This document outlines scenes from a short film involving three students, Jack, Jonas, and John, investigating a mysterious shadow in an empty classroom. In the first scene, the three students enter the classroom joking around. Jack then turns on the lights, revealing smoke in half of the room. When Jack touches the smoke, it burns his hand. The shadow then expands towards the three students, consuming them as they scream in pain. The document concludes by introducing two additional characters, Ashley and Amelia, who walk past the classroom at the end.
2. Int. Corridor - Day
• Start Dialogue where the audience
is introduced to Jack, Jonas and
John. Camera moving through
corridor - wide shot. Camera turns
to the door.
• 5 seconds
3. Corridor
• JACK, JONAS and JOHN walking
down the corridor side by side
talking to each other.
• Camera tracking through corridor
slowly.
• Whip-pans to the door
• Shot is 10 seconds long
4. INT. Classroom
• Cut to: Interior of
classroom. Duration:20 seconds
• wide shot on classroom door from
within the smoke, viewer can see
smoke around the scene, zooming in
slowly on the door handle which
rattles and turns opening. Wide shot
of them coming into the classroom
through the door from the outside.
• Close up on JACK’S face, smiling and
casual.
7. Introduction to the Shadow
• 15 Seconds
• Mid shot of the students walking
into the room, closing the door
behind them.
• Dialogue:
• Jack "I will get the lights,
guys." Jonas and John "Sure."
8. Light switch
• Cut to: seconds 6
• c/up Jack flipping the light switch,
turning on the lights
• JACK turns on the lights, turning
around notices smoke in one half
of the room.
• Cut to:
9. Jack spotting the Shadow
• Cut to: seconds 15
• Jack talking to John and Jonas.
• m/s
10. Jack gets his hand burnt by the
Shadow
• 20 seconds
• Close Up on Jack's burnt hand
• Jack moving closer to the red
tinted smoke, reaching out to put
his hand into it when it engulfs his
hand. Pulling his hand out burnt.
11. Jonas and John worrying about
Jack's burnt hand
• 15 seconds Jack (Screaming in
pain)
• cut to: "Jack's hand which is burnt
cuts back to John and Jonas talking
and worrying over the burn"
• The red tinted smoke is expanding
towards them and is glowing a
brighter red colour gradually.
12. Shadow expanding towards Jack,
Jonas and John
• 5 seconds cut to: Wide shot of the
smoke expanding
toward Jack, John and Jonas,
consuming them
• Jack, John and Jonas screaming in
pain as they die.
13. Shadow expanding towards Jack,
Jonas and John
• 5 seconds
• cut to: Wide shot of the smoke
expanding toward Jack, John and Jonas,
consuming them
• Jack, John and Jonas screaming in pain
as they die.
•
• Cut to:
14. Shadow killing the three students
• 5 seconds
• cut to: Wide shot of the smoke
expanding toward Jack, John and
Jonas, consuming them
• Jack, John and Jonas screaming in
pain as they die.
15. Introduction to Ashley and Amelia
and Conclusion
• 10 seconds
• Camera tracking two girls walking
past the classroom
• Fade to black: