1. INT . SHOPPING CENTRE - DAY
1. L.S A typical Saturday afternoon at a busy shopping
centre. he centre is filled with Saturday shoppers.
2. L.S We see the large glass automatic door.
3. C.U TWO MEN average height dressed in black with
balaclavas covering their face, are in shot stood with
their backs to the wall.
MAN ONE
Right, 'you ready?
MAN TWO
Yeah, come on let's just Go.
MAN ONE
Now?right you go first I'll
follow.
MAN TWO
Okay quick go, it's the first
shop on the left.
4. M.S The men sneak into the shopping centre creeping with
their backs to the wall.
INT. DRUG/HEALTH STORE
5. M.S Turning a corner they walk into the first shop, a
beauty and health/ drug store.
6. L.S Theyapproach the first aisle. Other shoppers notice
them, startled by their black clothing, and thuggish
appearance they scream.
7. C.U The men grab some items off the shelf.
MAN ONE
Yeah that one there grab it.
8. M.S Shot shows the robbers, they have gained the
attention of the shop workers. CAMERA PANS to
showeveryone is now scared and frozen around the shop.
Everybody is staring at them anticipating their next
move.
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2. MAN TWO
Right now let's get out of
here.
9. L.S Surrounded by scared and bemused shoppers and now
theSECURITY GUARD, A small slightly overweight man in his
late fifties. Wearing a typical security uniform with a
hat. Is braced and ready to attack the robbers. He has
his back to the camera.
MAN TWO
they've seen us, we're
surrounded!
MAN ONE
Quick that way goGO!
10. L.S They run out of the aisle and through the shop toward
the checkout,CAMERA TRACKS them.
11. L.S over the shoulder shot as the Security Guard is just
about to make a move.
12. M.sthe robbers stop running as they get to the check out
and casually walk to the 'queue here' sign.
13. L.S Of the shoppers and Security Guard as they fall
silent.
AUTOMATED VOICE
Cashier number three please.
14. M.C.U Over the shoulder shot of the Men who casually walk
through barriers in the queue and get to the checkout,
where a terrified and trembling YOUNG CASHIER a small girl
in her late teens, is stood.CAMERA PANS to show the Young
Cashier’s face.
15. M.S The baffled security guard approaches
SECURITY GUARD
Woahwoah What are you doing ?
16. C.U Of the Mans face.
MAN ONE
Oh, what this?
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3. 17. E.C.U Man One gestures to the tube he is holding in his
hand.
MAN ONE
Yeah..my acne has really been
playing up, I've been hiding
under this mask for days.
18. C.U He lifts up his balaclava to reveal a sheepish
teenage boy with acne, glasses and braces.
Fade out
Fade in
EXT. BUS STOP - DAY
1. L.S FOUR PEOPLE, Three men, young professionals, late
twenties, dressed in suits. And a middle aged woman
wearing a dress suit she is of small stature. Holding a
briefcase in front of her with both hands on the
handle.Stood at a bus stop waiting for the bus.
2. E.L.S In shot something is approaching in the distance,
it looks small and distant.
3. M.S CAMERA PANSFocusingback to the people at the bus
stop, they look bored with an exasperated expression.
4. M.C.U, A NEW CHARACTER, A young man dressed in jeans and
a Blue t-shirt. Smaller than the other men. Is on his
phone with ear phones in. He walks up and joins the
people at the bus stop, looking up to nod at the suited
business man to his left in acknowledgement.
5. E.L.S Now visible is the slowly approaching vehicle
coming closer, becoming visible and showing it is a small
mobility scooter driven by anELDERLY MAN, Wearing a tweed
jacket and flat cap, with rounded glasses, on a red
mobility scooter. As the scooter comes closer a quiet
humming noise becomes apparent.
6. C.U CAMERAPANSBack to the people still waiting at the bus
stop one of them checks their watch and sighs
impatiently.
7. E.L.S We now see the people at the bus stop from the
other side of the road shows the scooter comes into shot
from the left side. Approaching the people at the bus
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4. stop, who are also, with the same bored emotionless
expression on their faces.
8. L.S Side angled shot with the only the only thing visible
the people at the bus stop. A few seconds into the
shotthey are splashed with an over exaggerated wave,
looking shocked they stand there soaked.
9. L.S Over shoulder shot. Finally we see the elderly man
carries on driving unfased with a small smirk on his
face.
Fade out
Fade in
INT. SUPERMARKET - DAY
1. L.S A supermarket checkout, A MALE SHOPPER An average
height man late forties, with greying hair, he is wearing
jeans and a t-shirt approaches toward the camera with a
basket full of shopping, puts his basket down on the
self-service and starts to scan his items.
2. M.S An over the shoulder shot of the self-service screen.
AUTOMATED VOICE
Welcome, do you have your own
bags?
3. C.U Side shot as the male shopper taps no on the screen,
the voice on the machine sighs.
4. M.S An over the shoulder shot of the self-service screen.
AUTOMATED VOICE
Ugh, one of them are we?
5. M.S of the male shopper’s face who is baffled, but shrugs
off the comment and scans his first item.
6. M.S An over the shoulder shot of the self-service screen.
AUTOMATED VOICE
Come on hurry up I have places
to be.
Ha low fat yogurt, who are you
trying to kid.
Cheesecake, more like it.
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5. Ahhhh so that's where all the
pies went.
7. L.S The male shopper looks around to see if anybody else
has noticed the insults,CAMERA PANS he calls over one of
the shop assistants.
MALE SHOPPER
Excuse me I think there's
something wrong with the
machine, it keeps
errm..insulting me.
8. M.S TheFEMALE SHOP ASSISTANT, A small middle aged woman,
wearing typical supermarket uniform, very curly hair and
round glasses. Looks at him patronisingly and sighs.
FEMALE SHOP ASSISTANT
Erm okay sir, no I don't think
there's anything wrong, there
you go that should be fine.
9. C.U TheFemale Shop Assistant press's several buttons on
the screen, CAMERA PANS as she walks away.
10. M.S Side Shot as the man continues to scan his shopping.
11.M.S An over the shoulder shot of the self-service screen.
AUTOMATED VOICE
Haha nice try mate.
MALE SHOPPER
SHUT UP.
12.L.S People look over to the Male Shopper who appears to
be screaming to himself and everyone gives him a bemused
look and whispers to each other.
13. M.S Side Shot of Male Shopper.
MALE SHOPPER
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6. RIGHT.
14. M.S The Male Shopper walks out of shot and reappears with
a chainsaw, pulls goggles over his head and saws the
machine in half, and walks away unfazed.
AUTOMATED VOICE
Ooohhh someone's touchy.
Fade out.