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Scientific Writing
Task 3
Comments on "the Use of Immersive Virtual Reality
In the Learning Sciences :
Digital Transformations of Teachers, Students,
and Social Context"
By Andini Indyanita
Structure
• The structure is clear and well classified.
• Every section contains the right-placed content.
Clarity
• The title is clear. It is explaining the summary of
the article.
• The sentences used is not difficult to read.
Content
• The subject and purpose is clearly stated.
• The research conducted is well presented.
Understanding
• Content and structure of this article is easy to
read and understand.

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Scientific Writing Task 3