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Jade Smith 
Harold Blanco 
First Year Seminar 
17 September 2014 
Professional College Athletes 
In Michael Dobie’s editorial, “A rim-rattling ruling in college sports; Athletes aren’t 
blind to the billions they earn for the NCAA. Change is coming…” he right off the bat starts 
talking about sports drama. He shares information about the National Labor Relations Board, 
which is an independent federal agency that protects the rights of private sector employees to 
join together, with or without a union, to improve their wages and working conditions (“Who We 
Are”). He states that the NLRB ruled football players at Northwester University as employees of 
the school. As employees of the school it gives players the ability to form a union and engage in 
collective bargaining. Dobie continues on talking about the NCAA being sued for not protecting 
athletes from head injuries, gives players money for schooling but not compensation. The NCAA 
goes against their word by calling collegiate athletes student-athletes. The NLRB refuses to side 
with the NCAA. They believe that the NCAA is going against their word on most things and that 
students are spending too much time on sports to be considered a student-athlete. They will 
expect a fight from the NCAA to stop the ruling that collegiate athletes are no longer student 
athletes, but employees (Dobie n. pag).
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Gary Klein wrote my first source, he works for the Los Angeles Times. He mostly covers 
USC’s athletics, mainly the football program. He began working for The Times in the San 
Fernando Valley edition and has reported on high school, college and pro sports (La Times). The 
article was published on March 27th, 2014. While reading, you can infer the article did not have 
any bias or opinion in it. Seeing as how the author works for a company and only writes about 
sports he is more credible then someone who knows nothing about sports writing it. You can find 
quote after quote in his article from people directly involved in the situation, which is a good 
way for the reader to connect to both sides of the issue. 
In Filip Bondy’s “Paying players should not be name of game” you can tell from the get 
go that there is some sort of bias. He is already saying what he thinks about the issue. Bondy 
works as a columnist at the Daily News (New York), he has published eight nonfiction books 
about sports, and is a journalism professor (Monclair State University). His background 
information about writing sports books shows that he is most likely credible when it comes to the 
topic of sports. I found out my information about Bondy on a website ending in .edu therefore 
his bio is credible. The article written was published on March 27th, 2014. Although he writes 
the whole article sharing what he thinks about the situation, he backs his opinion with facts that 
make readers more easily persuaded towards his point of view. 
My other source, also against college athlete being employees, is credible. It is a 
scholarly source written by Dick Weiss. Weiss is a sportswriter/columnist and works with the 
Big10 and Blue Star Media (“Dick Weiss”). Having worked in sports for so long this makes him 
more knowledgeable about the topic from the start. He does share his opinion and instead of 
disagreeing he is pushing more towards the fact that athletes should be able to be paid for what 
they do and able to form unions. He feels there is no equality in the differences between revenue
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that coaches get coming from a sports bowl and players not getting anything. He ends his article 
with his final thought that, “Paying the players a fair wage might be a way to keep everyone 
honest and keep kids away from the agents and runner who have infested campuses across the 
country” (Weiss n. pag.). 
Michael Dobie’s article was well rounded. I felt like it gave all of the information it 
needed and left people with a clear thought on the topic. Not necessarily having the reader with a 
dead set opinion on whether or not they agree but just that they knew all that they should from 
reading the article. 
Credibility is the most important thing when reading something you need to be more 
informed about. What good does it do if you are reading something about supporting the church 
written by an atheist? It would most likely be much different then if a religious person were 
writing something about supporting the church. Credibility is a key role because it contributes to 
the significance of a person and keeps people from questioning a persons principles and 
qualities. For someone who does not have credibility in what they are writing about would make 
them seem like a liar, which would steer people in the other direction for any of their work. It is 
easy to communicate misinformation by filling the air with repetitive thoughts. That would come 
off as not knowing the information well enough so they need to dance around the topic. You 
would seem much less credible if you have multiple contradictory statements about your topic. 
