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Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 và 2 ngày 28-11-2020
Task 1: The diagrams show human’s cutting tools 1.4 million years ago and
80,000 years ago. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the
main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
• INTRODUCTION:
The diagrams show human’s cutting tools 1.4 million years ago and 80,000 years ago.
- diagrams=
- show =
- 1.400 million years ago and 80,000 years ago =
*Overview (1 paragraph) :
- How THE CUTTING TOOL has
changed ( totally/ completely/
dramatically/ significantly //
unnoticeably) in terms of size,
shape and quality.
- What was the most noticeable
change in the development/
innovation of this cutting tool?
the pictures
depict = illustrate = describe = demonstrate (the innovation=adaptation
from .. to.. = between …and…
=> totally/ dramatically/ significantly
=> be refined: a simple fragmented
piece of rock => a sharper, more
sophisticated one.
BODY 1: (1.4 MILLION YEARS AGO)
- A jagged piece of rock with no
identifiable shape.
- Its front and back side: asymmetric
- Looking at the rear (back) view:
. The tool: thick
. The edge: quite blunt.
- The overall length: about 7-8
centimeters.
BODY 2: (0.8 MILLION YEARS AGO)
- The tool: be 2-3 centimeters longer.
- The tool: be shaped to more or less
resemble a primitive, teardrop-shaped
knife that was quite rough in the front
and rather smooth in the back.
- The tip: be pointed + edge appeared to
be relatively sharp compared to its
earlier/original version.
depict /dɪˈpɪkt/ (v):
to show an image of somebody/something in a
picture (khắc họa, mô tả)
refine /rɪˈfaɪn/ (v):
⇒ refinement /rɪˈfaɪnmənt/
(n)
to improve something by making small changes to it
(được điều chỉnh cho tốt hơn)
fragmented
fræɡˈmentɪd/ (adj):
broken into small pieces or parts, in a way that may
have a negative effect (bị phân mảnh, thành mảnh
nhỏ)
sophisticated
/səˈfɪstɪkeɪtɪd/(adj):
clever and complicated in the way that it works or is
presented (tinh xảo, tinh vi)
jagged /ˈdʒæɡɪd/ (adj): with rough, pointed, often sharp edges (gồ ghề)
asymmetric
/ˌeɪsɪˈmetrɪk/ (adj):
having two sides or parts that are not the same in
size or shape (bất đối xứng, không đối xứng)
blunt /blʌnt/ (adj): without a sharp edge or point (cùn, lụt)
resemble /rɪˈzembl/ (v):
to look like or be similar to another person or thing
(trông giống như)
primitive /ˈprɪmətɪv/ (adj):
belonging to an early stage in the development of
humans or animals (sơ khai)
teardrop-shaped
/ˈtɪədrɒp ʃeɪpt/ (adj):
having the type of a single tear that comes from your
eye (hình giọt nước)
Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 và 2 ngày 19-12-2020
Task 2: In some countries, only a few young people go to classical
music concerts or plays and performances in theater. Why? Should
young people be encouraged to attend more classical music plays
and performances?
WHY?
(REASONS/ CAUSES/ FACTORS)
Should young people be
encouraged to attend more
classical music plays?
Task 2: In some countries, only a few young people go to classical music concerts or plays and
performances in theater. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend more classical
music plays and performances?
WHY?
(REASONS/ CAUSES/ FACTORS)
Should young people be encouraged to attend more classical
music plays?
IDEA 1: traditional concerts: too long to suit the
listening preferences of younger generations.
Explain: The younger audience: finds it difficult to
relate to this sort of music since their music usually
is about three or four minutes long.
IDEA 2: the ticket prices of classical concerts: not
affordable for young beholders.
Explain: mainly students or fresh graduates (
generally struggling to make ends meet)
=> paying a large sum of money for classical music
live performances: be financially wasteful.
IDEA 3: young listeners: be generally unfamiliar
with classical music mainly
Explain: 1. too challenging for the young to
comprehend complex masterpieces or to be a part
of a classical orchestra.
2. this genre: be naturally sophisticated=> usually
demands its audiences to have a keen musical
perception and life experience, which are less
common among teenagers.
• AGREE:
IDEA 1: Be scientifically proven to boost creativity and
concentration.
Explain; Brain scanning has revealed that classical
performances ignite various parts of the brain, of which many are
linked with enhanced imagination and creative thinking.
