1. 1. Moreover she is charming and hard-working
Moreover, she is charming and hard-working.
2. She usually is very busy and studing other languages
She is usually very busy because she is studying other languages.
3. However twice a week she fancy meeting her friends
However, twice a week she fancies meeting her friends
4. she sleeps a little hours but the rest of time she goes out
She sleeps for a few hours but she goes out the rest of the time
5. she is incredibly good student and responsible
She is an incredibly good student and responsible
6. she loves watching romantic film
She loves watching romantic films
7. She’s interested in improve her Spanish because she need speak Spanish
She’s interested in improving her Spanish because she needs to speak
Spanish.
8. I met her when we was studying and she always studies very hard
I met her when we were studying and she always studied very hard.
9. She’s very patient with the children, due to she has a brother and cousins
She’s very patient with the children, due to the fact that she has a brother
and cousins.
10. She likes listen to music and do things her own
She likes listening to music and doing things her own.
11. I’m writing for tell you about my friend
I’m writing to tell you about my friend.
12. She is affectionate and friendly. In the other hand, she’s reliable too.
She is affectionate and friendly. On the other hand, she’s reliable too.
13. She goes out the nights every day
She goes out every day at nights.
14. I met extroverts, reliables people
I met extrovert, reliable people.
15. she’s a colleague of mine at school when we were children
She was a colleague of mine at school when we were children.
16. Yaiza in her free time she likes enjoying the sun
In her free time Yaiza likes enjoying the sun.
17. Although when he was single he used to go out to meet friends.
However, when he was single he used to go out to meet friends.
18. is patient and extrover
He is patient and extrovert.
19. I write you to tell you
I am writing you to tell you…
20. In spite of, she is very sociable
In spite of this, she is very sociable.
21. our live are being tedious living with her

2. Our lives are being tedious living with her.
22. she wants to be an English teacher, what is the main reason she wants to go
there
she wants to be an English teacher, what is the main reason why she wants to go
there
23. Christelle is very polite and educated although she’s quite talkative
Christelle is very polite and educated as well as quite talkative (sense)
24. She used to go to the cinema every weekends
She used to go to the cinema every weekend.
25. She is married with an old classmate
She is married to an old classmate.
26. For that reason he loves parties
For that reason, he loves parties.
27. she didn’t want she spent so much time
She didn’t want to spend so much time.
28. I recomend you to know her a little bit
I recommend you to know her a little bit.
29. you asked me things about she
You asked me things about her.
30. …althought when she get angry is very stupid
…although when she gets angry, she is very stupid.
31. Another hobby is writting books
Another hobby is writing books.
32. yes, definitely it was useful that you told me about her
yes, definitely it was useful what you told me about her.
33. Do you continue working like a teacher?
Do you continue working as a teacher?
34. could you give me an advice?
Could you give me some advice?
35. She’s studying french and Italian
She’s studying French and Italian
36. she use to eat fatty food (referring to the present)
She usually eats fatty food
37. so she doesn’t go a balanced diet
so she doesn’t follow/go on a balanced diet
38. living with her it is easy
living with her is easy
39. when she live with me (referring to the past), she usually went to the gym
When she lived with me, she used to go to the gym
40. A short, I hope you’ll be a great flatmate
In short, I hope you’ll be a great flatmate.