Untitled (angel wing) new chapter one rough draft script

REAL COMIC Untitled (Angel Wing)-2
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Chapter 1
Created: 10 March 2014, 10:07
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Page 2 (Inside Cover)
Created: 6 February2014, 07:41
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Synopsis
Show Alicia at her house putting on shoes in her doorway, light beautiful
colors. In schooluniform. Pinks, blues, browns, warm colors for this
drawing. (Research modern home designs).
Draft Idea 3 for Chapter One
Created: 4 July 2014, 16:49
Modified: 4 July 2014, 16:51
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After seeing so many pages I mean I cut the original down by 10 pages. I
realized that I was still a whooping 10 pages close to 40 and I still have not
introduced the immediate problem and her powers. Seeing this I have
decided to cut out some more scenes to make it fit a bit more.

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Panel 1 Alicia stands before a gorilla looking Seralon
(Taint), it's breath mists the air. As his shadow
overcomes her. Her small frame standing in his
greatness.
Caption Fwoo (taint taking a deep breath)
ALICIA
I can't do this.....
(Inner Monologue)
Panel 2 As she stands there before him, her eyes small and
trembling. WE see his rom reflected in her eyes.
Caption Devu (Tremble of eyes, figure shown in eyes
towering her)
ALICIA
I thought I could change? I thought I was
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feel the same... I feel like the same weak
person from before.
(Inner monologue)
Panel 3 His arm twitches
Caption *za/hiku/koki/guki/gokin*
*crack/gurchh/twitch/* (Make into smaller
panel)
Panel 4 Lower angle, and the seralon takes off to charge
at her. We see his feet and arms thrusting dirt
and rocks into the air.
Caption *zazaza/urya/dododo* *rumble/brum/brrm*
ALICIA
Are we all doomed to never change.... to
always be the same people we hate
ourselves for being.
(Inner monologue)
Panel 5 The taint get's ready to strike her, it's arm
raised over it's head. Show action lines showing
the direction of its swing.
Caption *bun* *Swoosh, whoosh*
ALICIA
To lose everything, we wish to protect to
things we can't even fight against. Unable
to save ourselves....
(Inner Monologue)
KASERNAGE
Aliiiiciiaaa!!!!!
(Spikey Ballon, urgent message
or yell)
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Page 3 Eating breakfast
Panel 1 Alicia blows a spoonful of oatmeal.
Caption *fua/blow/huuu/fuuh* blowing on food.
Panel 2 We are introduced to Alicia for the first time,
show Alicia eat her spoon still lifted and with
her hair done and her body shape.
Caption *eating/chk/mogu* eating food.
ALICIA
My name is Alicia Ebele, I'm 16 years old
and as of now I'm a sophomore in high
school. I'm not exactly the pick of the
litter, the rose of the garden or the
sharpest needle in the haystack. In fact
most would consider me a bit of a
introvert, a shy person.
Panel 3 Show a part of the kitchen layout, basic brown,
white, light beige/sandy color walls and silver
stove and fridge. Show mother leaning, a laptop
before her, a cup of coffee in her hands.
Cigarette bud sitting in a cigarette tray not to
far. Her mother is wearing normal clothes though
she is wearing a animation convention shirt.
Caption no sound effects, just show steam of
cigarette, cups and bowls.
MARY
You better hurry Alicia. Or you're going
to be late catching the bus to school.

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ALICIA
Hai!!!
Panel 4 Introduce Mary, her mother for the very first time
and begin to go into her relationship. Show a pic
of her mother dressing in cosplay.
Caption *zuzu, siiip* sipping coffee.
ALICIA
This is my mother, Mary as her co-workers
would call her and mama for me. She is a
bit of a ditz at times. Though a hard-
working one at that. She unlike me is a
confident person. Enough to considering
cosplaying to which she tries often.
(Inner Monologue)
Panel 5 Talk about the normalcy of the day. Show her
rising to her feet.
Caption *kachan/Clatter* chair moving as Alicia gets
up.
ALICIA
Though you would think the various amounts
of costumes and clothes would make every
day new for me and creepy for when I come
home. I have gotten quite used to it. I
mean as long as she doesn't dress me.
Panel 6 Alicia goes up and kisses her mother one the
cheek. Her mother blushes faintly and smiles.
Caption *uki uki* Brighters colors and warm, showing
family love. Make picture bigger
ALICIA
Bye, bye Mama!
(Dialogue)
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Page 4 Leaving Home
Panel 1 Alicia puts on shoes, and she begins to hint at
strange happenings.
Caption *supo/swip/slip* slipping on shoes.
ALICIA
And like most days, I precariously accept
these situations and little personas. Just
as much as I accept my own personal flaws.
(Inner Monologue)
Panel 2 Alicia slips on book bag.
Caption *Slip/supo* Slipping on straps.
Panel 3 Open door to the outside world, skip entry way and
such and have her walking down the block.
Caption *jiri jiri/shinning* Instead show the
brightness of the sun.
ALICIA
And though sometimes I wish to break
normalcy, to create a new me. A better me.
A braver me. Sometimes its hard to know
that life is filled with predictable
endings and openings. With generic and
genetic personalities and traits.
Especially since everything around me
seems to be....(inner monologue)
Panel 4 Alicia walks out and we see the alien ship above
faintly in the sky but vast enough for us to know
that's not supposed to be there.

