Evaluation activity 7
Lookingback at yourpreliminarytask(the school magazinetask),whatdoyoufeel youhave learntin
the progressionfromitto full product?
I feltIhave made a large amountof progressionsince whenIfirstdidmymagazine tonow.I feltthat
my Photoshopskillshave improvedalarge amountandI feel confidentwhenusingprogrammes
similartothisnow.I feel confidentinusingthe different toolstocreate differenteffectsandto
make differentstylesformymagazine.Ifeel Ihave improvedmyknowledge onmise enscene and
howimportantthisisin orderto produce a magazine asI realise now thatthere hasto be a co-
ordinationwiththe clothingandthatcertainbackgroundscanhave differenteffectsonthe reader
and howthat theyrelate tothe magazine.Ifeltthat mycamera workhas improvedasI know of a lot
of shotsthat I can use to take for mymagazine andthat the shotsof the artist can have a impact on
peoplesviewonthe magazine.
Preliminaryphotography-
Thisphotowas takenduringthe preliminarytaskandduringthistaskI didnot have a great
knowledge of photographyandPhotoshopandsothiswasa big learningcurve forme and ittook me
a while togetusedto usingthese technologies.WhenItookmyfirstshotsI didnot hire out the
studioandso thismeantlotsof people were tryingtouse it as well andso
thisresultedinme rushingmyshotsthat I tookwhichmeantthat the quality
of myshotswere to a lowstandard. I also didnotknow a lotaboutcamera
workand the differentwaysthatIcoulduse a camerain orderfor me to
have shotssuitsspecificpositionsonmymagazine suchasclose up shots
and longshots.I alsodidnot realise the affectthatlightinghadonthe
productand so I didnot use the lightinginthisversionwhichresultedinthe
image appearingdark.AsI was knewtothisI didnot considerthe mise en
scene of my model andwe see that inthisphotohe iswearing1 itemof clothingwhichisa top and
thismade the image lookblandsoI learntthat differenttypesof mise enscene canhelpportraya
betterimage formy magazine.
Final photography-
As we see Idecidedtouse twomodelsforthisshootand the reasonthat I
didthiswas because Iwantedtobe able to representbothgenderswithin
my social group and so I wantedtobe able to appeal tomore people and
have a largeraudience. Ihiredoutthe studioformyself andmymodelsso
that I couldtake my time when takingmyphotossoI couldhave a lotmore
of a varietyof shotsto use for mymagazine andI wantedto have shotsthat
wouldlookbetteronthe page. I changedthe the mise enscene of my male
model aswe can see he iswearinga smartshirt andso thismeanshe will
looksmarter.Thisshowsevidence thatIhave progressedwithmy
knowledge andplanningformymagazine asI have made itlookbetterby
changingthe photographyinthe shootso it looksbetteronthe page. I have
alsoimprovedmyknowledge of the lightingasmypreliminaryphotohada
reallydarkbackgroundand itlookedreallydull onmypage andso I made
sure that my image formy final productlookedappealingand notfull.
Preliminaryfrontcover-
Thisis myfront coverof mypreliminarytaskandwe see thatit looks
reallyquite scruffyandsoI wantedtochange thisso I lookedatwhat
magazineswhere availableonthe currentmarketplace andI
improvedmyknowledge of howtopresentthe magazine. We see
that thisfrontcover looksveryimmature andthisisbecause Imade
it at the start whenmyknowledge wasnotgreat. We see that the
colourpalette isveryplainandboringat that the croppingof the
photois pooras you can see the edgesof hisheadwhichlooks asif it
has beencroppedwhichprovidesthe magazine withapoor
representationtothe public.We see thatthe sub headingsare used
witha poor font and itis hard to readso I will needtoadaptthisfor
my final piece of work.
Final frontcover-
As we can see I made several changesto myfinal piece of workas
we see I have useda bolderandbiggerfontformy mastheadso
that itstands outto the public.Ihave alsochangedthe fontaround
my models inthe subheadingsasIthoughtthat I lookedneaterand
more presentable. Ichangedthe stance of my modelssothat it
matchesthe layoutof my frontcover whichshowsIhave improved
my knowledgeof whatiscurrentlyonthe market. We see I have
changedthe borderfor mymagazine as itis a darkercolour which
makeseverythingelse standoutonthe page.I changedmy colour
palletsonthispage and made ita lotbrightersoit lookedmore
interestingandsoit stoodout better. Ihave changedthe textat
the bottomof the page so it wasa lotmore bolder andalsoso it
was shorteras I thoughtthe sloganonthe othercoverlookedlong
and boring. The qualityof mymodelshasimprovedalotas we see it isnot croppedas badlyasthe
othermagazine andit makesthe magazine have acleanand presentablefinish.We see thatmy
knowledge of usingthe cameraandusingphotostomy advantage hasimprovedandalsothat my
photoshopskillshave improvedalotincomparisonto myoriginal magazine.Myknowledgeof mise
enscene of the modelshasimprovedaswe see he iswearingsmarterclothingandthatthese
modelshelprepresentmy social groupbetter.