EX: In an experiment in an Australian university, students
play symphonies composed by Beethoven or Mozart: tend to have
a longer attention span of about 30 minutes compared to only 7
minutes of other students.
IDEA 2: Has its power in enriching young individuals’mental
life.
Explain: Listening to this music can
stimulate users’ creativeness and help them to escape from stress
(going to classical orchestras can bring them a sense of relaxation
after hours of stressful work).
IDEA 3: play a piece of classical music gives young people a
sense of accomplishment and can boost their overall confidence.
Explain: classical music rhythms can stimulate people’s
emotional and cognitive abilities, which is then beneficial to their
brain’ development.
ENGLISH TIẾNG VIỆT
elitist nature of sth
/eɪˈliːtɪst/ (adj)
phẩm chất tinh hoa của một cái gì
a classical orchestra /ˈklæsɪkl ˈɔːkɪstrə/ một dàn nhạc cổ điển
a worthy music genre một thể loại âm nhạc đáng quý
sophisticated /səˈfɪstɪkeɪtɪd/ (adj) tinh vi, tinh túy
a keen music perception /pəˈsepʃn/ khả năng cảm thụ âm nhạc tốt
a symphony /ˈsɪmfəni/ một bản nhạc giao hưởng
years of intensive training nhiều năm đào tạo chuyên sâu
attention span khoảng thời gian tập trung
be of paramount importance /ˈpærəmaʊnt/ có tầm quan trọng hàng đầu
infrequent practice luyện tập không thường xuyên
classical performance màn trình diễn nhạc cổ điển
excel at doing sth thành thạo trong việc gì
boost creativity and concentration tăng sức sáng tạo và độ tập trung
perceive/pəˈsiːv/ nhận thức
attentive chú ý
enhanced imagination trí tưởng tượng được nâng cao
1. classical music concert halls (noun phrase): phòng hòa nhạc cổ
điển
2. to engage in (v): tham gia vào
3. driving forces (noun phrase): động lực thúc đẩy
4. traditional format (noun phrase): định dạng truyền thống
5. listening preferences (noun phrase): sở thích/gu nghe nhạc
6. a beholder (n): khán giả
7. a live performance (n): biểu diễn trực tiếp
8. to stimulate (v): kích thích
9. creativeness (n): sự sáng tạo
10. an classical orchestra (n): dàn nhạc cổ điển
11. a rhythm (n): nhịp điệu
12. cognitive (adj): nhận thức
13. classical works (noun phrase): tác phẩm cổ điển
14. a dying art form (noun phrase): loại hình nghệ thuật sắp biến mất
WRITE THE INTRODUCTION FOR THIS TOPIC
In recent years/ in the past few decades/ in recent history/ in the modern century, there have been growing
concerns from............ about.............(parapharse the essay topic). My essay will outline a number of
reasons/ causes/ factors for this trend and elaborate several reasons why I entirely/ totally/ partly agree/
disagree with this idea.
PARAGRAPH 1:
Several reasons can explain why ........................ (parapharse the essay topic). For the first reason,(reason
1)…….. This is because Explanation 1……... In addition/ Moreover, (reason 2)………….. In fact/ Without a
doubt, (explanation 2). Last but not least, (reason 3). To illustrate, (example 3).
PARAGRAPH 2:
From my perspective/ side/ point of view, …..TOPIC SENTENCE.. Firstly,/First of all,/The first reason is
that (reason 1)…….. Explanation 1…….... What is more is (reason 2)………….. (example 2). Also, (reason
3). The reason for this is…..(explanation 3).
HOW TO WRITE CONCLUSION
In conclusion, {reason 1, 2 & 3} are the main reasons for ... Despite different opinions on this topic, I am
inclined to agree with the idea that ….
• Sample 1– Many parents in full-time employment prefer to leave their children
with grandparents when they are at work because they feel their child will be safer
with someone from within the family circle. In other words, they do not trust a
stranger to look after their child and feel confident that no harm will come to the
child whilst being looked after by grandma or grandpa. For example, a 2013 study
from Cambridge University showed that 62% of working mothers prefer a member
of the immediate family to provide care when they are at work.
• Sample 2– Grandparents are the best people to look after children for very
obvious reasons. Grandparents really love their grandchildren and would never
harm them. Also, the children really love their grandparents and feel comfortable
with them. Finally, grandparents have lots of experience taking care of children
because they are old and looked after children for many years themselves.