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Caption *Devu,zumomomo/zumo* Show shadow of the
spaceship in the sky and the sun refracting
around the edges.
ALICIA
Changing so fast. And I'm... Not.
(Inner Monologue)
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Page 5 School
Panel 1 Peek of classroom during pre-period and some of
her classmates.
Caption *Gya-gya/chatter chatter* Show students
chattering and running to each other's desk.
CLASSMATE #1
Hey did you hear about?
(Faint talking)
CLASSMATE #2
Why do you think they're here? Do you
think that maybe they want to do us harm?
CLASSMATE #3
I hear they have a 10 legs and arms! And
their eyes are huge!
CLASSMATE #4

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Ewwww stop!
ALICIA
Now you're probably wondering what are
these people talking about? Aliens and
such, right? Well, remember that strange
object you saw hovering in our skies. That
is what we call a spaceship. Since the
ship appeared above us three weeks ago,
normalcy for the world broke. At first it
was debate, end of the world prophecies
and scary stories of alien appearances.
People disappearing, weird happenings and
sudden appearances of strange beast in
other cities and towns across the country,
the world in fact!
(Inner Monologue)
Panel 2 Show Alicia's loneliness.
Caption *Dyon/depressed* Color a black shower(aura)
around Alicia and brightness around her
classmates who are all grouped up.
ALICIA
And even though the year just started off
and news of the spaceship hovering over
the earth.... Has gotten everyone excited.
I still have yet to make any friends!
(Inner Monologue)
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Page 6 Lonely

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Panel 1 Alicia grips her head and she sinks into
depression. (Funny moment)
Caption *Doon/depressed/gloom* Show funny chibi
moment of Alicia turning into liquid. Show
brief moments of loneliness, moments where
she should be with friends but is not.
ALICIA
Normally at school I would be lonely
meaning I would have no friends for the
entire year. An entire year of no partner
for field trips, science projects or lunch
time meals.
Panel 2 Small panel of her seeing the ship and her face
sinking or utter hopelessness.
Caption Show her sitting before the tv and the her
melting.
ALICIA
When the apparent doom machine appeared
above, I thought I would die lonely, with
no hope of ever having a girl conversation
with a dramatic and lonely friend who made
up of lies about past boyfriends.
Panel 3 Show her coming into class room and seeing her
classmates busily talking and active. And her eyes
glittering with hope.
Caption *Pa/light/shine* Eyes's shinning.
ALICIA
Till I came to school on the first day and
found loads of people talking to each
other. Pretty girls, jocks, nerds, geeks,
nobodies, rebels, idiots, fattys,
foreigners, loners. Everyone! This was my
chance! My chance to show through, to
become more than what I have been making
myself for these last couple of years.
Panel 4 Regular Panel. But show Alicia turned to stone and
her classmates happily talking along.

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Caption *Shun/rock bottom,fwoomp* Alicia's skin
turning to rock.
ALICIA
But that didn't happen. It was as if I
missed the last chord of the apocalypse!
And everyone died and went to heaven and I
was left to walk the earth alone. (like
the man in Twilight, "Time Enough At
Last".)
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Page 7 Alien ships and Alicia
Panel 1 A small panel showing the chalkboard and a picture
of a space ship hovering a planet. Alicia reflects
on how the world seemed to have drastically
reverted to normal after the alienship. Even how
the kids in her class once grouping up changed
back to their normal.
Caption Nothing here but brighten drawing on the
chalkboard.
ALICIA
But even with all the alien talk around
school. It's normal. It's as if it faded
into the pool of celebrity gossip, fashion
trends and whispers of war amongst the
enemies. It became the everyday talk of
normalcy. People slowly began to accept
the spaceship for what it was... A hunk of
junk in the sky.

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Panel 2 Who now sits gazing out the window, her chin
leaning against her hand. We get a better view of
her.
Caption *eee* or just show light and wind blowing in.
ALICIA
But what does this mean for me? Should I
accept it as normalcy and go about life as
I always have. Or should I....
Panel 3 Outside the window, we see Alicia gazing out the
window but this time we see Alicia's mascot
(Carina) looking down at Alicia from the opposite
building. Show Carina as a bit menacing.
Caption Nothing here really.
ALICIA
See it as an opportunity.
Panel 4 Full view of Carina (Mascot) who is staring down
at her herione. But Carina looks a bit scary look
at Madoka Puella Magical mascot and somehow copy
eyes.
Caption *gugu/stare* Carina (mascot) staring at
Alicia.
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Panel 1 Full view of Carina (Mascot who is staring down at
the heroine. But Carina looks a bit scary looking,
like the mascot from Madoka Puella Magica (Copy
eyes)
Caption *gugu/stare* Carina (mascot) staring at
Alicia.
ALICIA
To become something more than just me.
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Page 9 Lunch Time
Panel 1 Alicia is eating lunch which consists of a wrap,
fruit and two juices, and a usual side of cookies.
Drinks from a juice cup. Upward angle show her
looking up to the sun above.
Caption *kupu/slip/suck/siiip* Alicia drinking juice
from container. *Bzz* dragonflies fluttering
about.
ALICIA
Well at least I can still eat, it would've
been troublesome if I couldn't hold down
my food. Though in all honesty...
Panel 2 Alicia smiles as she gazes at her cookies as she
gazes upon its brown roundness.
Caption *Shi/shimmer* Eyes gazing upon cookies.
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Well at least I can eat in peace... I mean
its not like having someone is required in
order for me to eat. But then again it
would be nice to share some time with
someone.
Panel 3 Alicia looks down at her stomach (downward angle)
and sadly looks upon the ripples that appear
there. Show in panel also some other people who
are chubbier than Alicia (putting not true
underneath)
Caption *bosho/sad* as she gazes upon herself.
ALICIA
But nobody wants to spend time with a
chubby like me. I'm practically the worse
kind of useless.
Panel 3 Chibi mood: Alicia places cookies against cheek as
she shakes her head as if she was hugging them.
Alicia giggles as she blushes.
Caption *Gyuu/hug* Hugging sounds. *Baku/waku*
excitement. *Hehehe/gera gera* giggling.
ALICIA
Oh well at least I have my sweets, my
preciouses. I don't care if your filled
with chubby goodness, I would rather eat
you now and forget my worries than to put
down a cookie!!
Panel 4 Show Alicia with Super rape face!!! And her hands
clutching the cookies trembling with excitement.
Caption *waku waku/trembled* evil aura around Alicia
and make eyes scary and funny looking. *poto*
in the corner of picture.
ALICIA
Soon you will be eaten and swallowed to
become one with my body! Muwahahaha!
(Hahaha!) To become a source of happiness
for the depressing and normal life I
live!!!!