Misinformation is fueled because authors might not have the credibility they need to be fully 
aware of what they are writing about. 
If you want to prevent the spread of misinformation you can do so by building 
credibility. You can build credibility by developing expertise in whatever you decide on. It 
would be most helpful to stick with one thing and study and form knowledge on that so when
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you do end up writing something about it you will be the most informed and readers will trust the 
information you are giving them more than information from someone else. 
I found useful information in all of my sources because they were all credible. All of the 
authors had a great deal of background information on sports. They all used facts or quotes, 
which made their article credible because it was coming from people who were directly involved 
in the situation. Even though a few used their opinion they fueled their opinion with facts which 
made the reader still have a clear understanding of what was going on.
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Works Cited 
Bondy, Filip. "Paying players should not be name of game." New York's Hometown Newspaper 
27 Mar. 2014: n. pag. Print. 
"Dick Weiss." Linkedin. N.p., n.d. Web. 16 Sept. 2014. 
<http://www.linkedin.com/in/dickweiss>. 
Dobie, Michael. "A rim-rattling ruling in college sports; Athletes aren't blind to the billions they 
earn for the NCAA. Change is coming..." Newsday [New York] 30 Mar. 2014: n. pag. 
Print. 
"Gary Klein." LA Times. N.p., n.d. Web. 16 Sept. 2014. <http://www.latimes.com/la-bio-gary 
klein-staff.html>. 
Klein, Gary. "Board says college players can unionize; Football players at Northwestern win 
NLRB ruling. It could lead to vast changes." Los Angeles Times 27 Mar. 2014: n. pag. 
Print. 
Montclair State University. N.p., n.d. Web. 16 Sept. 2014. 
<http://www.montclair.edu/profilepages/view_profile.php?username=bondyf>. 
Weiss, Dick. "SHOW THEM THE MONEY." New York's Hometown Newspaper 1 July 2012: 
n. pag. Print. 
"Who We Are." National Labor Relations Board. N.p., n.d. Web. 16 Sept. 2014. 
<http://www.nlrb.gov/who-we-are>.

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Jade smith

  • 1. Smith 1 Jade Smith Harold Blanco First Year Seminar 17 September 2014 Professional College Athletes In Michael Dobie’s editorial, “A rim-rattling ruling in college sports; Athletes aren’t blind to the billions they earn for the NCAA. Change is coming…” he right off the bat starts talking about sports drama. He shares information about the National Labor Relations Board, which is an independent federal agency that protects the rights of private sector employees to join together, with or without a union, to improve their wages and working conditions (“Who We Are”). He states that the NLRB ruled football players at Northwester University as employees of the school. As employees of the school it gives players the ability to form a union and engage in collective bargaining. Dobie continues on talking about the NCAA being sued for not protecting athletes from head injuries, gives players money for schooling but not compensation. The NCAA goes against their word by calling collegiate athletes student-athletes. The NLRB refuses to side with the NCAA. They believe that the NCAA is going against their word on most things and that students are spending too much time on sports to be considered a student-athlete. They will expect a fight from the NCAA to stop the ruling that collegiate athletes are no longer student athletes, but employees (Dobie n. pag).
