Don notices a hologram of Lona has been projected onto his shoulder from her remote location. They discuss upgrading the technology in his suit and glasses. Don picks a playing card at Lona's request to have it materialized as a hologram. When he sees a strange face at the train cabin door, Lona tries to reassure him that they make a good team. Don's brother Gonzara then enters the cabin.

1. scene 4

2. Scene
1
Panel
1
Action Notes
DON notices Kat outside the window
Notes
bg moving outside the window
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3. Scene
1
Panel
2
Action Notes
DON notices Kat outside the window
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4. Scene
1
Panel
3
Dialog
LONA (O.S.): Don?
Action Notes
DON notices Kat outside the window
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5. Scene
1
Panel
4
Dialog
LONA (O.S.): Don?
Action Notes
Don jumps in surprise
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6. Scene
1
Panel
5
Action Notes
Don looks into the train cabin.
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7. Scene
1
Panel
6
Action Notes
Don looks into the train cabin.
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8. Scene
1
Panel
7
Dialog
DON: Lona?
Action Notes
Don Prods the speaker in his ear
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9. Scene
1
Panel
8
Dialog
LONA (O.S.): Why are you staring at the ceiling, doofus?
Action Notes
Don looks surprised
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10. Scene
1
Panel
9
Action Notes
Don looks up
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11. Scene
2
Panel
1
Action Notes
Don staring at the ceiling.
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12. Scene
2
Panel
2
Action Notes
Eyes widen as he realizes what Lona ment.
scene 4 Page 11/194

13. Scene
2
Panel
3
Action Notes
Grabs his glasses as he looks forward
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14. Scene
2
Panel
4
Action Notes
Pushes his glasses down
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15. Scene
3
Panel
1
Action Notes
Puts his glasses over his eyes
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16. Scene
3
Panel
2
Notes
You can see the screens popping up in the glasses and doing things
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17. Scene
3
Panel
3
Action Notes
A grid takes over the environment, filling things out
scene 4 Page 16/194

18. Scene
3
Panel
4
Action Notes
A grid takes over the environment, filling things out
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19. Scene
3
Panel
5
Action Notes
A grid takes over the environment, filling things out
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20. Scene
3_A
Panel
1
Action Notes
View from Don's glasses/his perspective, the windows scrolling with info and loading things in.
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21. Scene
3_A
Panel
2
Action Notes
Cabin is clean and neat, things on screens are done loading.
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22. Scene
3_B
Panel
1
Dialog
LONA (O.S): Alright-- Syncing--
Action Notes
Don might say something else here?
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23. Scene
4
Panel
1
Dialog
LONA: Sorry, one sec.
Action Notes
Lona is typing into her hologram keyboard
scene 4 Page 22/194

