3. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
There are a few things that I like with my elephant. The main outline structures a cute, cartoon elephant that fits well with the aim
of this task. The outline is simple and isn’t trying to be too specific, just having a round head and ear’s. However the main part of
my image that I particularly like is the outline and shaping of the head and trunk. It stands out off the rest of the body and having it
made out of just one shaping gives me more space to add smaller details, such as the texture and shaping of the creases of the
trunk. The little detail on the trunk is something I find cute and simple, I believe adding the different sizes of the creases etc brings
out the shaping of the trunk more.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I was to do this again I would either pick a different animal that is simpler and doesn’t have as much shadowing and detail, such
as a dog or a panda. However if I couldn’t choose another animal I would just choose a different position of the elephants head so
you could see the full body, been able to work with more space and more shaping, making it easier to try and get across the main
structure and details of the animal. This certain position of this elephant gives you a close up of the elephants head, not giving you
much eye space to see the back of the body as its been clouded by shadowing and the head and trunk. The detail I would like to
add it would be the shaping of the ear’s, with the curving and the general idea of the ‘flappiness’ of the ears. However on mine its
showing just a rounded shaping. Another point of detail that I would of added in would be the sharpness of the tusks and the
shadowing over the eyes, adding lines in to shape the eyelids.
18. Proposal
Dimensions
(number of pages and page size)
Export Format
Advantages:
Disadvantages:
Story Overview
(Provide an outline of your story)
19. Production Methods
(Explain the methods you are going to use to produce your pages. Show us the
thinking behind your decisions for a more detail response)
Audience
(Think about who you are targeting as your audience. Consider age, gender, class,
location and other characteristics which could define your audience.)
Deadline
20. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
21. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
22. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
23. Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?