Preliminarycontents-
We see thatmy contentsfrommy preliminarytaskisverybasicandplain
and I feel thatIhave improvedalot fromthiscontents.We see that I
followedthe same fontthroughoutthe page whichshowsthat Imay
have rushedit.We alsosee thatthe imagesare differentsizesandthis
looksscruffyonthe page andso I have learnthow to alignimagestoa
similarsize formyreal contents.We see I have notaddeddescriptions
for eachsubheadingandismeansthatit doesnotlookcleanand it may
appearconfusingforthe reader. The colourpalette forthispage isvery
plainandI lookedintoothercontentspagesonthe marketso I couldsee whatsort of coloursand
themeswere beingusedcurrently.
Final contents-
We see thatI have developedmycontentsalotsince my preliminary
task.We see that I have addeda lotmore informationtothe page and
thisincludesdescriptionsforeachsubtitle. Ihave alsochangedthe
colourpalletsbyhavinga varietyof colourssuchas purple,black,white
and greyas I wantedthe pinkto standout fromthese blandcolours.
I've alsoprogressedmyskillsbyaligningmyimagesbetteronthe
contentspage so theyare the same size whichlooksbetteronthe
page.I have alsoaddeda borderunderthe contents.I feel thatmy
skillshave improvedalotinproducingthiscontentspage as I feel I
have addeda professionallooktoitand that I have usedmyskillsto
the bestpossibility.
Overall Ifeel thatI have improvedmyskillsandknowledge of usingthe softwareandcamerasince
my preliminarytaskasI feel mymagazine hasimprovedalot,I alsofeel thatmyorganisationformy
magazine hasimprovedasI knewwhatshotsI neededandwhateffectthat itwouldhave onthe
reader.I have made a progressionwithmydesignandlayoutof mymagazine asit looksmore
presentable andIwaspreparedtospenda lotof time inensuringthatmymagazine wasto a good
standard.

Evaluation activity 7 final (autosaved)

  • 1.
    Evaluation activity 7 Lookingbackat yourpreliminarytask(the school magazinetask),whatdoyoufeel youhave learntin the progressionfromitto full product? I feltIhave made a large amountof progressionsince whenIfirstdidmymagazine tonow.I feltthat my Photoshopskillshave improvedalarge amountandI feel confidentwhenusingprogrammes similartothisnow.I feel confidentinusingthe different toolstocreate differenteffectsandto make differentstylesformymagazine.Ifeel Ihave improvedmyknowledge onmise enscene and howimportantthisisin orderto produce a magazine asI realise now thatthere hasto be a co- ordinationwiththe clothingandthatcertainbackgroundscanhave differenteffectsonthe reader and howthat theyrelate tothe magazine.Ifeltthat mycamera workhas improvedasI know of a lot of shotsthat I can use to take for mymagazine andthat the shotsof the artist can have a impact on peoplesviewonthe magazine. Preliminaryphotography- Thisphotowas takenduringthe preliminarytaskandduringthistaskI didnot have a great knowledge of photographyandPhotoshopandsothiswasa big learningcurve forme and ittook me a while togetusedto usingthese technologies.WhenItookmyfirstshotsI didnot hire out the studioandso thismeantlotsof people were tryingtouse it as well andso thisresultedinme rushingmyshotsthat I tookwhichmeantthat the quality of myshotswere to a lowstandard. I also didnotknow a lotaboutcamera workand the differentwaysthatIcoulduse a camerain orderfor me to have shotssuitsspecificpositionsonmymagazine suchasclose up shots and longshots.I alsodidnot realise the affectthatlightinghadonthe productand so I didnot use the lightinginthisversionwhichresultedinthe image appearingdark.AsI was knewtothisI didnot considerthe mise en scene of my model andwe see that inthisphotohe iswearing1 itemof clothingwhichisa top and thismade the image lookblandsoI learntthat differenttypesof mise enscene canhelpportraya betterimage formy magazine. Final photography- As we see Idecidedtouse twomodelsforthisshootand the reasonthat I didthiswas because Iwantedtobe able to representbothgenderswithin my social group and so I wantedtobe able to appeal tomore people and have a largeraudience. Ihiredoutthe studioformyself andmymodelsso that I couldtake my time when takingmyphotossoI couldhave a lotmore of a varietyof shotsto use for mymagazine andI wantedto have shotsthat wouldlookbetteronthe page. I changedthe the mise enscene of my male model aswe can see he iswearinga smartshirt andso thismeanshe will looksmarter.Thisshowsevidence thatIhave progressedwithmy knowledge andplanningformymagazine asI have made itlookbetterby changingthe photographyinthe shootso it looksbetteronthe page. I have alsoimprovedmyknowledge of the lightingasmypreliminaryphotohada reallydarkbackgroundand itlookedreallydull onmypage andso I made sure that my image formy final productlookedappealingand notfull.