24. Scene
4
Panel
2
Dialog
LONA: There's more technology in your suit and glasses than a Hatari 3310...
Action Notes
Lona is typing into her hologram keyboard
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25. Scene
5
Panel
1
Dialog
DON (V.O): A what?
Action Notes
Lona grabs for a drink
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26. Scene
5
Panel
2
Dialog
DON (V.O): A what?
Action Notes
brings drink up
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27. Scene
5
Panel
3
Dialog
DON (V.O): A what?
Action Notes
about to take a sip, as the hologram changes
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28. Scene
5
Panel
4
Action Notes
Hologram is now a cube
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29. Scene
5
Panel
5
Dialog
LONA: A vintage mocap outfit. Gears, liquid, cooling. My third favorite antique.
Action Notes
Doesn't take a drink, and starts to swipe around at the cube, looking for something and touching a few things as she talks.
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30. Scene
5
Panel
6
Dialog
DON (V.O): You're the biggest geek of all time.
Action Notes
She found what she needed and tapped it
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31. Scene
5
Panel
7
Dialog
DON (V.O): You're the biggest geek of all time.
Action Notes
The cube changes into a screen with a 3D wire model of herself that's spinning around.
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32. Scene
5
Panel
8
Dialog
LONA: And proud of it!
Action Notes
Lona leans back.
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33. Scene
5
Panel
9
Dialog
LONA: Here we go, rendering--
Action Notes
She hits a button, the 3D wire model starts to fill up as the "SENDING" bar is loading.
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34. Scene
6
Panel
1
Action Notes
In relation to the wire frame the pixels are filling in a hologram of Lona on Don's shoulder.
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35. Scene
6
Panel
2
Action Notes
Lona hologram pops into existence.
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36. Scene
6
Panel
3
Action Notes
Don goes to poke her
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37. Scene
6
Panel
4
Dialog
LONA: Oi! I will bite you.
Action Notes
She pushes his finger away
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38. Scene
6
Panel
5
Action Notes
Don pokes her regardless
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39. Scene
6
Panel
6
Dialog
DON: Ow!
Action Notes
She bites his finger, giving off a very tiny electric shock
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40. Scene
7
Panel
1
Dialog
DON: That hurt,
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41. Scene
7
Panel
2
Dialog
DON: kinda. A very mild nip.
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42. Scene
7
Panel
3
Dialog
DON: You're a true delight, Lona.
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43. Scene
7
Panel
4
Dialog
Lona: Warned ya.
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44. Scene
7
Panel
5
Dialog
LONA: C'mon, let's do a card check. Pick one!
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45. Scene
7
Panel
6
Notes
Don may say something extra here for flavor?
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46. Scene
7
Panel
7
Notes
Don may say something extra here for flavor?
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47. Scene
7
Panel
8
Action Notes
Gets up from the chair, digging in his side bag.
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48. Scene
7
Panel
9
Action Notes
Brings out a deck of cards
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49. Scene
7
Panel
10
Action Notes
Flips up one card.
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50. Scene
8
Panel
1
Action Notes
Shuffling through cards, pulling off the top card to see what it is.
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51. Scene
8
Panel
2
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52. Scene
8
Panel
3
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53. Scene
8
Panel
4
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54. Scene
8
Panel
5
Action Notes
Stops on the club.
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55. Scene
9
Panel
1
Action Notes
Puts the rest of the deck away and grabs his hilt.
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56. Scene
9
Panel
2
Action Notes
Brings it out
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57. Scene
9
Panel
3
Action Notes
Puts card into the hilt slot
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58. Scene
9
Panel
4
Action Notes
Pixels start to fill the space of the club
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59. Scene
9
Panel
5
Action Notes
Club appears
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60. Scene
9
Panel
6
Action Notes
weighs him down a bit
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61. Scene
9
Panel
7
Action Notes
Grabs his glasses
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62. Scene
9
Panel
8
Action Notes
Lifts them up to reveal the shitty environment again, and the club and Lona glitch out.
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63. Scene
9
Panel
9
Action Notes
Lifts them up to reveal the shitty environment again, and the club and Lona glitch out.
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64. Scene
9
Panel
10
Action Notes
Puts the glasses back on and things pop back into place.
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65. Scene
10
Panel
1
Action Notes
Feeling the hologram. Lona is messing with a cube on his shoulder
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66. Scene
10
Panel
2
Action Notes
He hears a sound at the door and glances over
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67. Scene
10
Panel
3
Action Notes
It grabs his full attention
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68. Scene
11
Panel
1
Action Notes
Red Hairy face is staring through the door's window
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69. Scene
12
Panel
1
Action Notes
Clearly shaken and surprised by what he sees
scene 4 Page 68/194

70. Scene
12
Panel
2
Dialog
LONA: So--
Action Notes
This distracts Don and he looks at Lona.
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71. Scene
12
Panel
3
Dialog
LONA: You and me.
Action Notes
He blinks
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72. Scene
12
Panel
4
Dialog
LONA: Best team,
Action Notes
He looks back at the door
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73. Scene
12
Panel
5
Dialog
LONA: right?
Action Notes
He's surprised
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74. Scene
11_A
Panel
1
Dialog
LONA: We can do this?
Action Notes
The door window is empty again.
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75. Scene
12_A
Panel
1
Action Notes
Don looks confused. Doesn't seem like he thinks much about it.
scene 4 Page 74/194

