The document describes scenes from a story involving characters Arent, Sara, Wyck and Drecht. Sara warns Arent not to let Wyck cut him during an upcoming fight. Drecht advises Arent to defend himself and try to kill Wyck quickly. Arent gives Sara his father's rosary to hold for safekeeping before entering the fighting ring to battle Wyck as the crowd cheers.

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EST Shot: Ocean at dusk
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SARA (VO): Don't let Wyck nick you here or here.
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ARENT (blue) and SARA (green) move towards the makeshift fighting ring. WYCK
(orange) is practicing in the circle. DRECHT (red) moves towards Arent and Sara
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SARA (VO): Don't let Wyck nick you here or here.
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ARENT (blue) and SARA (green) move towards the makeshift fighting ring. WYCK
(orange) is practicing in the circle. DRECHT (red) moves towards Arent and Sara
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SARA: You'll bleed and keep bleeding...
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SARA:...and there won't be anything I can
do.
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DRECHT (OS): Lieutenant Hayes.
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DRECHT: Guard your body, and if you get
the chance,
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DRECHT: put a blade in his throat.
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DRECHT: put a blade in his throat.
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DRECHT (OS): Every second this fight
drags on
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DRECHT(OS): ...is to his advantage.
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DRECHT(OS): ...is to his advantage.
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ARENT: I told you, I'm going to lose.
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DRECHT: That's
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DRECHT: your plan.
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DRECHT: His plan
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DRECHT (OS): is to lie to you, then kill
you quick.
Action Notes
WYCK shadowboxes with his knife
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DRECHT (OS): is to lie to you, then kill you quick.
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WYCK shadowboxes with his knife
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DRECHT (OS): is to lie to you, then kill you quick.
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WYCK shadowboxes with his knife
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DRECHT (OS): And if that fails,
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WYCK shadowboxes with his knife
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DRECHT (OS): And if that fails,
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WYCK shadowboxes with his knife
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DRECHT: to kill you
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DRECHT: slow.
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DRECHT (OS): I know men like this.
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DRECHT (OS): They can't be trusted.
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DRECHT (OS): They can't be trusted.
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Arent reaches inside his doublet...
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...and pulls out his dad's rosary.
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cut on action
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ARENT: Can you keep this safe for me?
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SARA: I'll have it waiting when you get
back.
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Sara and Arent's gazes linger for a
moment
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Sara and Arent's gazes linger for a
moment
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SFX (OS): crowd cheers/grows in volume
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Arent touches Sara's arm
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Arent turns and leaves
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Arent nods to Drecht
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Arent pushes into the crowd
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Arent pushes into the crowd
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