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Panel 5 Alicia looks up and we see one of her juice
containers rolling away into bushes.
Caption *poto**drops and rolls* the sound of the
container rolling away.
ALICIA
You got to be kidding me.
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Page 10 Meeting the mascot for the First time
Panel 1 Small panel of Alicia rising up to get it. And we
see a shadow of a small beast (mascot).
Caption *Kasa, rustle* bushes rustling from mascot
twitching.
Panel 2 A hand reaches down before the mascot and light
enters in as the mascot is seen for the first
time. A cute little griffin with dragon fly wings.
Caption *zawa/rustle/shine* from the light hitting
the griffin's shiny artificial coat.
Panel 3 Show large shot of Jannie before the mascot.
Caption *gaze/ahh* Jannie seeing the pet for the
first time.
ALICIA
A.... owl.....

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Panel 1 We skip to her at work and mopping the floors. She
is wearing a fast food costume. For the first time
we see her outside of the school setting.
Caption *Squish* mop being used.
ALICIA
What was that?
Panel 2 Small panel of the mascot jumping to attack her
and her getting scared. But on the other side of
the panel what really happened. Alicia running
away from the mascot when it steps out. While
Alicia is reminded of that horror before, her face
becomes drastically fearful.
Caption *OOOOO/roar/howl* of mascot. *Da/dash/run*
Alicia running away. *Kyaaaa/scream/ahhhh*
Alicia screaming.
ALICIA
Some weird mixture of a owl, cat and bug.
It looked like some mutated kitten. Maybe
it escaped from test facility, if so I
should really listen to those emails that
talk about those medical and make-up
facilities where they test on animal
subjects.

