A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: Joe
General A very good start to the year, you have created a body of work that shows clear cohesion
between the two part s of unit 3. Your visual work is strong but you must make sure all visual
documentation is clearly visible to be able to see fully your thought processes.
Task Assessment Criteria
Feedback AO band
Leaflet AO1 A good leaflet task, you have clearly thought
about the layout and design of different
leaflets and the fact you have been to
exhibitions to find them shows a commitment
to the task. Your research demonstrates
you’re a confident ability to glean significant
information from your chosen sources.
However You need to put your final design up
on weebly as at present it looks incomplete.
Practical Work and
Your initial sports day shots are excellent and
give the viewer a real insight into the day. The
different angles and focal points all add to this
being a strong body of work. The journey
works well you have clearly thought out and
pre-visualised the images before you have
taken them. I think you could have potentially
gone even further with the distorted reality
latter on in the series but on the whole a good
body of work. The documentary series is not
as strong you shown us the journey to the site
but we don’t see any of the actual event!
Excellent work the photograph that you have
taken of the homeless man is outstanding. I
would like it if you could put all your shots up
on weebly this just enables the examiner an
insight into your visual thought process. Also
you should put up the work of Micheal
Heffernan as a contextual reference. I am
really pleased that you have responded so
well to the brief set in class.