The document discusses feedback received on a student's music video project. It provides survey results showing that most viewers correctly identified the genre as indie/rock, found the performance and narrative clear, and thought the video met conventions of a real indie music video. However, some felt the performance could be improved and a minority did not find the video interesting. Most respondents said the fictional band would appeal to them and rated the overall performance as good or very good. The majority also said they would like the video if they saw it on a music channel and preferred the narrative aspects.

1. Music Video
Whilst conducting this project when editing I
had asked from numerous feedback from
students and teachers along the way we had
gotten feedback from teachers and students to
watch our music video to see if there is
corrections that we still need to make during
this, we did receive some constructive criticism
about the performances that the pace of the
editing was to slow for the parts of the music
video and that the lip-sync was a bit off , So
when we realised that we didn't have enough
shots in the scenes to work with, so we had
gone to re-shoot some other scenes so when
editing we had worked with a more variety of
shots this enabled us to have a diverse
range, so when finishing all this we had
uploaded on social media site such as Twitter
we had got various feedback from different
audience, we had received positive feedback
from this.

2. Digipack
When conducting my Digipack I had performed a step by step tutorial of the individual
sides and how it would look so when doing this I had gain constructive criticism of
what are the good points and what could I do better when conducting this. When
gaining the feedback I would go back and make the alterations needed and see what
suited my theme and concept once doing these things for example when gaining
feedback one of the problems I had was the type of software I had used where I
originally used in fireworks where my peers had told me that this didn't have a
professional look about it, so when changing it to Photoshop this gave me a more
professional look to my digipack where I had edited pictures together dropping the
shadow levels contrasting the pictures to give it a rougher edge broadening the artist
appearance. Also on my inside covers where I had created post cards with signatures of
each individual band member this gave it that innovative look so when getting
feedback on this I had gained good constructive advice for being unique and
unconventional to genre I had studied, for the inside cover to of the CD placement I
had the image of the band then was advised to play around with the image
manipulating it by contrasting and putting a stamp effect in the background when
doing this, my peers had given me advice that they did not know the concept of what
will fill the background and still did not look effective, so I had put the original picture
of the band in the background and received good comments on it.

3. On the back I had put a similar effect on the picture which I was advised by my peers to
follow the continuity throughout the Digipack, where I had put a picture of the band and
because they had liked it in its original format I Slightly dropped the contrast on the
background to make the artists stand out more also the lyrics which were in red stood out
much more because of this.
Once Finishing my product I had asked many people of my target audience what they
thought about it and gathered their constructive criticism of what could be improved and
their general thoughts this would allow me to know if I had met the general conventions if
the Indie/Rock Digipack and their reaction which would allow me to know if it would sell
in shops.
I have also received feedback of my initial designs which I wanted on my Digipack
Feedback
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1)After pop jazz R&B Indie/Rock
watching our
music
video, what
genre do you
think it was?
Here we had surveyed results of an questionnaire where we had asked a group of
people what they had thought of my music video after watching. So based on these
results I had received I know that most that most people understood the genre I had
portrayed this shows me that my music video gave a clear understanding to the
audience which had viewed it.

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my music video
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2) When watching Yes No conventions of
this music video do an real Indie
you think the music video?
performance and
narrative was clear?
Based on graph1 I can see that a everyone understood the narrative and
performance so the message I had portrayed through this video was clearly
conveyed to the audience as they had understood the performance and narrative
and based on graph 2 about 10% thought we didn't meet the conventions of music
videos to this genre however 90% still thought that we had met the genre of this
genre which still gave me a overall look that I have received a positive feedback that I
have met the criteria of this genre that if I was to improve the project I would take
this into consideration that I will try lower the percentage of people that I not met
my criteria.

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4)Do you think Yes No improved in
the music our music
video was video?
interesting?
Based on graph1 it shows a variation of what people thought of my music video that
over 30%didnt find the video interesting and 70% did because of the large amount of
qualitative results we had collected because we have collected a large sample size this
would make my results reliable that my music video would not appeal to a certain
target audience because this survey was segmented to a wide variety of group. Graph 2
shows us that the performance could have been improved but a majority of people
liked the narrative which implied to me that the audience found the narrative
interesting.

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a real band?
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you think of
the
performance
throughout
the video?
Graph 1 shows that the band would appeal to a majority of people however there is still
people which think that this would not appeal specifically to them, however in graph 2
shows that a majority of people liked my music video which implies that music video
appealed to them and that they enjoyed watching this.

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9) If you saw this Yes No
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8) were you Yes No channel would
pleased with the you like it?
overall music
video when
watching it?
Based on this evidence from graph1 I can see that everyone is pleased with the music
this is positive feedback as I know that people were pleasure that it looks like a real life
music video and that it met the consumer needs when watching this that it met their
preference that they enjoyed the video. However in graph 2 it shows me that a majority
of people would like it on a music video about 90% and 10% didn’t so this still shows
me that a variety of people will watch my music video and watch it.

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aspects of the
music video did
you like?
Based on these results judging from this graph that a majority of people liked different
aspects of the music video, but mainly the narrative part even though that this is an
indie video most of it was portrayed through the narrative snippets and this was
understood clearly by the audience and they have clearly liked it based on the feedback I
have received.