In an ideal world, the author envisions people who can change the way others think and change the world. There would be people who make you feel good. However, for there to be true peace, people must act with humility and compassion. The story is presented as a writing project from a literature club at a language school. It prompts the reader to grade and provide feedback on the short story.

1. In my ideal
world...

2. ... There are people
who change the way
you think...

3. ... There are people who change the
world...

4. ... There are people who make you
feel good...

5. ... But there will not be peace in our
world if we do not start acting with
a humble heart.

6. THE END
Author: Moises Santigo Cardoso da S.
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura
Illustrator: Zuzol
Publisher: www.storybird.com
Period: II Semester - Summer 2014
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

7. Page line Where it says... It should have said...
BE THE EDITOR
How would you grade this story from 10 to 100? - Grade: ( ) Why?
What did you think about this story? Did you like it? Why?
SUGESTIONS TO IMPROVE THE STORY...