1. Good points:
The people knew what’s going on in our film opening
When Luis is coming into the room and pointing the gun
towards the camera, it was clear for the audience that he
was pointing the gun in Leos direction.
Bad points:
The titles came in too early
When ‘art and writing – Mariana Leiferman’ appears, it
should be ‘script’ instead of ‘wiriting’
When the camera titles appear the camera is a bit shaky,
so we should show the camera title when the camera is
steady
You couldn’t see the studio logo for a long time so we
have to show it a bit longer.
The gun we used was a toy gun. It didn’t look very real
because there was some red colour on it so we will have
to use colour filter to make the red colour disappear.
For some reason we didn’t record Leos, Luis’ voice, so we
have to rerecord it.