A redo of a previous scene I boarded Hopefully the font is legible this time

2. Action Notes
Pan right

3. Action Notes
Dagny pops up

5. Action Notes
SFX: Smack!

6. Dialog
Dagny: "Hey!"

8. Dialog
Faunus: "OUCH!"
Action Notes
SFX: thwhack

9. Dialog
Dagny: "That's my cake"
Action Notes
SFX: "Thump"

10. Dialog
Faunus: "Rude!"
Action Notes
SFX: Slam!

12. Dialog
Dagny: "AH!"

13. Action Notes
Dagny nose dives out of the way

14. Dialog
Arie: What's going on--?
Action Notes
Arie, walking up without looking

15. Action Notes
SFX: Thwhack pt 2

16. Dialog
Faunus: Oops.

17. Dialog
Arie: "FAUNUS!!"

18. Dialog
Faunus: "AAAAAHH"
Arie: "AAAAAHH"

19. Dialog
Faunus: "OOF"

20. Dialog
Arie: "AHHHHH"
Faunus: "Get off me!"

21. Dialog
Faunus: "Seriously, Get. Off!"

24. Dialog
Faunus: "Hey!"

25. Dialog
Faunus: "Hmm..."

28. Action Notes
SFX: Thwhack pt 3

29. Slugging
Start slow motion

30. Dialog
Faunus: "Nooooo-"

31. Dialog
Faunus(OS): "-ooooo"

32. Dialog
Faunus: "Whew."
Slugging
Slow motion ends

37. Dialog
Arie: "ARE YOU KIDDING ME?"

38. Dialog
Arie: "Gimme that cake!"
Dagny: "No!"
Action Notes
Arie gets off Faunus to confront Dagny

39. Dialog
Arie: "Gib. Me!"

40. Dialog
Dagny: "Noo-"
Action Notes
Dagny shakes her head

41. Dialog
Dagny: "-oo!"
Action Notes
Dagny shakes her head

42. Dialog
Dagny(OS): "You din't even wannit!"

43. Dialog
Arie(OS): "Well, now I'm mad! So gib'it"

44. Dialog
Faunus: "Ah-ha!
Dagny: "Hey!"

45. Dialog
Faunus: "Thanks!"

46. Dialog
Faunus: "Oof!"
Action Notes
Arie slams into Faunus again

47. Action Notes
Faunus drops the cake after being rammed into

50. Action Notes
Dagny catches the cake

51. Dialog
Faunus: "Hey, get back here!"

53. Dialog
Faunus: "AAAARGH!"
Arie: "AAAARGH!"

54. Action Notes
Faunus runs directly after Dagny
Arie goes left

58. Dialog
Faunus: "Hah!
Dagny: "Nooooo!"
Action Notes
Faunus catches Dagny in a bear hug

60. Dialog
Dagny: "DANG IT!"
Action Notes
Arie seizes the oppurtunity

61. Dialog
Arie: "Got it!"

62. Dialog
Faunus: "Ok, now give me the cake, Arie."

63. Dialog
Arie: "tch, no."

64. Dialog
Faunus: "Arie. Give. Me. Th--"

65. Dialog
Faunus: "OW!"
Action Notes
SFX: Chomp!

66. Dialog
Dagny: "Heheh"
Faunus: Dagny, what the.."
Action Notes
Dagny manages to escape and turn to face Arie

68. Action Notes
Arie goes to put the cake on the small table

69. Dialog
Dagny: "RAAAAGH!!"

70. Action Notes
Arie turns at the sound of Dagny shouting
He is not amuzed

72. Dialog
Arie: "Alright, bring'i--"

73. Dialog
Arie: "AH!"
Action Notes
SFX: SLAM!

74. Dialog
Arie: "GODS DAGNY! It's jus a cake!"

75. Dialog
Dagny(OS): "You're jus a cake!"

76. Dialog
Arie: "THAT DOESN' MAKE SENSE!"

77. Dialog
Dagny(OS): "You don' make sense!"

78. Action Notes
Dagny and Arie keep arguing while Faunus plots
Camera dollies out

79. Action Notes
Circle camera in front of the children. Move Faunus to the
left

80. Action Notes
Keep circling
Dagny and Arie keep arguing

81. Dialog
Dagny: "Don' even think about it!"
Arie: "Don' even think about it!"
Action Notes
SFX: Smack

82. Dialog
Faunus: "Not again!"
Action Notes
Camera turn from the 6 year olds to Faunus

83. Dialog
Faunus: "Ack!"

84. Action Notes
More arguing
Dagny turns on Arie

85. Action Notes
Dagny tackles Arie
SFX:Slam

86. Action Notes
Faunus is able to get up with the little ones off him

87. Action Notes
He notices the cake

89. Dialog
Faunus: "NOOOO-"

90. Dialog
(OS): "-OOOOO-"
Slugging
Start Slow motion

91. Dialog
"-OOOOO-"

92. Dialog
"-OOOO-"

93. Dialog
"-OOOO-"

94. Dialog
"-OH. NOO-"

95. Dialog
"-OO!"

96. Action Notes
SFX: Thud. Squish

97. Action Notes
Dolly into the door.
Slugging
End Slow motion

98. Action Notes
SFX: Click. Creak
Ptolemy enters with groceries

99. Action Notes
Ptolemy sees:
More shouting from the 6 year olds
Faunus is defeated

100. Dialog
Ptolemy: "HEY!"
Action Notes
Ptolemy slams door open
Behind him are the rest of the orphans

101. Action Notes
Camera pans down as Ptolemy hands off his bag to Hilde
Melchiorre and Arawn look on confused

102. Action Notes
Camera pans back up following Ptolemy's movement

105. Dialog
Ptolemy: "Quit it, you two!"
Action Notes
He picks up Dagny and Arie who continue to fight

106. Dialog
Faunus: "Aw, man...."
Action Notes
Faunus mourns his apron
Hilde walks over to him

107. Action Notes
Camera pans up to Hilde's height

108. Dialog
Hilde: "... We were gone for 15 minutes."