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OCT7_TASK-12_DIAGRAM-CUTTING-TOOL_YOUNG-NOT-LIKE-MUSIC.pptx

  • 1. Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 và 2 ngày 28-11-2020 Task 1: The diagrams show human’s cutting tools 1.4 million years ago and 80,000 years ago. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
  • 2. • INTRODUCTION: The diagrams show human’s cutting tools 1.4 million years ago and 80,000 years ago. - diagrams= - show = - 1.400 million years ago and 80,000 years ago = *Overview (1 paragraph) : - How THE CUTTING TOOL has changed ( totally/ completely/ dramatically/ significantly // unnoticeably) in terms of size, shape and quality. - What was the most noticeable change in the development/ innovation of this cutting tool? the pictures depict = illustrate = describe = demonstrate (the innovation=adaptation from .. to.. = between …and… => totally/ dramatically/ significantly => be refined: a simple fragmented piece of rock => a sharper, more sophisticated one.
  • 3. BODY 1: (1.4 MILLION YEARS AGO) - A jagged piece of rock with no identifiable shape. - Its front and back side: asymmetric - Looking at the rear (back) view: . The tool: thick . The edge: quite blunt. - The overall length: about 7-8 centimeters. BODY 2: (0.8 MILLION YEARS AGO) - The tool: be 2-3 centimeters longer. - The tool: be shaped to more or less resemble a primitive, teardrop-shaped knife that was quite rough in the front and rather smooth in the back. - The tip: be pointed + edge appeared to be relatively sharp compared to its earlier/original version.
  • 4. depict /dɪˈpɪkt/ (v): to show an image of somebody/something in a picture (khắc họa, mô tả) refine /rɪˈfaɪn/ (v): ⇒ refinement /rɪˈfaɪnmənt/ (n) to improve something by making small changes to it (được điều chỉnh cho tốt hơn) fragmented fræɡˈmentɪd/ (adj): broken into small pieces or parts, in a way that may have a negative effect (bị phân mảnh, thành mảnh nhỏ) sophisticated /səˈfɪstɪkeɪtɪd/(adj): clever and complicated in the way that it works or is presented (tinh xảo, tinh vi) jagged /ˈdʒæɡɪd/ (adj): with rough, pointed, often sharp edges (gồ ghề) asymmetric /ˌeɪsɪˈmetrɪk/ (adj): having two sides or parts that are not the same in size or shape (bất đối xứng, không đối xứng) blunt /blʌnt/ (adj): without a sharp edge or point (cùn, lụt) resemble /rɪˈzembl/ (v): to look like or be similar to another person or thing (trông giống như) primitive /ˈprɪmətɪv/ (adj): belonging to an early stage in the development of humans or animals (sơ khai) teardrop-shaped /ˈtɪədrɒp ʃeɪpt/ (adj): having the type of a single tear that comes from your eye (hình giọt nước)
  • 5. Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 và 2 ngày 19-12-2020 Task 2: In some countries, only a few young people go to classical music concerts or plays and performances in theater. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend more classical music plays and performances? WHY? (REASONS/ CAUSES/ FACTORS) Should young people be encouraged to attend more classical music plays?
  • 6. Task 2: In some countries, only a few young people go to classical music concerts or plays and performances in theater. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend more classical music plays and performances? WHY? (REASONS/ CAUSES/ FACTORS) Should young people be encouraged to attend more classical music plays? IDEA 1: traditional concerts: too long to suit the listening preferences of younger generations. Explain: The younger audience: finds it difficult to relate to this sort of music since their music usually is about three or four minutes long. IDEA 2: the ticket prices of classical concerts: not affordable for young beholders. Explain: mainly students or fresh graduates ( generally struggling to make ends meet) => paying a large sum of money for classical music live performances: be financially wasteful. IDEA 3: young listeners: be generally unfamiliar with classical music mainly Explain: 1. too challenging for the young to comprehend complex masterpieces or to be a part of a classical orchestra. 2. this genre: be naturally sophisticated=> usually demands its audiences to have a keen musical perception and life experience, which are less common among teenagers. • AGREE: IDEA 1: Be scientifically proven to boost creativity and concentration. Explain; Brain scanning has revealed that classical performances ignite various parts of the brain, of which many are linked with enhanced imagination and creative thinking. EX: In an experiment in an Australian university, students play symphonies composed by Beethoven or Mozart: tend to have a longer attention span of about 30 minutes compared to only 7 minutes of other students. IDEA 2: Has its power in enriching young individuals’mental life. Explain: Listening to this music can stimulate users’ creativeness and help them to escape from stress (going to classical orchestras can bring them a sense of relaxation after hours of stressful work). IDEA 3: play a piece of classical music gives young people a sense of accomplishment and can boost their overall confidence. Explain: classical music rhythms can stimulate people’s emotional and cognitive abilities, which is then beneficial to their brain’ development.
