Video peer edit and odw corrections

1. 30/9/15
el fin de septiembre…
el fin de “El Consumismo y el Trabajo
Infantil”

2. Yo Puedo….
Evaluate a project to give positive feedback explaining what
was best
Evaluate a project to explain something that could be
improved.
Choose the most effective PSA group
Make 5 grammatical corrections on my On Demand Writing
based on feedback from Sra.

3. La Evaluación
Yes Sort Of No
The video included all of the necessary information.
*visual images
*spanish text in video and audio
*discuss issues and consequences of child labor
*represent a solution
*connect consumerism and child labor
*time limit managed
I could understand everything they said.
The video was interesting to watch.
I could understand the suggested solution.

4. La Evaluación
One thing I really liked about the video was:
One suggestion I have for improvement is:

5. En Google Classroom
1. Join if you haven’t already - code is on the board!
2. Open the assignment named “PSA Viewing: Peer Edit”
3. Watch ALL the videos using the provided links
4. Complete the Peer Evaluation table for TWO of the videos (not your own)
5. Vote for the best video in the class and explain why
(you may NOT vote for your own video!)
6. Press ‘TURN IN’ when you have completed the assignment

6. Las Correcciones
Code Explanation Example
# Number- the pronoun and the
noun do not agree in number
#
El niños
wc Word choice: you used the
wrong word
^ Insert word; usually a
connecting word or pronoun
Me gusta jugar ^ Barbies.
Quiero ir a escuela.
Eng. English word ENG
Me gusta ir to los conciertos.

7. Code Explanation Example
sp The word was spelled
incorrectly.
sp
Juego los desportes.
s/v Subject and verb need
to agree.
s/v
Yo compra vestidos.
n Noun/adjective
agreement
n
La chica es guapo.
g Gender agreement g
El chica
wo Word order wo
americano niños
pos Possession: ‘s does not
exist
pos
Estudiante’s

8. Las Correcciones
• Hay que corregir 5 errores indicados en tu ensayo
“on demand writing”
• Puedes usar recursos: teléfonos, diccionarios,
vocabulario…
• Necesitas engrapar (staple) el papel de correcciones
con la rúbrica y pon los papeles en el cuaderno