1. A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: William
General A very good start to the year, you have created a body of work that shows clear cohesion
between the two part s of unit 3. Your written work is strong but you must make sure all
visual documentation is up to the same standard.
Task Assessment Criteria
Covered
Feedback AO band
Leaflet AO1 An excellent leaflet task, you have clearly thought
about the layout and design of different leaflets
and the fact you have been to exhibitions to find
them shows a commitment to the task. Your
research demonstrates you’re fluent ability to
glean significant information from your chosen
sources. A very well thought out and executed task
that will stand out as an example to future
students well done.
AO1: Fluent
Practical Work and
Gallery responses.
AO1
AO3
A poignant and moving set of observation the
explanation behind why you have turned the
images to black and white demonstrates your
FLUENT ability to record your experiences. It is a
shame that you didn’t undertake the second part
of the summer brief that would have involved you
created a storey that you had pre-visualised.
AO1: Fluent
AO3: confident
Observational Starting
Points
AO3
AO2
A good start to the project as always you write
with a real elegance that is a pleasure to read. I
would like your visual documentation to back up
this strong wording. I think that finding derelict
landscapes within London will be a challenge but
one which I am sure you are more than capable of
achieving.
AO3: Fluent
AO2: Confident
Research Starting
Points
AO1 AO1: