The document discusses corrections needed for a documentary interview with Danny Biggs. It finds issues with the sound quality, lighting, and Danny's interview skills. To improve the interview, the document proposes finding a new interview subject, and adding supplemental montage footage of related topics to the interview for context. It outlines the locations, permissions, and paperwork needed to film the proposed replacement montage footage.

1. Progress
Report
Short Film

2. Corrections to Danny Biggs
Interview…
When we came to analysing the corrections needed to
improve our documentary, we were focused on developing
Danny Biggs’ interview for many reasons. These include;
• Sound – To listen to the interview, Danny is quiet and sounds
slightly unenthusiastic.
• The angles of the interview do not work.
• The lighting in the multicam is not consistent, being darker
with more shadows in one angle.
• Subject issue- Danny’s response varied and he didn’t have
good interview techniques such as eye contact and
posture.

3. What are we going to do?
To improve Danny’s interview we will find a new personal trainer.
We will need to add montage shots of the topics that the PT talks
about throughout the interview with sound motifs of what the PT is
saying, such as the reason for people going to classes.
Our montage footage will include;
• Girls walking into a gym laughing and talking to highlight social
aspect of going to the gym/bootcamp classes.
• Unpacking of a sports bag in a changing room.
• Putting on trainers and tying shoe laces- preparation to exercise.

4. Locations needed for
Montage Footage…
 Ratcliffe College;
 Sports Hall entrance
 Fitness Suite
 Changing Room

5. The Next Step…
 Contact Models and Head of Sport for
permission.
 Model Release Forms for actors.
 Location Release Forms for gym and sports hall
entrance.
 Risk Assessment for Gym.
 Storyboard of montage footage to enable
timing with Danny’s interview answers.
 Find a new Personal Trainer/Fitness Instructor