to make a
profit, but to keep hold of them and
start to build a team of home grown
southern players and get London
back challenging for Super League
spots.- needs some full stops
* What kind of headline
is it? What techniques
are used?
(Pun/Alliteration/Informal
language etc)
Will the South rise
again?”
Alliteration
Formal
Rhetorical question

Analysing copy text, writing editing

  • 1.
    Language Content StyleProof read: Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation Headlines Use of alliteration rocky road There is also a used a rhetorical question as well as a methapor with “Will the South rise again?” Other than that there is not much The story is about the London Broncos in rugby its use is to inform the public about what is going on this article Is more formal with its question and awnser but it is also done in a chatty way rugby - no full stop at the end A. I feel after coaching in super league and coaching the national team I can bring experience to a club who has been almost revolutionised in the way of results, I think I can help cement the winning mentality that surrounds this place at the moment.- needed a quotation mark “the club has finally settled in one place it is and we can start spreading the message about rugby league in a city that is largely dominated by other sports football and our cross code rivals.- no end quotation The Broncos have taken a leaf out of their close neighbours book the London Skolars and settled down in one location and then really start to branch out into the community and start to recruit closer to home and more importantly have been doing and not sell them on to make a profit, but to keep hold of them and start to build a team of home grown southern players and get London back challenging for Super League spots.- needs some full stops * What kind of headline is it? What techniques are used? (Pun/Alliteration/Informal language etc) Will the South rise again?” Alliteration Formal Rhetorical question