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Panel 3 Alicia boss calls for her to come over. Show
Alicia in distance and her bosses hand waving her
over. Alicia jumping from coming out of her state
of shock
Caption *come over* hand waving her over. *Pachi!*
from her snapping out of it.
MANAGER
Hey Alicia come here for a second!
Panel 4 We see Alicia's hands and sheets of paper being
placed into her hands.
Caption *pera/thump/thud/dosa* paper being placed
into hands.
MANAGER
I need you to hand out these pamphlets
today. For our new item on the board and
the sales we're having for this weekend.
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Page 12 Alicia hands out pamphlets
Panel 1 As Alicia clutches the papers she gazes upon the
papers with utter dread. Upward angle of Alicia
clutching papers and shadows of demons in the
background as she cowers in fear of the fragile
demons.
Caption *puru puru/shake shake/quiver*
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Pamphlets.... But I hate handing out
Pamphlets. These demonic word filled paper
mache that have caused wars, established
meaning for children existence and covered
the internet with mountains of junk.
Panel 2 Alicia stands out in the open as she stands
practically in the middle of traffic(people
walking on sidewalk) as she trembles in the crowd
of people walking past. Alicia screaming silently
out loud.
Caption *doon/doom* Showing utter depression or
making known of utter depression or doom.
ALICIA
Worst of all I hate handing them out to
people!
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Page 13 Handing out Pamphlets
Panel 1 Alicia tries to hand them out to people do side
view make shadows of people in front of her to
show she's in a crowd but make her clear. And show
Alicia trembling to hand them out to people.
Caption *suta suta/walk straight pass/tap tap tap*
crowd walking past.
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Would you......? We're
having......next...?
.....take....pamphlet......
(Soft Spoken Voice)
I hate feeling uncertain. I hate this
feeling of being lost, or being possibly
being pointed out.
(Inner monologue)
Panel 2 Smaller Panel of Alicia going up to a woman in one
corner, then a group of boy students in another
corner and trying to give them a pamphlet.
Caption *puru puru/no* for the woman. *Buru
buru/refuse/shake/no* for the boys.
ALICIA
Of my thoughts clouding my reality. Of
seeing the hatred in everyone of knowing
that people are bound to society where
people like me is the bottom denominator.
And how its never going to change.
(Inner monologue)
Panel 3 Alicia gets pushed away and her papers fly out of
her hand. As a man rushes and past and calls her
annoying.
Caption *ba/push/slam/bam/thud* Man shoulder hitting
Alicia. *Gocha
gocha/confusion/flutter/mess/rustle* paper
sounds.
STRANGER #1
Get out of my way if you have nothing to
say!
(Angry Voice)
ALICIA
Ahhh!!
Panel 4 Show Alicia's Papers scattered over the ground,
some people standing others walking on it. Dark
scene show only pants legs, shoes, legs and
papers.
Caption *zaka zaka/tap/tmp* footsteps walking around
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ground. *Gusha/crush* Paper being crushed
under foot.
ALICIA
How it's okay to walk over people like me.
(Inner Monologue)
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Page 14 The Breaking Point of Alicia
Panel 1 Alicia bends down and reaches for the papers and
begins to gather them up. But as she does she
looks up at the crowd now around her. (Downward
horizontal angle seeing her from the crowd view)
People begin to look tall and big, slightly
menacing.
Caption *gogogo/menaching atmosphere. Only draw
picture of shoes everything else is dark of
course for the ray of light around Alicia and
the papers. But for papers deep in crowd do
not paint shoes white, instead paint as black
and the shoes on them as black. Only shoes
around Alicia (mostly the tips of shoes) are
lighted.
ALICIA
Stop looking at me like that... Stop
looking at me!
(Inner Monologue 1)
Someone help! Please help!
(Inner Monologue 2)
I can't take it anymore...
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Panel 2 Small Panel show young teenage girl from another
school. And a cellphone in her hand.
ALICIA
Stop it!
Panel 3 Another Small this time of a business man looking
slightly angry or disgusted.
ALICIA
I know you don't like me...
Panel 4 A third small panel spanning the middle of the
page in a row along with panels 2 and 3. This time
of a boy and another one who seem to be smiling or
cackling at the situation.
ALICIA
So stop laughing at me, stop walking away!
Stop! Stop!
Panel 5 A hand reaches down to help her and Alicia pushes
the hand away as she runs inside. Show Alicia's
hands backs and the door opening, as she runs
inside. With the crowd looking on as she runs and
the young man who was offering to help watching
her run away with his hand still out to help her.
Caption *zazaza/run run run* Alicia running inside.
*Kara/open* door opening up.
ALICIA
STOP!!!
Panel 6 Alicia runs past counter, where her Managers calls
out to her.
Caption *Zaza/tmp/tap* Alicia's tapping shoes as she
runs.
MANAGER
What's a matter?! Alicia?!
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Page 15 Alicia Desires to Change
Panel 1 Small Panel show little girls sign on door and
soft hiccuping sounds within.
Caption *Hiiku/hiku/hic/hiccup* sounds of Alicia
crying.
Panel 2 Upward angle of Alicia crying, tears and snot
smearing her face. As she cries and hiccups, she
tries to wipe the tears from her face but its too
much. She is sitting on stall.
Caption *Hiiku/hiku/hic/hikku/hiccup* sounds of
Alicia crying (hiccups).
ALICIA
I hate this..... I hate myself. I hate
being like this. I hate being looked at
like that, of being ignored, of being
laughed at, of being worthless. I hate
being me!
Panel 3 Having a slightly nude picture of Alicia drifting
into the darkness and a small light within her
shining brightly and her clutching furiously to
it.
Caption *jiwa/tearing up* *zu/sink* Alicia sinking
into darkness that reaches and clutches for
her.
ALICIA
I don't want to be like this anymore! I
don't want to stay like this! I want to be
something. I want to be something more! I
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Panel 4 Near the bottom of the stall we see a shadow like
someone's there and a soft knock. Catching
Alicia's attention. We can't see Alicia clearly
but we see a shadow for sure.
Caption *kon/knock* a soft knock.
ALICIA
Someone's by the door!
(Inner Monologue)
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Page 16 Do you wish to change?
Panel 1 This time we can see outside of the door and we
see someone saying "Do you truly wish to change?"
Caption Nothing really here just make bubble soft
looking.
CARINA
Do you truly wish to change?
Panel 2 Small panel of Alicia's eyes twitching.
Caption *piku/flinch/twitch* Alicia's eyes twitching
or blinking.
ALICIA
If I could only become more, a little
braver.
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Panel 3 Small panel of Alicia grubbing the handle of the
stall. In a row across like the last and the one
after this one. And she jerks the door open.
Caption *gu/grip/pull/jerk* the door open.
ALICIA
A little happier, a little prettier, a
little smaller. Then maybe... Maybe
then... I could
(Inner monologue)
Panel 4 For the first time we see the mascot in all of her
glory. Carina and Alicia comes face to face one
more time. Alicia stares down. Side view and we
can't really see the bathroom but we have hints
that it is a bathroom. Stall walls.
Caption *dodo-n/ahhhh/reveal/tada* Mascot is revealed
once more. And this time their meeting is
fatal (complete)
ALICIA
Change, maybe then could I be the me I
dreamed of being. That I have always
wished to be.
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Page 17 Alicia's Unspoken Desire
Panel 1 Alicia jumps a bit clutching the sides of the
stall as she gazes down at the creature. In
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over small Alicia's chili's body, hungrily.
Downward or sky angle of Alicia.
Caption *munzu/grab* Alicia clutching to the stall
shivering.
ALICIA
It's you! Here to finish the job!?
Panel 2 Alicia reconsiders the creature when she sees it
tweet and she realizes. That she has done the
something that she dislikes society doing to her.
And for once finds the small little creature cute.
Upward angle from mascot point of view. Show soft
images of the Carina's and Alicia's face in the
corner.
Caption *piyo piyo/tweet/peep* Carina chirps at
Alicia.
ALICIA
Wait... It doesn't want to hurt me. The
only thing I have done to it was avoid it.
Like how the world does to me, like what
it does to it's problems.
Panel 3 Alicia's hands reaches towards the creature.
Caption *hesitant* reaching out to mascot.
ALICIA
Have you been following me?
(Spoken)
It has never wanted to hurt me. The only
thing it seemed to want was me.
(Inner monologue.)
Panel 4 Show Alicia's hand reaching towards Carina, but
this time the voice comes out again.
Caption *Buooooo/roar/whoosh* rush of wind that
radiates from Carina. *Zawa/shine/wrap*
Carina glowing this time.
CARINA
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Page 18 A forgotten promise. Change.
Panel 1 A smaller Alicia standing before a man and his
hand upon her head. Telling her to protect.
Caption *nade nade/stroke stroke* stroking Alicia's
head.
ALICIA'S DAD
Promise to protect.
Panel 2 Carina looking at her before when she asked her if
she truly wanted to change.
Caption No sound.
CARINA
Panel 3 Small panel of her saying mommy lips only and
tears cradling face.
Caption *Shin/silence/shock*
ALICIA
Mommy....
(Whisper)
Protect.Change.
(Inner Thought)
Panel 4 Black Panels... Leading into next page.
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Page 19 A Bad Dream
Panel 1 Nothing. Black Panel but soft cries is written in
white.
Caption *mi-/cry/wail* soft cry.
Panel 2 Alicia speaking mommy as her hands clutch to the
wall. Everything is dark and eery.
Caption *gashin/clutch/grab* Alicia's grip.
ALICIA
Mommy...
Panel 3 Her mother's body twitch roughly. And Silence
falls.
Caption *bikun/hard flinch/sudden twitch* Alicia's
mother twitches.
Panel 4 Alicia's mother turns around and her eyes are
black, skin pale and lips are gone leading to a
plain open mouth with sharp teeth. Deep red
pupils.
Caption *gokin gokin/crack/disjoint* Alicia's
mother's head at a weird angle as she calls
her.
MARY
Alicia.
Panel 5 Alicia's eyes open as she wakes up. Just her eyes
opening frightened.

