2. FADE IN:
We descend upon our main actor walking through the
hallway of his school, about to enter his class. In the
hallway there will be multiple students also making there
way to their next classes.
The audience will be able to hear background chatter to
show the busy hallway and a school environment.
The audience will be able to hear a voice over during
this scene explain who he is and whats going to happen.
INT. SCHOOL HALL’S - DAY (12:30PM)
MOSES
(narrating the story)
School… cant remember last time i
came to this hell hole.
MOSES
I mean i enjoyed it for the most
part, but there were the odd
problems…
As hes walking down the hallway he get shoved as other
students walk by.
MOSES
My name is Moses Fletcher and I’m
seventeen years old.
MOSES
Apart from the fact that my
mothers gone i am a ordinary
student.
MOSES
I have exceptional grades and I'm
ahead of my classes so I've got
more time on my hand than i can
handle.
MOSES
So basically… My life is boring.
MOSES
Until the day I found the demise
letter…
INT. ICT CLASSROOM - DAY (1:00PM)
Actor enter his class and logs onto a computer ready for
the lesson ahead. When the screen finally turns on, there
is already a website displayed on the computer screen.
3. .2
The actor stares curiously at the screen. Wanting to know
more he studies the website. The actor reads out what the
website says in his head so he doesn't cause suspicion.
MOSES
“The demise letter”…
MOSES
Smiling
What a joke, what kind of name is
that?
The actor continues to read on.
MOSES
“How to use It”
MOSES
“The person’s name that is typed
into this search bar will die”
Flashback: The actor has a flashback of his mother and
his family and how good it was before her death. And then
he has flashback after her death. Memories of him and his
father growing away from each other, having arguments.
EXT. STREET - DAY (5:00PM)
Actor is walking home.
MOSES
There must be something wrong with
me to even consider using that
website.
INT. MOSES HOUSE - NIGHT (8:00PM)
The actor is sitting in his room on his computer doing
school work and then remembers the website. The actor
opens up a new tab writing in the name of this website
and carry’s on reading the rules of the demise letter.
MOSES
“You must have the person’s name
and face in your mind so no other
human will get mixed up in you
plot”.
MOSES
So i type a name in this search
bar and a person dies.
4. .3
Once again the actor thinks of the person who killed his
mother and decides to try it out. So the actor starts to
type the name of his mothers killer and waits. The actor
starts to second guess himself and thinks what is he
doing. He turns his computer off and starts to watch tv.
Later that night, while watching tv, a short clip of the
news pops up and shows Moses that the website actually
works.
Amazed and shocked by what this website can he starts to
laugh. Short laugh.
MOSES
Laughing (short)
Hahahahahahahahaha…
A few weeks have gone by and moses has continued to type
names down which he thinks deserves retribution.
INT. ICT CLASSROOM - DAY (1:00PM)
A new actor gets introduced in this scene. Moses is
sitting down at his usual seat in class. Rebecca walks
into class late and goes to sit next to Moses Leaning
over to put her bags down on the floor she sees moses on
the website and starts to get curious.
REBECCA
Whatcha doin?
MOSES
Nothing
Trying to hide it Moses quickly changes tabs on the
computer screen.
REBECCA
Come on. Ive seen you on that
website for the past few weeks and
your trying to say nothin.
Rebecca reaches for the computer mouse and moses tries to
stop her causing a ruckus in class.
TEACHER
Moses, Rebecca quieten down
After being told to stop moses figures that the only way
this is going to stop is if he tells her what it is and
what hes been doing.
MOSES
Meet me at my house and i will
tell you everything.
5. .4
The bell goes moses instantly leaves, stopping Rebecca
from asking more question
We are outside of moses’s house and seeing Rebecca
ringing the doorbell. Moses opens the door and invites
Rebecca in. Leading her to his room. Moses shuts the door
behind them and starts to explain what’s been going on.
INT. MOSES BEDROOM - NIGHT (7:00PM)
MOSES
OK. This website kills people.
Rebecca pissed thinking that its not true starts to walk
towards the door.
MOSES
Ok. wait, wait Just listen.
MOSES
I type someones name into the
search bar and they die
MOSES
I know it sounds stupid.
REBECCA
Your not kidding.
In the background of Rebecca and moses speaking the tv is
on playing the news. On the news there is a place chase
going on. Moses notices it and shows Rebecca the power of
the website.
MOSES
Watch.
Moses writes the runners name into the website. Watching
the tv, the chase suddenly ends with the runners death.
Amazed with what it can do Rebecca Realises the potential
and joins in but going to the next level.
A couple weeks later She starts to kill hole groups of
people at once causing suspicion with the police. Fearing
being caught moses starts to worry and confronts Rebecca.
INT. MOSES BEDROOM - NIGHT (9:30PM)
MOSES
We should stop.
REBECCA
Why? we've done so much. We've
saved lives.
6. .5
MOSES
Well at least slow down. Just
until this thing with the cops
dies down.
REBECCA
But we are helping people
MOSES
Shouts
And KILLING more.
Upset with how moses is reacting Rebecca decides to
leave. After Rebecca has left Moses sits in the same spot
for a couple of minutes, thinking of ways to undo his
wrong doings, he plans on stopping Rebecca.
A few days later, moses has finally written Rebecca’s
death. The day has finally come for his plan. Moses
decides to meet Rebecca at the park, each having their
own plan on stopping each other.
EXT. PARK - DAY (2:00PM)
Rebecca is sitting down on a swing while Moses walks
towards her. Sitting on the swing next to her Moses
starts to talk.
MOSES
Long time no see…
MOSES
Ive been thinking about what you
said and i think overreacted a
little.
REBECCA
‘A Little’ Are you kidding me!
REBECCA
You basically threw all the fun
that we had back in my face.
MOSES
Ok, I'm sorry if it seemed like
that but i was only trying to
protect us.
REBECCA
Really?
MOSES
Of course, like you said we were
having so much fun, i just didn't
want it to stop.
7. .6
After 30 minutes of speaking moses realises his plan is
finally staring to take effect.
Having second thoughts on going through with his plan he
tries to change the way it ends but theres nothing he can
do, everything he tries, something stops him.
Walking out of the park Rebecca and Moses are right next
to a main road. while walking down the street Moses
finally sees the end of his plan coming towards them.
Flashback: The audience gets to see Moses write Rebecca’s
name down and how she dies. “Hit by a truck while
crossing road”
Cuts back to present day. They reach a crossing. Moses
sees the truck coming towards them. Rebecca steps out
onto the crossing.
Moses tries to stop her
MOSES
Shouts
WAIT!
Moses reaches out for Rebecca, trying to stop her.
Just as the audience is about to see what happens the
screen cuts to black leaving the audience to speculate on
what happened to Rebecca and moses.
8. .i
SCENE INDEX
INT. SCHOOL HALL’S - DAY (12:30PM) 1......................
INT. ICT CLASSROOM - DAY (1:00PM) 1.......................
EXT. STREET - DAY (5:00PM) 2.............................
INT. MOSES HOUSE - NIGHT (8:00PM) 2.......................
INT. ICT CLASSROOM - DAY (1:00PM) 3.......................
INT. MOSES BEDROOM - NIGHT (7:00PM) 4.....................
INT. MOSES BEDROOM - NIGHT (9:30PM) 4.....................
EXT. PARK - DAY (2:00PM) 5................................
