Here is an example personal letter from buyers to sellers to include in an offer on a home. See italics for notes.

1. Date
Dear Seller(s) Name(s),
[Compliment their home and express what it means to you]
Well done. The space you have created is magical. We have been searching for a property since
DATE and finally felt what everyone talks about when we walked through the door of
PROPERTY.
[Share personal details, if you feel comfortable and how you might use the home]
We have two young children and we see this property being a family haven and retreat. A space
for family and friends to gather on weekends and holidays. A place where our parents can visit
and our children can play. A home where we can make memories.
[Expand on the positive aspects of their home and why you love it]
You've done a beautiful job making use of the space, inside and out. It's modern, tasteful and
completely charming. We currently live in a home that was built in the 1930’s and appreciate the
craftsmanship and sense of history that comes with older homes. The garden, chicken coop and
goat pen are also a huge hit for us. Our kids love animals and could, with some patience on our
part, be a help in the garden.
[Show them that you want to support their goals and let them know why you’re a good buyer]
We understand that you also have plans for your next property, and that selling this home is a
key milestone in meeting your own goals. We want to assure you that our commitment is solid,
and that we are very straightforward buyers with consistent income, substantial assets, and few
liabilities. As renters, we have nothing holding us back from Closing short of the mortgage itself
and, with our Pre-approval from LENDER, that shouldn’t be a problem.
Thanks for considering our offer!
Sincerely,
Your (+ Spouse’s) Name