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Caption *pachin/snap open* Eyelids opening.
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Panel 1 Alicia is sitting up in bed, and she seems to be a
hospital room. Rubbing her head some. Side angle.
Caption *soyo soyo/breeze breeze* a light breeze
blowing the curtains.
ALICIA
A dream...
Panel 2 Show a small panel of her pulling the shade back
some chibi mood.
Caption *sharan/rattle/slide* Curtains being pulled
back.
Panel 3 Still in Chibi mood she is still looking outside.
Caption *Ho/phew* relieved sigh.
ALICIA
I'm home.... It was all a dream. A highly
intricate nightmare at that.
Panel 4 Falling back upon the bed, she sighs as she curls
into the comfortable pillow. Hugging the covers to
her face. And closing her eyes. Not seeing that
beside her is her mascot sleeping away on the
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Caption *bofun/fall/fwump/dosa/thump* falling onto
the bed. *Gururu gururu/purr purr* sleeping
Carina.
ALICIA
Great! It was all a dream. I'm probably at
mountainside hospital and the only thing
to do now is to wait till my mom picks me.
I wonder what happened before. Maybe I hit
my head during work or something.
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Panel 1 Alicia acts as if she's about to go to sleep.
Small chibi panel.
Caption *gururu* purring and *su/sigh* Alicia's soft
sigh.
Panel 2 Suddenly Alicia's eyes burst open and her eyes
balls sticking out of her head in utter shock sees
Carina next to her. Chibi mood.
Caption *pisha/crack/shock* Alicia is extremely
shocked.
Panel 3 Alicia plastered against the wall trembling
watches as Carina wakes up slowly. Chibi mood
Caption *chi chi chi* soft chi as Carina stretches.
*Kata kata* trembling.
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Y-y-y-y-y-y yo-yo-yo-your your your re-re-
real?!
Panel 4 Carina approaches her as she curls into Alicia
purring loudly. But Alicia is utterly terrified of
the creature.
Caption *gurururu/purring* Carina. *Gaku
gaku/shiver/tremble* Alicia
ALICIA
But that's impossible. You was all a
dream. It was all a dream. This isn't
real. Your not real. None of this is real.
Panel 5 A faint shadow appears in the corner of the panel,
as Alicia looks up at the figure.
Caption *kero/croak/ribbit* Kerushuu.
KERUSHUU
I woun't sa dat. ( Translated: I wouldn't
say that).
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Panel 1 We see Kerushuu for the first time and he's
sitting in a chair, one legged crossed, in one
hand he's smoking a water pipe and in his other
hand is a cane made of wood.
Caption *buku buku/bubbles* Water pipe.

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KERUSHUU
Wal awl et seems ya awake now? Yah?
(Translated: Well Well it seems your awake
now? Yes?)
Panel 2 Smaller Panel of Alicia clutching the curtain and
her heart pounding in her chest. Do close up on
wrist to see something shimmering on wrist.
Caption *dokun/heartbeat/da-dump/heartache* Alicia's
heartbeat. *Gugu/clench* hand clenching
drapes. *Zawa/bo/shine/ignite* wrist band.
ALICIA
A monster....
(Inner thoughts)
Who-who who who are you?! What do you want
from me?!
Panel 3 Carina's eyes flares up and a soft growl starts to
emits from its throat. Show viciousness of
Carina's cute looks.
Caption *garuru/growwl/snarl/ragghhh* Carina's snarl.
Panel 4 Kerushuu puts his hands up as he smiles at Alicia.
Caption *sara/rustle* Kerushuu's clothes.
KERUSHUU
I believe on your planet this is a common
gesture for vulnerability or wishing for
peace, surrender possibly in this matter.
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Page 23 Discovering the Weapon
Panel 1 Alicia doesn't calm down her heart rate only
increasing. As Carina's growls become more verbal.
We see her bracelet is lighting up even more as
Carina's eyes shine.
Caption *ranran/intense* Eyes of Carina's and
Alicia's.
ALICIA
That didn't answer my question. Why are
you surrendering to me! Why should I trust
you?! Your one of those aliens, I've been
hearing about. Aren't you!
Panel 2 Kerushuu doesn't say but he points out how Alicia
is the real threat in this room due to Carina who
is on the offensive.
Caption *bishi/point* kerushuu pointing out Carina.
KERUSHUU
The only threat in this room, is you my
dear. The guardian beast you have bonded
with is connected to your feelings.
Whatever you fear it fears and whatever
you hate it shall hate. Such a beast with
immersive power should be dealt with care.
If you are not careful you'll end up doing
something you'll regret.
Panel 3 Alicia looks upon Carina for the first time and
sees the fear in its body. How it's body trembles
before Kerushuu.
Caption *wana wana/tremble tremble* Carina trembling.
ALICIA
It's scared. For me?
Panel 4 Alicia reaches out and touches Carina and
instantly the fear disappears. As she pets her
relief sets in and Carina purrs against her hand.
Show only Carina responding to her hand being
placed upon her. Though in the corner do a shot of
Alicia reaching out to Carina.

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Caption *gururu/purr purr* Carina purring. *Nade
nade/pet pet* petting Carina.
Panel 5 Small panel of Alicia smiling at the sound of
Carina purring. And Kerushuu smiling. In the other
corner.
Caption *gururu* Carina purring.
ALICIA
Your actually pretty cute.
(Inner Thought)
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Panel 1 Kerushuu reaches from his chair to a end table as
he rolls it over. And speaks of how he doesn't
wish to hurt her.
Caption *goro/rolling over* End table rolling over.
KERUSHUU
I won't hurt you, so you don't have to
fear me. Plus even if I did seek for
blood, I would have taken one of your
leaders instead. Or I would've done by
now.
Panel 2 Kerushuu placing cup upon end table, of a round
cup where milk floats in it steaming. Alicia
gazing upon it with a faint blush at the smell of
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Caption *hoka hoka/warm/sweet smell* Heated milk.
KERUSHUU
I believe on your planet warm milk is
soothing to your kind? Yah?
ALICIA
Sweet milk?
(Inner Thought)
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Panel 1 Alicia hesitates as she goes into chibi mood and
gazes upon Kerushuu almost upset at the motion he
made. Seeing this was childlike. But blushing
slightly.
Caption *pita/pause*
ALICIA
That's for children...
Panel 2 Kerushuu smiles as he leans back and goes back to
blowing his pipe. (Side view) His eyes are closed.
Caption *buku buku/bubble* water pipe
KERUSHUU
Are you not a child yourself?
Panel 3 Alicia blushes at the thought of him saying. She
reaches for the cup anyway. Chibi mood.

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Caption *pashi/grasp/grab* her grasping the cup.
Panel 4 Another Chibi panel she tips it back.
Caption *kokkun/gulp*
Panel 5 Alicia blushes as she has a ring of milk around
the top of her lip. She looks away shy and soft
looking as she normally does.
Caption *nuku nuku/ nice and warm/soft*
ALICIA
Than... Thank you.
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Panel 1 Panel of Kerushuu smiling.
Panel 2 Alicia stares out of the window as she holds the
cup in her hands.
Caption Nothing.
ALICIA
What happened? I mean... Why am I here?
Where am I?
Panel 3 Kerushuu stands alongside the bed as he gazes out
at the world as well.
Caption *saku saku/squish*

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KERUSHUU
Well my dear as for where you are...
Panel 4 Pulling back the shade of the curtain till it
rips. And we see the first evidence of space.
Caption *buchi buchi/ripping* curtain ripping.
Panel 5 The room begins to peel away till all of space is
around them. Earth is below them.
Caption *Shin/silience* Space. *Hmmmm*
KERUSHUU
Your in space , aboard a alienship that's
currently hovering over your planet earth.
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Page 27 Kerushuu
Panel 1 Alicia stares out at space as if she's floating
away, and loses herself in the vastness of it.
Caption *fuwa fuwa/floating* sensation.
ALICIA
Space.... I'm in space.
(Inner Thought)
Earth... Is below me. Strange, was earth
always that small. Was it always that far
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Panel 2 Alicia turns to see Kerushuu and he is bowing
before her, his long limb bent to show he is
bowing. He looks like a servant.
Caption *buka/fuka/bow* Kerushuu
KERUSHUU
And I. I am Kerushuu. And yes I am one of
those aliens you speak of so highly. Nice
to meet you.
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Page 28 Enter Kasernage
Panel 1 A super lower close of Kasernage's legs and small
bits of Alicia and Kerushuu looking towards the
legs.
Caption *ko/tap/step* footsteps.
KERUSHUU
Oh have you come to greet our guest,
Panel 2 A full shot of Kasernage in all of his glory
looking handsome as usual and slightly emotionless
or annoyed.
Caption No sound.
KERUSHUU
Kasernage?
Panel 3 Small picture of Alicia gazing at Kasernage and
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Caption No sound
ALICIA
Wait... He's an alien? But he doesn't look
too weird to me?! How is that possible?!
(Inner Thought)
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Page 29 First Meeting with Kasernage
Panel 1 Show Kasernage's lips, gorgeous and soft shape to
them definitely kissable.
Caption *enchanted/uttori*
ALICIA
I mean there is barely no difference
between me and him beside a few things...
Panel 2 Show his abs and how they are pressed against his
suit.
Caption *Uttori/shine*
ALICIA
And those abs!!!
Panel 3 Kasernage approaching her and Alicia stiffing up
some.
Caption *Piku/twitch/flinch* Alicia flinching

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Panel 4 Kasernage leaning over as he stares into her eyes
and Alicia staring back.
Caption *staare/ji-/jiro jiro/jiro* Kasernage staring
Alicia down and Alicia getting nervous.
ALICIA
Oh no he's staring at me now.... I'm
getting nervous now.
Panel 5 Panel of Kasernage's eyes as he stares into
lavender eyes.
Caption No sound
ALICIA
His eyes....are such a pretty color...I
can't help myself getting sucked into
them....Wait! He has long eyelashes!!!
Longer than mines. They are so beautiful.
Panel 6 We see Alicia's cheeks flood with blood and her
trying to say something, and Carina (her mascot)
staring up at her.
Caption *dokin/ba-dump/thump* Alicia's heart racing
within her chest.
ALICIA
My heart hurts....wait has it been beating
this quickly before or did it just get
louder when he came near me. I don't know
what to say.... I don't know what to do...
(Inner monologue)
Ummm I....umm...my...mmmn...na na
name....ummmm
Panel 7 Kasernage looking over at Kerushuu and this time
slightly annoyed.
Caption *pishi/crack/snap* her mentality breaking.
KASERNAGE
Are you sure this is her?
Panel 8 Alicia turning to stone and a mouth still trying
to say something.

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Caption *pisha/shock/crack* Alicia turning to stone.
KASERNAGE
I mean she doesn't look like much to me.
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Panel 1 Kasernage stands up as Kerushuu walks towards him.
Caption No sound
KERUSHUU
Well of course, she has a guardian beast
in her arms correct, plus just because she
doesn't look like what you expect doesn't
mean she isn't valuable.
Panel 2 Kasernage looks over at Alicia who is now scared
of his words.
Caption *nu/scared/frightened/thwap* Alicia twitching
scared.
KASERNAGE
Even if she isn't much... Still she's way
too timid for someone willing to accept
your features and not mines.
Panel 3 We get a upward angle of Kasernage, Kerushuu and
Alicia as they listen to the announcement.
Caption No sound

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SPEAKER
Kerushuu, Kasernage and.... Human being
please report to the meeting room. Repeat.
Please report to the meeting room.
ALICIA
What was with that pause....
Panel 4 Kerushuu waves the two as he walks towards the
door while Alicia is getting off of the bed for
the first time and Kasernage still standing by the
bed.
Caption NO sound
KERUSHUU
Well it seems they want us now, we better
hurry on.
Panel 5 Kasernage looks over at Alicia, as she freezes up
again.
Caption No sound.
KASERNAGE
She's still afraid of me.
Panel 6 Kasernage's hand outreached towards her, claws
towards end but long and thin fingers.
Caption No sound
KASERNAGE
Come, your probably weak from the trip.
Panel 7 Kaser's hand outreached and Alicia gazing upon it
slightly flushed.
Caption *doki doki, ba dump/pit-a-pat* Alicia's heart
throbbing.
ALICIA
Huh.....He's helping me up?
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Page 31 walking to the conference room
Panel 1 Kerushuu in the lower portion of the panel,
Kasernage with almost half of his body showing and
Alicia walking behind smaller and yet full body.
Down a long hallway.
Caption *teko teko/step/tmp/walks* their footsteps as
they walk down the corridor.
Panel 2 We see the back of Kasernage's back, wide and his
back bone is showing some.
Caption No sound
ALICIA
He helped me.
Panel 3 We see Alicia blushing madly as she walks along
her hair waving some around her face.
Caption No sound.
ALICIA
I thought he was scary at first, but he's
actually... Kinda nice. Regardless of his
words.
Panel 4 Dreamy panel of Kasernage holding Alicia's hand as
they float about some. Kasernage saying the words
from before.
Caption *Fuwa fuwa/softness/fluff fluff* showing
softness of the moment.

