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压力!自杀?求助?解脱?
你面对非常大的压力时,你会怎么做呢?
根据以下一则新闻的开头,写出你的看法。




越来越多青少年因为无法面对挫折
与压力,因此选择结束自己的生命。
写作大纲

引
    越来越多青少年因为无法面对挫折与压力,因
    此选择结束自己的生命。

言   读了这则新闻后,我感触良多。这些年轻人选
    择结束自己宝贵的生命,令人感到十分担忧。
立
场
    他们没有办法勇敢面对挫折与压力,但是生命
    发肤受之父母,怎么能够以轻生来解决问题
    呢?
消息的来源

新   打扮时尚,注重物质享受

闻   自尊心强,无法接受批
背   评,无法承受压力。
景   自杀、自残事件屡屡发生
写作大纲:为什么 会出现这个问题/现象?


分   家长过份溺爱孩子

析
    家长只注重学业
原
因   学校忽略品格塑造
写作大纲
    不利于青少年的成长:

产   不能形成健康的心态

    不能提高综合素质
生   增加家长的心理负担:
    容易导致自残、自杀事件的发生

的   子女对父母过度的依赖

影   父母为子女的未来担心
    “草莓族”无法承担国家重任
响
写作大纲:怎么做?

解   家长给予孩子正面的教育

决   学校给孩子合理的锻炼

方   媒体加强励志类的报道
法
    个人加强自身修养
写作大纲

    青少年是国家的未来和希望
总
结
    希望他们能够脱离“草莓族”,
    能够以坚毅刚强的性格迎接挑
    战

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