  • 2.
    Preliminaryfrontcover- Thisis myfront coverofmypreliminarytaskandwe see thatit looks reallyquite scruffyandsoI wantedtochange thisso I lookedatwhat magazineswhere availableonthe currentmarketplace andI improvedmyknowledge of howtopresentthe magazine. We see that thisfrontcover looksveryimmature andthisisbecause Imade it at the start whenmyknowledge wasnotgreat. We see that the colourpalette isveryplainandboringat that the croppingof the photois pooras you can see the edgesof hisheadwhichlooks asif it has beencroppedwhichprovidesthe magazine withapoor representationtothe public.We see thatthe sub headingsare used witha poor font and itis hard to readso I will needtoadaptthisfor my final piece of work. Final frontcover- As we can see I made several changesto myfinal piece of workas we see I have useda bolderandbiggerfontformy mastheadso that itstands outto the public.Ihave alsochangedthe fontaround my models inthe subheadingsasIthoughtthat I lookedneaterand more presentable. Ichangedthe stance of my modelssothat it matchesthe layoutof my frontcover whichshowsIhave improved my knowledgeof whatiscurrentlyonthe market. We see I have changedthe borderfor mymagazine as itis a darkercolour which makeseverythingelse standoutonthe page.I changedmy colour palletsonthispage and made ita lotbrightersoit lookedmore interestingandsoit stoodout better. Ihave changedthe textat the bottomof the page so it wasa lotmore bolder andalsoso it was shorteras I thoughtthe sloganonthe othercoverlookedlong and boring. The qualityof mymodelshasimprovedalotas we see it isnot croppedas badlyasthe othermagazine andit makesthe magazine have acleanand presentablefinish.We see thatmy knowledge of usingthe cameraandusingphotostomy advantage hasimprovedandalsothat my photoshopskillshave improvedalotincomparisonto myoriginal magazine.Myknowledgeof mise enscene of the modelshasimprovedaswe see he iswearingsmarterclothingandthatthese modelshelprepresentmy social groupbetter. Preliminarycontents- We see thatmy contentsfrommy preliminarytaskisverybasicandplain and I feel thatIhave improvedalot fromthiscontents.We see that I followedthe same fontthroughoutthe page whichshowsthat Imay have rushedit.We alsosee thatthe imagesare differentsizesandthis looksscruffyonthe page andso I have learnthow to alignimagestoa similarsize formyreal contents.We see I have notaddeddescriptions for eachsubheadingandismeansthatit doesnotlookcleanand it may appearconfusingforthe reader. The colourpalette forthispage isvery
  • 3.
    plainandI lookedintoothercontentspagesonthe marketsoI couldsee whatsort of coloursand themeswere beingusedcurrently. Final contents- We see thatI have developedmycontentsalotsince my preliminary task.We see that I have addeda lotmore informationtothe page and thisincludesdescriptionsforeachsubtitle. Ihave alsochangedthe colourpalletsbyhavinga varietyof colourssuchas purple,black,white and greyas I wantedthe pinkto standout fromthese blandcolours. I've alsoprogressedmyskillsbyaligningmyimagesbetteronthe contentspage so theyare the same size whichlooksbetteronthe page.I have alsoaddeda borderunderthe contents.I feel thatmy skillshave improvedalotinproducingthiscontentspage as I feel I have addeda professionallooktoitand that I have usedmyskillsto the bestpossibility. Overall Ifeel thatI have improvedmyskillsandknowledge of usingthe softwareandcamerasince my preliminarytaskasI feel mymagazine hasimprovedalot,I alsofeel thatmyorganisationformy magazine hasimprovedasI knewwhatshotsI neededandwhateffectthat itwouldhave onthe reader.I have made a progressionwithmydesignandlayoutof mymagazine asit looksmore presentable andIwaspreparedtospenda lotof time inensuringthatmymagazine wasto a good standard.