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KASERNAGE
Your probably weak from the trip.
ALICIA
So Dreamy....
Panel 5 Alicia walks into Kasernage's back make sure to
draw him seductively from every angle.
Caption *battari/bump/walk into/run into* Alicia
walking into his back.
ALICIA
Uhhh.... Ouch.
(Spoken)
Panel 6 Kasernage turning around towards Alicia and Alicia
gently touching her nose that is now throbbing
some.
Caption *zukin/throb/sting* Showing her nose is
throbbing.
KASERNAGE
Pay attention, we're here.
ALICIA
Back to angry mood huh?
(Inner Thought)
Oh... Sorry.
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Panel 1 Show the three before a grand door with a spiral
like mark upon it.
Caption *Bishaa/reveal/doom* great reveal of door
before them.
KASERNAGE
Just past this door
Panel 2 Alicia staring at the door in awe as Kasernage
also gazes upon it.
Caption *ahhhh* soft sigh of awe.
ALICIA
Wow...that's a big door.
KASERNAGE
So childish.
Panel 3 The door begins to open some, where a small hole
appears and the metal begins to slide over one
another.
Caption *su/slide/sigh/pashu-/sst/fwwsshh* door
sliding open.
Panel 4 The door opens to a vast dark room that shows
space around them, it shows earth, a more distant
planet, galaxies and stars. Kasernage and Alicia
stands in the doorway while Kerushuu takes his
first steps.
Caption *hmmmm/mmmm/oooo/wooo/silence* sound inside
of the room.
KERUSHUU
Welcome to the meeting room.
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Panel 1 Kerushuu's feet stepping out and light panels
shining as he steps showing there is a floor of
some sort.
Caption *bi-/beeep/biiii* sound of light shining.
ALICIA
He's walking out... Onto nothing.
Panel 2 Kasernage walking out as well as Alicia looks upon
them scared to ever move.
Caption No sound
ALICIA
How are they doing that?!
Panel 3 Alicia's feet before the threshold and looking
into space before her, of flying asteroids and
millions of stars and galaxies.
Caption *jii/empty/mmmmm/huuuu/oooo* empty space
ALICIA
It looks like if I take a step I would
fall right into space. Fall, float,
whatever. I'm I'm....
Panel 4 Kasernage looking back his arms still crossed he
gazes at her slightly annoyed as if she was some
child. We see galaxies, planets and stars as
backgrounds.
Caption No sound.
KASERNAGE
What your scared? Need someone to hold
your hand?

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Panel 1 Alicia shakes her head, trying to look better in
his eyes.
Caption
ALICIA
No, just.... Nervous. Just...give me a
second okay.
Panel 2 Alicia's foot reaches out and touches the first
panel as a light shows.
Caption Sound of light again.
ALICIA
Alright that's one step, it seems there's
a floor beneath. Like back at the room. So
that means that its safe to walk I just
have to get over this fear of falling.
Panel 3 We see Alicia's backside slightly as she walks
ingot he room and her hair blows behind her.
Caption No sound.
ALICIA
And even if I am scared, I am aboard a
alienship now. Going back will do nothing
for me and running aimlessly is less
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Panel 4 Kasernage surpassed and slightly shocked by her
bravery.
Caption No Sound.
Panel 5 Alicia and Kasernage gazing into each other's eyes
as Alicia meets him. Her mascot tweeting happily
as they come face to face once again.
Caption *yanwari/soft/gently* the atmosphere around
them.
ALICIA
I have no choice but to go forward, and to
see what's ahead of me now. I mean it
can't be that scary as long as he's with
me...
Panel 6 Kasernage walks along, he smirks slightly.
Caption *ni/smirk/grin* Kasernage smirking.
KASERNAGE
So she can speak.
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Panel 1 Alicia standing before a half oval table that
seems to be floating in the air. And at each
measured portion is a body. There is a total of 8
aliens at the table.
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COUNSEL
Welcome Guardian Alicia!!
Panel 2 The first three are, Herlo ( a horned bull and
lion alien looking alien), Merdes (a scaled alien
with long wavy hair) and Feveran (a orange skinned
fire body).
Panel 3 The next two is Xeren (a two faced being, with a
nose cow ring and horns on the tips of his chin
skin color also red) and Beshir (another humanoid
looking being but has a third eye and a female).
Panel 4 The last three is a kid named Claud (who has dark
grey skin, humanoid and dark hair but has three
fingers and toes), a humanoid man with long red
hair and flesh toned skin like Alicia but his face
is severely scared and left arm is metallic and a
female with a hood goes by the named Ul.
Panel 5 Full shot of the counsel as well as Kasernage and
Kerushuu who is smiling of course.
Caption No Sound
COUNSEL
We are the Worlds Counsel.
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Panel 1 Showing some of the counsel members.

