The document discusses a story called "The Lagoon of the Charmed Child". It takes place in Malargüe, Argentina. The story is about an indigenous princess named Elcha who falls in love with a man from another tribe. However, an evil witch wants Elcha to marry the prince from the enemy tribe. To escape, Elcha and her lover flee from both tribes. They are pursued until reaching a lagoon, where the witch is struck by lightning and petrified, leaving her reflection frozen in the water. The lagoon is now known as the Lagoon of the Charmed Child. The document provides guidance on revising and improving the retelling of the story.

1. (A)
1) what´s the name of the topic ?
2 )where was the story?
3) Look for more information, pictures, videos etc.
4) Do you know the place?
(B)
1) Create a brainston about the topic.
2) Choose the most important sentences in the topic.
3) Write a Little summary about it.
4) Use the diccionary, because all. The work is in English.
(C)
1) Revise in your text of was, were, wasen´t, weren´t, there was, there weren, there wasn´t, there
weren´t.
2) Write a general tittle and two or more subtittles.
3) Look for more vocabulary.
4) Add explanations and complete your text.
(A)
1) The name of the topic is ´´The Lagoon of the Charmed Child´´
2) The story was in Malargüe
3 ) People looking at the lagoon
4) No, I don´t

2. (B)
Shallow Road Reflect
water Mirror Bridge
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Image
Tribe
young Lagoon Beautiful Witch Love Companion
THE LAGOON OF THE CHARMED CHILD
2) The Lagoon of the charmed child is in Malargüe, and to arrive you have to
march by a road or by the bridge of Elcha since route 222.
ELCHA’S LOVE AND HER FRIEND
The Legend is about an Indian pricess. She was Elcha (Aboriginal means
mirror) Elcha was very beautyful.
Elcha was in love with his friend. He was from another tribe. Elcha’s tribe
was led by a witch who one day saw them together. and his friend but an
ugly witch had .convinced these two are together because the The witch
wanted to marry Elcha and the prince of the enemy tribe.
Elcha and her lover decided to scape.
and his beloved fled both tribes minutes later seized and followed the flight
..the joves pursecuted nonstop running until arrested part of a certain land
down lagoon..both tribes continued to shed ..the lagoon .. and down. first
witch was getting a powerful instatante lightning struck her persecutors
leaving ... scary looking petrified peered reflects a mirror image of the witch
.. Elcha..y why this gap so he was baptized.
Oraciones a sacar y revisar para ordenar gramaticalmete.
Sugerencias a agregar.
Me encanta la presentación del trabajo!!! Los primeros puntos están perfectos y el
comienzo del texto final es coherente y utiliza lo pedido.
En cuanto al final del texto, hay varias cosas para revisar y reformular. Busquen oraciones
más sencillas que cuenten lo que pasó desde que los jóvenes decidieron escapar en adelante.
Very good!!! 9 (nine)
Profe de Inglés.