Discussion Guideline Your discussion post should aspire to include six sentences. Below are some guidelines to help you frame your thoughts. Organizing Your Thoughts 1. Topic Sentence (TS): Introduce the main topic this paragraph will address. Open up the discussion in a way that is considerate of the reader’s comprehension. Explain what the audience needs to know before they read your discussion post. 2. Concrete Detail I (CD I): Present your first piece of evidence ( quote, fact, statistic, data) to the reader in a clear, deliberate manner. Remember to cite the source of your evidence parenthetically. 3. Commentary I (CM1): Clearly explain to the reader what this piece of evidence means. Explain the significance of the quote you have chosen. Begin to build upon the theme you introduced in your Topic Sentence. 4. Commentary II (CM2): Advance your argument by explaining why this piece of evidence matters. Explain why the reader should care about the quote and topic you have selected to discuss. 5. Commentary III (CM3): Explain how the evidence impacts your main point. Complete your thoughts in a way that builds momentum from CM I, II, and III, so the reader understands how your thoughts are developing. 6. Conclusion Sentence (CS): Conclude your discussion post with a sentence that states the core idea of the paragraph. Leave the audience with a “a take away” message that is easy to understand. Notes for Citing a Quote Remember, a quote cannot stand alone. It must be introduced with a speaker tag (Adichie says). Also, you should include the page number parenthetically at the end of the sentence. Note: the period comes after the cited page number. The below examples are correct. In the beginning of her third suggestion, Adichie says, “Teach her that the idea of gender roles is absolute nonsense” (14). Adichie states her third suggestion plainly: “Teach her that the idea of gender roles is absolute nonsense” (14). “Teach her,” Adichie explains, “that the idea of gender roles is absolute nonsense” (14). At the heart of her third suggestion, Adichie believes that “gender roles [are] absolute nonsense” because they create unfair, inherent division (14). The most direct thesis statement in today's reading is "the idea (that) gender roles is absolute nonsense" (Adichie 14). This example is NOT CORRECT: "Teach her that the idea of gender roles is absolute nonsense" (14). Student Example Through humility and honesty, Chimamanda Adichie attempts to guide her friend through raising a child with a feminist outlook in the best way possible. She starts with a suggestion that is personable and important when she tells Ijeawele, “Be a full person” (7). This quote suggests that Ijeawele should not to lose herself in becoming a mother, but instead keep aspects of herself before motherhood intact. This advice is important because a mother should not be defined solely as the mother of her child. She needs to have an identity tha ...