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Caption No Sound.
XEREN
We are a unique collection of beings from
all sectors of space. Some of the same
types and others of differences all
together.
Panel 2 Xeren rises to his feet as he raises his arm over
his group.
Caption No sound.
XEREN
Our sole purpose is to make certain of the
universe's existence and beings of those
of the future. We are to find world
guardians or Genkachis to act as
representatives and to find and destroy
the taint or Seralons from spreading to
other planets. To which sadly your planet
is currently riddled with.
Panel 3 Xeren points out to Alicia as he tells her, her
new position in life.
Caption *pishi/point* Xeren Pointing his finger.
XEREN
And you have been chosen to rid your
planet of the taint.
Panel 4 Alicia gazes down at Carina in astonishment.
Caption *Piku/ehhhh* SFX or *a/ahhh!* for sound.
XEREN
For in your very arms lies the weapon that
will determine whether your world's fate.
You and your guardian beast alone will
stand between salvation or destruction.
ALICIA
What!
Panel 5 We Alicia's wrist the bracelet that bears the same
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Caption *Chuu/piyo/squeak/cheep/chirp* Alicia
chirping softly.
XEREN
And the band on your wrist is the symbol
of the contract you have accepted between
the two of you. A contract that binds your
heart, mind and life together in a never-
ending partnership.
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Panel 1 Alicia steps forth confused by the words that has
now spewed from this mans mouth.
Caption No Sound.
ALICIA
Wait! No no no this isn't right!
Partnership! Taint! Guardian! What is
this? What are you saying I have been
chosen to rid this taint. All I remember
is being at my job and finding this,
this... thing at the door. And hearing a
weird voice talk to me. You must be wrong,
I'm not the person you want.
Panel 2 Xeren looks at her slightly surprised. As the rest
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Caption *boso/mumble/mutter/whisper* Counsel
whispering.
Panel 3 Upward angle of Alicia gazing down at the ground.
Her cheeks flushed red with blood.
Caption No sound.
ALICIA
I mean I don't even know what you mean.
I'm not a guardian, I'm not even a proper
human. I can't be the person your talking
about, I just...
Panel 4 Smaller panel of Kasernage looking upon her,
disappointed his arms crossed.
Caption No SFX
Panel 5 Close up of Xeren as he speaks.
Caption No SFX or sound.
XEREN
If earth doesn't have a guardian, if you
do not accept this position we will have
no choice but to...
Panel 6 Larger picture of Alicia's eyes as she sees
screens of earth.
Caption No Sound.
XEREN
Destroy earth ourselves to ensure the
universes safety.
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Panel 1 We now see screenshots of earth, some of wars,
some of cities, some of landscapes and others of
strange reports and aliens.
Caption *bi/hii/pii* screens showing earth.
XEREN
Earth has become intoxicated with taints.
They are the cause of your wars, of your
selfishness, of your greed and ignorance.
For these beast do not only inflict
emotions and thoughts upon others. They
themselves take upon physical form and
wreck havoc upon the earth.
Panel 2 A screen appears beside Alicia where she sees a
Seralon in her city.
Caption *o-/roar/ragggh* Seralon roaring as he
stretches forth his arms.
XEREN
As you can see, this is one of many that
have awakened. And he will not be the
last.
ALICIA
Wait... That's my town.
Panel 3 Xeren shapes his fingers.
Caption *Pan/snap/pop* Xeren snapping fingers.
XEREN
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Panel 4 Alicia stands before several screens each a
panoramic view of a city scape. Of a city burning,
buildings destroyed and a giant taint standing
over the city seeming to pierce the very sky.
Caption *Kya-kya/Shriek* Screaming of the people as
they burn and die. Skies littered with Taints
as well as grounds. People jumping from
buildings and running about.
XEREN
He will one day become this, ending life
upon your planet as your know it. Turning
it into a endless suffering of hell until
every last one of your kind is dead and
rotten.
Panel 5 Alicia becomes fearful as her eyes tear up some.
Caption *wana wana/tremble/shake* Alicia trembling.
ALICIA
No... No your wrong. This can't be. Your
wrong.
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Panel 1 Kerushuu now speaks and he is smoking a pipe. The
smoke tail wrapping around his hands now showing
his eyes.
Caption

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KERUSHUU
He isn't wrong. But you are.
Panel 2 Alicia gazes at Kerushuu.
Caption
KERUSHUU
I don't your guardian beast was wrong in
picking you. I think you was wrong in
denying yourself, your destiny.
Panel 3 Alicia shouts for the first time.
Caption
ALICIA
My destiny... What do you know of my
destiny! Look at me! This is my destiny!
This is all of it! What else could there
be!
Panel 4 Kerushuu slams his staff onto the ground.
Caption *baka-n/smack/crack* Staff smashing into the
ground.
KERUSHUU
Then change it! That is what you desired
is it not. Did you not want to change
yourself. Did you not want to be more.
This is your chance your opportunity. The
guardian beast choose you.
Panel 5 Kerushuu places the tip of the staff against
Alicia's chest. As Alicia gazes at Kerushuu with
new eyes.
Caption
KERUSHUU
Guardian beast do not choose those who are
the strongest, from the wisest or those
who are supposedly suited to the role. But
those who are able to stretch it. It
choose you because of what was in here.
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Panel 1 Skip to beginning scene again, show arm about to
come down upon Alicia in her eyes again*
Caption *Bun/swoosh* Arm about to come down.
KERUSHUU
The only thing you have to do is choose to
change it.
Panel 2 Kasernage screaming out to her, trying to get up.
Caption
KASERNAGE
ALICIA!!!
Panel 3 Close up on Alicia's mouth as she speaks.
Caption Nothing
KERUSHUU
Just change.
(Spoken)
ALICIA
Change.
Panel 4 Suddenly a blind light encompasses Alicia and
blinds the creature.
Caption *buwa/wooosh/boom* Light surrounding Alicia
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Panel 5 Go back to scene where Alicia was poked by
Kerushuu.
Caption Nothing.
KERUSHUU
So do you wish to change?
Panel 6 Kasernage looks over at her and smiles.
Caption Nothing.
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Panel 1 Alicia crying but a determined look upon her face.
Caption No SFX.
ALICIA
HAI!!!! (Yes!)
Panel 2 Kerushuu smiles as he places his staff down.
Caption Nothing.
KERUSHUU
Well then... I officially call you
Guardian... Oh wait I never got your name.
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Caption Nothing.
ALICIA
Alicia. Alicia Ebele.
Panel 4 The counsel gathers around her as well as
Kasernage.
Caption Nothing.
KERUSHUU
Alicia Ebele what a pretty name, what does
it mean?
Panel 5 Alicia smiles as gazes at Carina who looks back at
her.
Caption Nothing.
ALICIA
Noble Mercy or Kindness.
Panel 6 A warm light engulfs the circles the group as
Kerushuu finihes off the chapter with a final
speech.
Caption *wooo* Light shinning.
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Panel 2 Large Panel of Alicia in her new battle armor and
a massive hammer over her shoulder.
Caption *dodo-n/tada/woooo* new battle form.
KERUSHUU
Mercy. I now call you Alicia Ebele, one
with great mercy. To save and protect
earth. To change who you were to become
who you must be. Guardian of Earth.

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