Alice Sophie Turrell
140 Doulton Close
EXT. FIELDS – DAY
Three girls are walking through the fields, lost
and tired. They are getting agitated and
argumentative as they have no phone signal and
only one phone has not died.
Sophie is hanging back a bit and sulking. Jade is
taking lead and directing the group.
Are we nearly back yet? I am so tired, feels like
we have been walking forever.
Yes! I keep telling you, I know the way. Look! I
recognize this tree here. We are nearly back.
Jade. Stop talking shit; you have no idea where
we are. We haven’t seen anyone in miles, clearly
indicating we are lost and should have taken that
path I saw a few miles back. Its going to get
dark soon and what are we going to do? Keep
walking? There is no light it will be pointless.
Just admit we are lost.
Can’t you ever just trust me? I know where we are
and we have plenty of time before we get back so
just shut up and save your energy for walking. If
you want to walking back, fine go ahead. Then you
will be lost and we will be happier without you!
Guys! Calm down. We are all tired and fed up now
and we haven’t got time to argue. We will just
have to keep on walking okay. If we are lost then
we are lost and I am sure we will find someone
for directions soon. Now, I hate this as much as
you too, but please calm down and get over your
Well, I don’t know what I have got to calm down
(tired and annoyed)
Fine. Whatever. Lets pick up pace a bit, just to
make sure we get back with enough light.
EXT. DIRT PATH – NIGHT
The girls are cold, too tired to argue and the
can barely see much. May is getting a bit scared
and uneasy. While the other girls are now getting
along to figure out a plan.
They can see something – they presume a building
ahead of them. Jade and Sophie become excited
about the idea of finding someone or at least a
place to sleep over night.
We need to think of something fast, it’s so dark
we can barely see a few feet in front of us. We
have one phone we are using as a torch and that
will die soon. Got any ideas.
We will just have to take a chance and find a
spot to sleep and pray there is no hungry animals
or rain or keep
Wait, can you see that?
See what? What are you looking at?
That over there! On the right! It looks like a
building? I’m sure, I am so fucking sure, oh my
God, we may have somewhere to sleep! Come on!
Are you serious? This is brilliant.
(TURNS TO FACE MAY)
Come on hurry up May! What’s wrong?
I’m not sure we should go in there, what if its
Nothing can be worse than sleeping outside!
EXT. MOTEL QUAD – NIGHT
Girls are walking round fence into Motel quad,
excited and curious to see if people are there
and whether or not there is someone to sleep.
May hangs back and feels scared and uncomfortable
about the location, like she is being watched.
Gets pressured into staying there by Sophie and
I’m not sure about this guys.
Oh come on May. Its just for tonight, we can’t
keep walking and we can’t sleep out side. This is
out best option.
Over here! This motel room is empty and seems
okay to sleep in.
Seems that way.
No, I really really don’t like this.
I feel like we are being watched.
Come on, seriously, you’re tired and your
imagination is being over active. What’s the
worst that can happen?
All three girls make their way into the motel
room, with May hanging back, looking around and
going in last.
Now you are also vaguely introduced to the
murderer who is watching the girls from behind