  • 7. ENGLISH TIẾNG VIỆT elitist nature of sth /eɪˈliːtɪst/ (adj) phẩm chất tinh hoa của một cái gì a classical orchestra /ˈklæsɪkl ˈɔːkɪstrə/ một dàn nhạc cổ điển a worthy music genre một thể loại âm nhạc đáng quý sophisticated /səˈfɪstɪkeɪtɪd/ (adj) tinh vi, tinh túy a keen music perception /pəˈsepʃn/ khả năng cảm thụ âm nhạc tốt a symphony /ˈsɪmfəni/ một bản nhạc giao hưởng years of intensive training nhiều năm đào tạo chuyên sâu attention span khoảng thời gian tập trung be of paramount importance /ˈpærəmaʊnt/ có tầm quan trọng hàng đầu infrequent practice luyện tập không thường xuyên classical performance màn trình diễn nhạc cổ điển excel at doing sth thành thạo trong việc gì boost creativity and concentration tăng sức sáng tạo và độ tập trung perceive/pəˈsiːv/ nhận thức attentive chú ý enhanced imagination trí tưởng tượng được nâng cao
  • 8. 1. classical music concert halls (noun phrase): phòng hòa nhạc cổ điển 2. to engage in (v): tham gia vào 3. driving forces (noun phrase): động lực thúc đẩy 4. traditional format (noun phrase): định dạng truyền thống 5. listening preferences (noun phrase): sở thích/gu nghe nhạc 6. a beholder (n): khán giả 7. a live performance (n): biểu diễn trực tiếp 8. to stimulate (v): kích thích 9. creativeness (n): sự sáng tạo 10. an classical orchestra (n): dàn nhạc cổ điển 11. a rhythm (n): nhịp điệu 12. cognitive (adj): nhận thức 13. classical works (noun phrase): tác phẩm cổ điển 14. a dying art form (noun phrase): loại hình nghệ thuật sắp biến mất
  • 9. WRITE THE INTRODUCTION FOR THIS TOPIC In recent years/ in the past few decades/ in recent history/ in the modern century, there have been growing concerns from............ about.............(parapharse the essay topic). My essay will outline a number of reasons/ causes/ factors for this trend and elaborate several reasons why I entirely/ totally/ partly agree/ disagree with this idea. PARAGRAPH 1: Several reasons can explain why ........................ (parapharse the essay topic). For the first reason,(reason 1)…….. This is because Explanation 1……... In addition/ Moreover, (reason 2)………….. In fact/ Without a doubt, (explanation 2). Last but not least, (reason 3). To illustrate, (example 3). PARAGRAPH 2: From my perspective/ side/ point of view, …..TOPIC SENTENCE.. Firstly,/First of all,/The first reason is that (reason 1)…….. Explanation 1…….... What is more is (reason 2)………….. (example 2). Also, (reason 3). The reason for this is…..(explanation 3). HOW TO WRITE CONCLUSION In conclusion, {reason 1, 2 & 3} are the main reasons for ... Despite different opinions on this topic, I am inclined to agree with the idea that ….
  • 10. • Sample 1– Many parents in full-time employment prefer to leave their children with grandparents when they are at work because they feel their child will be safer with someone from within the family circle. In other words, they do not trust a stranger to look after their child and feel confident that no harm will come to the child whilst being looked after by grandma or grandpa. For example, a 2013 study from Cambridge University showed that 62% of working mothers prefer a member of the immediate family to provide care when they are at work. • Sample 2– Grandparents are the best people to look after children for very obvious reasons. Grandparents really love their grandchildren and would never harm them. Also, the children really love their grandparents and feel comfortable with them. Finally, grandparents have lots of experience taking care of children because they are old and looked after children for many years themselves.