76. Scene
12_A
Panel
2
Dialog
DON: I'll try not to get
Action Notes
He seems to shrug it off and focus on Lona instead
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77. Scene
12_A
Panel
3
Dialog
DON: violently killed.
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78. Scene
12_B
Panel
1
Action Notes
Lona sighs, looks away anxious.
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79. Scene
12_B
Panel
2
Action Notes
Don smiles reassuringly.
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80. Scene
12_C
Panel
1
Action Notes
Lona looking worried
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81. Scene
12_C
Panel
2
Action Notes
Don's hand enters frame, inviting her to hop on.
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82. Scene
12_C
Panel
3
Action Notes
She takes the invitation
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83. Scene
12_C
Panel
4
Action Notes
She hops into his hand
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84. Scene
12_C
Panel
5
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85. Scene
12_C
Panel
6
Action Notes
He brings her up to his face
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86. Scene
12_C
Panel
7
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87. Scene
12_C
Panel
8
Dialog
DON: What are you sulking for? You've worked really hard for this.
Action Notes
She turns to look at him
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88. Scene
12_C
Panel
9
Dialog
DON: I know we're going to win - because I have you with me. We're fine.
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89. Scene
12_C
Panel
10
Dialog
LONA: I hope so, Don. We could really use those shinies...
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90. Scene
12_D
Panel
1
Dialog
DON: It is in the bag.
Action Notes
He literally reaches into his bag.
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91. Scene
12_D
Panel
2
Dialog
DON: It is in the bag.
Action Notes
Digging thru his bag
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92. Scene
12_D
Panel
3
Action Notes
Pulls out an apple from his bag.
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93. Scene
12_E
Panel
1
Action Notes
Camera focuses on the apple and follows it up to Don's face.
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94. Scene
12_E
Panel
2
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95. Scene
12_E
Panel
3
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96. Scene
12_E
Panel
4
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97. Scene
12_E
Panel
5
Action Notes
Don goes to bite into it but
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98. Scene
12_E
Panel
6
Action Notes
the door slides open
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99. Scene
12_E
Panel
7
Action Notes
He looks over to see his brother enter
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100. Scene
12_F
Panel
1
Action Notes
Gonzaras boots step in
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101. Scene
12_F
Panel
2
Action Notes
Slow camera movement up, he's adjusting his glove
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102. Scene
12_F
Panel
3
Action Notes
The camera finishes moving up after he settles into the door frame.
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103. Scene
12_G
Panel
1
Action Notes
Don stares him down
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104. Scene
12_G
Panel
2
Dialog
DON: Pff---
Action Notes
He's holding back a laugh.
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105. Scene
12_G
Panel
3
Action Notes
He raises a finger to point at Gonzara
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106. Scene
12_H
Panel
1
Dialog
GONZARA: Go ahead. I dare you to laugh.
Action Notes
He sneers at Don.
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107. Scene
12_I
Panel
1
Dialog
DON: Nice eyepatch.
Action Notes
He's laughing a bit, he leans into this pose and points at Gonzara.
scene 4 Page 106/194

108. Scene
12_I
Panel
2
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109. Scene
12_H_1
Panel
1
Action Notes
Gonzara looks disgruntled.
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110. Scene
12_H_1
Panel
2
Action Notes
He rolls his eyes and moves forward (next few panels)
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111. Scene
12_H_1
Panel
3
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112. Scene
12_H_1
Panel
4
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113. Scene
12_H_1
Panel
5
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114. Scene
12_H_1
Panel
6
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115. Scene
12_H_2
Panel
1
Action Notes
Don giggles to himself
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116. Scene
12_H_2
Panel
2
Action Notes
Gonzara grabs Don's wrist with the Wrist Band on it
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117. Scene
12_H_2
Panel
3
Action Notes
Pulls his arm, forcing him to change his pose.
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118. Scene
12_H_3
Panel
1
Dialog
GONZARA: THIS --
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119. Scene
12_H_3
Panel
2
Dialog
GONZARA: is not needed whatsoever.
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120. Scene
12_H_3
Panel
3
Dialog
DON: You know what?
Action Notes
Don rips his arm away from Gonzara.
scene 4 Page 119/194

