1. Iconic Entertainment Practice Film Pitch Feedback
By the feedback I have
here over half the class felt
i communicated and
delivered my pitch clearly.
This feedback contradicts
other answers throughout
the rest of the questions.
I feel my pitch obviously
wasn’t very professional
and enthusiastic judging by
the feedback the audience
gave.
As most of the class gave me a poor
feedback score on how exciting my
idea was I feel I may have to change
the script completely in order to
gain more of a positive audience.
I feel I should definitely improve the
quality of my deliverance as over
half of the class thought that I
should speak to them more directly.

2. Shown clearly here the majority of
the class were not very enthusiastic
about my film idea. With over 45%
which is nearly half the class giving
me a score of 1 I feel that I need to
drastically improve the quality and
depth of the idea.
The things the class thought I was
best at in the pitch was that I was
confident to answer questions,
had clear and precise verbal
delivery and also the originality of
my idea impressed them. The
things I need to work on are
visual quality, confident body
language and verbal delivery.
The areas the class thought I could
improve were answering questions
more confidently, speaking more
clearly, more open and relaxed body
language and to devise a more
original idea.