The document contains feedback from several viewers on a film project. Yamna Beniss, age 16, praised the film's idea, use of unsettling music and atmosphere. Liam Porter, age 17, noted a variety of camera shots and effective use of props like a wheelchair and needle. Steven Toone, age 16, enjoyed the opening and good transitions in editing like a wheel and fan. Hamza, age 22, complimented the editing of the opening, well-done titles and effective flashbacks. Kelly, age 23, gave praise for non-diegetic sound, range of shots, sound effects, editing and music usage.

1. Yamna Beniss
16/Female
“I think that your
idea is Excellent,
great useof music,
eerie atmosphere,
and unsettling story
line.”
Liam Porter
17/ Male
“There was a wide
variety of camera shots
and good useof props
was used, suchas the
wheelchair and needle.”
Steven Toone
16/ Male
The openingwas
good and I really
liked the transition
of editing wasvery
good such as the
wheel and the fan
transition,
Hamza
22/Male
“The editing of the
openingwas good
and the titles were
well done, also
flashbacks werewell
executed.”
Kelly
23/Female
“Good non-diegetic
sound, good useof
the a range of shots,
sound effects, good
editing and use of
music”
Feedback from
audience