121. Scene
12_H_4
Panel
1
Dialog
DON: That's none of your business. The only reason I'm doing this is to win --
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122. Scene
12_H_4
Panel
2
Dialog
DON: get my face out there. Maybe she'll see...
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123. Scene
12_H_4
Panel
3
Dialog
DON: and come home...
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124. Scene
12_H_4
Panel
4
Action Notes
he has a pause for a second
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125. Scene
12_H_4
Panel
5
Action Notes
before going to bite the apple
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126. Scene
12_H_4
Panel
6
Action Notes
Gonzara grabs the apple
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127. Scene
12_H_4
Panel
7
Dialog
DON: Hey!
Action Notes
Takes the apple from Don
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128. Scene
12_H_5
Panel
1
Dialog
GONZARA: Cute theory --
Action Notes
Gonzara brings the apple up to his face to look at it
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129. Scene
12_H_5
Panel
2
Dialog
GONZARA: Cute theory --
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130. Scene
12_H_5
Panel
3
Action Notes
turns the apple around, looking at it. Very short pause in dialogue.
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131. Scene
12_H_5
Panel
4
Dialog
GONZARA: But Gekka is dead.
Action Notes
Looks at Don (o.s) directly.
scene 4 Page 130/194

132. Scene
12_H_6
Panel
1
Dialog
GONZARA: Now open your eyes.
Action Notes
Don looks angry.
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133. Scene
12_H_6
Panel
2
Dialog
GONZARA: Now open your eyes.
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134. Scene
12_H_7
Panel
1
Dialog
GONZARA: Your suit, your equipment -- you're at a disadvantage.
Action Notes
Gestures to all of Don.
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135. Scene
12_H_7
Panel
2
Dialog
DON: Your help is so welcome
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136. Scene
12_H_7
Panel
3
Dialog
DON: I don't even need it.
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137. Scene
12_H_8
Panel
1
Action Notes
Gonzara watches as he's about to eat a second rotten apple with complete unamusement.
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138. Scene
12_H_8
Panel
2
Dialog
GONZARA: Lona?
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139. Scene
12_H_9
Panel
1
Action Notes
Lona moves to tap her glove
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140. Scene
12_H_9
Panel
2
Action Notes
Glove ripples out in blue, filling in the glove.
scene 4 Page 139/194

141. Scene
12_H_9
Panel
3
Action Notes
she puts her hand out
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142. Scene
12_H_9
Panel
4
Action Notes
a wireframe apple starts to form in her hand
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143. Scene
12_H_9
Panel
5
Action Notes
she grips it
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144. Scene
12_H_9
Panel
6
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145. Scene
12_H_9
Panel
7
Action Notes
and tosses it behind her
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146. Scene
12_H_10
Panel
1
Action Notes
Don about to bite the apple
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147. Scene
12_H_10
Panel
2
Action Notes
His glove turns the same blue that Lona's did
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148. Scene
12_H_10
Panel
3
Action Notes
He does the same movement Lona did in her studio, tossing the apple behind him.
scene 4 Page 147/194

149. Scene
12_H_10
Panel
4
Action Notes
He seems stunned
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150. Scene
12_H_10
Panel
5
Action Notes
Looks behind him
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151. Scene
12_H_10
Panel
6
Dialog
DON: I didn't consent to that.
Action Notes
and back at Lona, rubbing his wrist.
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152. Scene
12_H_10
Panel
7
Dialog
LONA: Not even sorry.
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153. Scene
12_H_10
Panel
8
Dialog
GONZARA: This isn't a game, Kiddo.
Action Notes
Gonzara slaps Don's chest.
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154. Scene
12_H_10
Panel
9
Dialog
GONZARA: This isn't VR.
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155. Scene
12_H_11
Panel
1
Dialog
GONZARA: Might be more grateful with your suit starts giving you CPR.
scene 4 Page 154/194

