1. Feedback of Rough Cut
Needs Institutional logo and production logo at the
beginning.
Sort out the crazy letterbox movement.
Consider improving the lack of dialogue between
0:32 – 0:45 and remove the wind noise.
Keep the good match on action editing, but try to
speed up the sequence, as it takes a full minute to
get in the cemetery, and 1:11 before the antagonist
appears.
Also you need to include score throughout the
sequence.
When Ben runs from the antagonist, you need to do
a fine on the second dip.
Sound associated with antagonist.
Reduce the length of the running scene and
consider adding a variety of shot length.
Wind noise needs removing throughout.
Darken the clip or add tone to shot to add/alter the
mood.
Include titles.