This is a short story i wrote. Tell me what you think.

1. Spider man
the realization
After the fiasco in Venice Peter felt even more glum
because he’d thought he had found some one to
replace his mentor Tony Stark who had faced a tragic
yet honorable passing. But unfortunately, that person
betrayed him.
So, he put on his clothes and got on the bus to school.
On the way to school Peter noticed a green circle in the
air that was enlarging slowly. Suddenly out of nowhere
that circle just sucked them inside.
When Peter got up he saw fire, everywhere. He was on
the planet Vormir he had never been there before but
that is the home of the soulstone. After a long walk he
found someone so he called out. When the guy turned
around Peter realized that he looked exactly like Tony
(iron man). His name was Yont Krats. He came from the
planet of dopplegangers. Peter hugged him before he
could say anything else.
He felt like he had found the piece that was missing
from his heart. They got to know each other but he
was nothing like the original Iron man.
A fairy called Aisha in Peter’s mind said, “We should all
know this, if you have ever lost someone in your life

2. don’t try to replace them with another because that
person will always live on in your heart no matter
where you are.
He then saw a bright light. It was another wormhole
that is when he knew what to do. He realized that he
can’t replace iron man because he was special in his
own way.
He goes through the wormhole and continues his life
by cherishing every moment like iron man did.
Moral of the story: We should all know this, if you have
ever lost someone in your life don’t try to replace them
with another because that person will always live on in
your heart no matter where you are.