  • 2. Smith 2 Gary Klein wrote my first source, he works for the Los Angeles Times. He mostly covers USC’s athletics, mainly the football program. He began working for The Times in the San Fernando Valley edition and has reported on high school, college and pro sports (La Times). The article was published on March 27th, 2014. While reading, you can infer the article did not have any bias or opinion in it. Seeing as how the author works for a company and only writes about sports he is more credible then someone who knows nothing about sports writing it. You can find quote after quote in his article from people directly involved in the situation, which is a good way for the reader to connect to both sides of the issue. In Filip Bondy’s “Paying players should not be name of game” you can tell from the get go that there is some sort of bias. He is already saying what he thinks about the issue. Bondy works as a columnist at the Daily News (New York), he has published eight nonfiction books about sports, and is a journalism professor (Monclair State University). His background information about writing sports books shows that he is most likely credible when it comes to the topic of sports. I found out my information about Bondy on a website ending in .edu therefore his bio is credible. The article written was published on March 27th, 2014. Although he writes the whole article sharing what he thinks about the situation, he backs his opinion with facts that make readers more easily persuaded towards his point of view. My other source, also against college athlete being employees, is credible. It is a scholarly source written by Dick Weiss. Weiss is a sportswriter/columnist and works with the Big10 and Blue Star Media (“Dick Weiss”). Having worked in sports for so long this makes him more knowledgeable about the topic from the start. He does share his opinion and instead of disagreeing he is pushing more towards the fact that athletes should be able to be paid for what they do and able to form unions. He feels there is no equality in the differences between revenue
  • 3. Smith 3 that coaches get coming from a sports bowl and players not getting anything. He ends his article with his final thought that, “Paying the players a fair wage might be a way to keep everyone honest and keep kids away from the agents and runner who have infested campuses across the country” (Weiss n. pag.). Michael Dobie’s article was well rounded. I felt like it gave all of the information it needed and left people with a clear thought on the topic. Not necessarily having the reader with a dead set opinion on whether or not they agree but just that they knew all that they should from reading the article. Credibility is the most important thing when reading something you need to be more informed about. What good does it do if you are reading something about supporting the church written by an atheist? It would most likely be much different then if a religious person were writing something about supporting the church. Credibility is a key role because it contributes to the significance of a person and keeps people from questioning a persons principles and qualities. For someone who does not have credibility in what they are writing about would make them seem like a liar, which would steer people in the other direction for any of their work. It is easy to communicate misinformation by filling the air with repetitive thoughts. That would come off as not knowing the information well enough so they need to dance around the topic. You would seem much less credible if you have multiple contradictory statements about your topic. Misinformation is fueled because authors might not have the credibility they need to be fully aware of what they are writing about. If you want to prevent the spread of misinformation you can do so by building credibility. You can build credibility by developing expertise in whatever you decide on. It would be most helpful to stick with one thing and study and form knowledge on that so when
  • 4. Smith 4 you do end up writing something about it you will be the most informed and readers will trust the information you are giving them more than information from someone else. I found useful information in all of my sources because they were all credible. All of the authors had a great deal of background information on sports. They all used facts or quotes, which made their article credible because it was coming from people who were directly involved in the situation. Even though a few used their opinion they fueled their opinion with facts which made the reader still have a clear understanding of what was going on.
  • 5. Smith 5 Works Cited Bondy, Filip. "Paying players should not be name of game." New York's Hometown Newspaper 27 Mar. 2014: n. pag. Print. "Dick Weiss." Linkedin. N.p., n.d. Web. 16 Sept. 2014. <http://www.linkedin.com/in/dickweiss>. Dobie, Michael. "A rim-rattling ruling in college sports; Athletes aren't blind to the billions they earn for the NCAA. Change is coming..." Newsday [New York] 30 Mar. 2014: n. pag. Print. "Gary Klein." LA Times. N.p., n.d. Web. 16 Sept. 2014. <http://www.latimes.com/la-bio-gary klein-staff.html>. Klein, Gary. "Board says college players can unionize; Football players at Northwestern win NLRB ruling. It could lead to vast changes." Los Angeles Times 27 Mar. 2014: n. pag. Print. Montclair State University. N.p., n.d. Web. 16 Sept. 2014. <http://www.montclair.edu/profilepages/view_profile.php?username=bondyf>. Weiss, Dick. "SHOW THEM THE MONEY." New York's Hometown Newspaper 1 July 2012: n. pag. Print. "Who We Are." National Labor Relations Board. N.p., n.d. Web. 16 Sept. 2014. <http://www.nlrb.gov/who-we-are>.