156. Scene
12_H_11
Panel
2
Dialog
GONZARA: Lona, show him lava.
scene 4 Page 155/194

157. Scene
12_H_11
Panel
3
Action Notes
Don's suit starts to become red
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158. Scene
12_H_11
Panel
4
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159. Scene
12_H_12
Panel
1
Action Notes
"!WARNING!" is flashing on his glasses.
scene 4 Page 158/194

160. Scene
12_H_13
Panel
1
Action Notes
His whole suit is red, he tenses up.
scene 4 Page 159/194

161. Scene
12_H_13_A
Panel
1
Dialog
Don screaming
Action Notes
He falls a little bit, his HP drops a little.
scene 4 Page 160/194

162. Scene
12_H_14
Panel
1
Action Notes
Don pants, his suit cooling, he's obviously shocked.
scene 4 Page 161/194

163. Scene
12_H_14
Panel
2
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164. Scene
12_H_14
Panel
3
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165. Scene
12_H_14
Panel
4
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166. Scene
12_H_14
Panel
5
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167. Scene
12_H_14
Panel
6
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168. Scene
12_H_14
Panel
7
Action Notes
Gulps
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169. Scene
12_H_14
Panel
8
Dialog
LONA: Temperature control.
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170. Scene
12_H_15
Panel
1
Dialog
LONA: I'm tracking your vitals, Don. You're safe with me.
Action Notes
Lona makes a nudging motion
scene 4 Page 169/194

171. Scene
12_H_15
Panel
2
Dialog
DON: Haha yeah okay.
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172. Scene
12_H_16
Panel
1
Dialog
GONZARA: Just keep focused.
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173. Scene
12_H_16
Panel
2
Dialog
GONZARA: There's a reason I brought you with me --
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174. Scene
12_H_17
Panel
1
Dialog
GONZARA: -- something I haven't told you yet.
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175. Scene
12_H_17
Panel
2
Dialog
DON: And what's that?
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176. Scene
12_H_17
Panel
3
Dialog
GONZARA: ALl I know is...
scene 4 Page 175/194

177. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
1
Dialog
GONZARA: something in this tournament is not supposed to be here.
scene 4 Page 176/194

178. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
2
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179. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
3
Dialog
GONZARA: So
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180. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
4
Dialog
GONZARA: Eye's open, yeah?
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181. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
5
Dialog
GONZARA: Eye's open, yeah?
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182. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
6
Dialog
GONZARA: Eye's open, yeah?
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183. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
7
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184. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
8
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185. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
9
Action Notes
Gonzara points to the apple on the chair and walks away
scene 4 Page 184/194

186. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
10
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187. Scene
12_H_18
Panel
11
Action Notes
Don looks at the apple
scene 4 Page 186/194

188. Scene
12_H_19
Panel
1
Action Notes
Gonzara exists the train, door sliding behind him
scene 4 Page 187/194

189. Scene
12_H_19
Panel
2
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190. Scene
12_H_19
Panel
3
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191. Scene
12_H_19
Panel
4
Action Notes
Pan out to show Don standing there.
scene 4 Page 190/194

192. Scene
12_H_19
Panel
5
Action Notes
Lifts off his glasses
scene 4 Page 191/194

193. Scene
12_H_19
Panel
6
Action Notes
things glitch out to show the reality
scene 4 Page 192/194

194. Scene
12_H_19
Panel
7
Action Notes
Don steps back in shock
scene 4 Page 193/194

195. Scene
12_H_20
Panel
1
Action Notes
The apple is revelaed to be rotten.
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