I have left the original slides in the bottom left for reference. Removed: agenda and second hope slide. I would remove the “thank you” slide, but if you have to have it, show visual of what/who you are thanking. “ What I see” is a boring tuitle. He is actually speaking about what he seies in his country, so I have renamed it to “My country” Same for “What I know” – boring. He is speaking about we can, so I called it “wew can”. It also makes a good climax into the last slide “Yes We can”